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Free by beat_fan Jun 30, 2004 11:06 AM
heh by firsty Jun 30, 2004 11:19 AM
Actually... by beat_fan Jun 30, 2004 11:24 AM
see thats pretty cool by firsty Jun 30, 2004 11:29 AM
ha by Bianca Jun 30, 2004 11:54 AM
pfftt by ellipsis Jun 30, 2004 12:57 PM
i'd by Holden Jul 1, 2004 1:01 AM
THE WAR IDIOTS (PC) by slog Jun 29, 2004 8:53 PM
slog, you ignorant slut by firsty Jun 30, 2004 8:20 AM
well you dirty ho by slog Jun 30, 2004 2:44 PM
haha by ellipsis Jun 30, 2004 1:01 PM
you know by slog Jun 30, 2004 2:45 PM
Yes by Bianca Jul 1, 2004 1:23 AM
Forever Ends by Bianca Jun 29, 2004 10:33 AM
bianca, by firsty Jun 29, 2004 1:56 PM
brilliant... by feral Jun 29, 2004 4:31 PM
why... by Bianca Jun 30, 2004 6:19 AM
Not an end - by CHILDS74 Jun 29, 2004 10:45 PM
wow by jamelah Jun 30, 2004 6:37 AM
I Am Stunned! by beat_fan Jun 30, 2004 11:19 AM
gee by Bianca Jun 30, 2004 11:31 AM
i am totally disillusioned by doreen peri Jun 30, 2004 11:35 AM
fair enough! by Bianca Jun 30, 2004 11:39 AM
Fucking Amazing by Holden Jul 1, 2004 12:49 AM
i'm stunned by doreen peri Jul 1, 2004 3:23 PM
dont get what? by Holden Jul 1, 2004 3:34 PM
i'm saying.. by doreen peri Jul 2, 2004 6:13 AM
No by Bianca Jul 2, 2004 6:45 AM
sure, bianca by doreen peri Jul 2, 2004 10:57 AM
know what? by firsty Jul 5, 2004 11:10 AM
is it not possible, by stevadore Jul 1, 2004 9:38 AM
mine is indeed... by Bianca Jul 1, 2004 10:52 AM
aaah by stevadore Jul 1, 2004 11:07 AM
SONGS FOR MIDNIGHT (please critique)it'd be greatly appreciated by CHILDS74 Jun 28, 2004 11:54 PM
here's your reply by firsty Jun 30, 2004 8:54 AM
Songs for Garcia? by CHILDS74 Jun 30, 2004 9:13 AM
as a matter of fact, by firsty Jun 30, 2004 9:15 AM
Well, well - by CHILDS74 Jun 30, 2004 9:30 AM
yeah by firsty Jun 30, 2004 9:38 AM
re:yeah by CHILDS74 Jun 30, 2004 9:42 AM
HEY! by CHILDS74 Jun 30, 2004 10:32 AM
thanks man by firsty Jun 30, 2004 11:05 AM
: ( by CHILDS74 Jun 30, 2004 8:33 PM
Sorry for breaking in, but by beat_fan Jun 30, 2004 1:41 PM
Sorry - by CHILDS74 Jun 30, 2004 8:34 PM
Hold Up! by beat_fan Jul 1, 2004 2:29 PM
Oh OK - by CHILDS74 Jul 1, 2004 8:15 PM
ok by Knip Jun 30, 2004 9:39 AM
Knip by CHILDS74 Jun 30, 2004 9:46 AM
childs by judih. Jul 9, 2004 8:52 PM
nigeria by livingston=mine Jun 28, 2004 7:34 PM
so much said by Hester Prynne Jul 4, 2004 1:29 PM
Apple Genesis by doreen peri Jun 28, 2004 7:15 PM
and there you have it by doreen peri Jun 29, 2004 5:06 PM
apeeling story, dorey by zen_ Jun 29, 2004 11:37 PM
the irony does not elude me... by zen_ Jun 29, 2004 11:39 PM
hehe by doreen peri Jun 30, 2004 8:56 AM
sure....you didn't see that ~ by zen_ Jun 30, 2004 11:25 AM
LOL! by doreen peri Jun 30, 2004 11:45 AM
Pharmacy ___ (THIS MUST BE CRITIQUED___ NO EXCUSES!) Yours, Helen. by Scone_Dog Jun 28, 2004 10:31 AM
could you please.. by doreen peri Jun 28, 2004 7:32 PM
ooooooh! by CHILDS74 Jun 28, 2004 11:17 PM
THE START OF THE NEW AGE : THE SYNOPSIS OF L.S.D. by Summer Dawn Jun 27, 2004 9:38 PM
administer the LSD by judih. Jun 28, 2004 8:18 AM
ALIVE SINCE THE CONQUEST by Summer Dawn Jun 27, 2004 1:59 PM
i've got to be honest with you... by Billectric Jun 27, 2004 2:49 PM
hmmm, honesty by judih. Jun 27, 2004 8:17 PM
Judih asked whether 'summer would come again?' by Summer Dawn Jun 27, 2004 9:55 PM
John Terry (PC) by Scone_Dog Jun 28, 2004 10:47 AM
Jealous creep by Summer Dawn Jun 28, 2004 4:40 PM
Summer Dawn, I really like this! by Billectric Jun 28, 2004 6:01 PM
Margie by Billectric Jun 27, 2004 1:53 PM
what! by ellipsis Jun 28, 2004 7:56 AM
Yeah, I kinda lost it, there... by Billectric Jun 28, 2004 5:55 PM
haha by ellipsis Jun 29, 2004 10:07 AM
Oliver Dacourt (PC) by Scone_Dog Jun 28, 2004 10:51 AM
well, billy... by feral Jun 29, 2004 4:34 PM
All Became Still by universe=one-song Jun 27, 2004 1:43 PM
Giovanni Van Bronckhorst (PC) by Scone_Dog Jun 28, 2004 10:53 AM
livin on the streets by universe=one-song Jun 27, 2004 1:30 PM
the people next door by doreen peri Jun 27, 2004 12:21 PM
and so much for nude sunbathing by judih. Jun 27, 2004 12:31 PM
i'm happy to hear.. by doreen peri Jun 28, 2004 7:45 PM
Dario Simic (PC) by Scone_Dog Jun 28, 2004 10:39 AM
yep by doreen peri Jun 28, 2004 7:14 PM
Creo que esto no lo so by Arcadia Jun 27, 2004 11:26 AM
Raul Bravo (PC) by Scone_Dog Jun 28, 2004 10:44 AM
what? by Arcadia Jun 28, 2004 3:19 PM
Songs For Midnite (PC) won't u please, please help me? by CHILDS74 Jun 26, 2004 9:20 PM
Stephane Chapuisat (PC) by Scone_Dog Jun 28, 2004 10:34 AM
On my way to school by Brage Jun 26, 2004 10:30 AM
When you are an outcast by ghostofhemingway Jun 26, 2004 12:24 PM
hillside by livingston Jun 26, 2004 2:31 AM
Liv by nightbird Jun 26, 2004 8:38 PM
she had by livingston Jun 27, 2004 3:45 AM
livingston by CHILDS74 Jun 27, 2004 9:05 AM
no, by Hester Prynne Jun 27, 2004 12:38 PM
just got back........ by livingston Jun 27, 2004 8:08 PM
Patrick Kluivert (PC) by Scone_Dog Jun 28, 2004 10:43 AM
Criminal Receptionist Sings Drug-Pellet Blues ___ (P.C.) by Scone_Dog Jun 25, 2004 10:27 AM
"Murder Tumbler "____ (This must be critiqued. Regards, Helen) by Scone_Dog Jun 25, 2004 10:23 AM
chimerical? by 4 degrees Jun 25, 2004 10:17 AM
Alcohol, in moderation by luckystrikes Jun 25, 2004 6:57 PM
yeah, by 4 degrees Jun 25, 2004 7:33 PM
Whatever it Was....:) by luckystrikes Jun 25, 2004 7:40 PM
PS....Yeah! by luckystrikes Jun 25, 2004 7:42 PM
Me again by luckystrikes Jun 25, 2004 7:48 PM
..... by 4 degrees Jun 25, 2004 8:14 PM
Absolutely (fabulous) by luckystrikes Jun 25, 2004 9:34 PM
* ) wink by luckystrikes Jun 25, 2004 9:39 PM
..... by 4 degrees Jun 25, 2004 9:46 PM
Umm, perhaps... by luckystrikes Jun 25, 2004 9:59 PM
You think you know her by luckystrikes Jun 25, 2004 9:59 PM
hhmmm by 4 degrees Jun 25, 2004 10:01 PM
I am by luckystrikes Jun 25, 2004 10:05 PM
... by 4 degrees Jun 25, 2004 10:09 PM
thank you by luckystrikes Jun 25, 2004 10:12 PM
So you know by luckystrikes Jun 25, 2004 10:15 PM
... by 4 degrees Jun 25, 2004 10:20 PM
Indeed.... by luckystrikes Jun 25, 2004 10:23 PM
The Best Band You Never Heard ( P C )"Anyone else have an opinion on this?" by nightbird Jun 24, 2004 8:34 PM
Show Instead of Tell by Holden Jun 25, 2004 6:07 AM
Thank you, but - by nightbird Jun 25, 2004 10:25 AM
here's my opinion of this by jamelah Jun 25, 2004 8:54 AM
Thanks Jamelah - by nightbird Jun 25, 2004 10:29 AM
rock by livingston Jun 27, 2004 4:36 AM
This guy doesnt post here anymore by Holden Jun 24, 2004 5:26 PM
Funny story by mtmynd Jun 25, 2004 6:27 AM
suidsidal trip! by zen_ Jul 8, 2004 4:53 PM
buffalo milk by Rosie Jun 23, 2004 10:01 PM
suggestion by in_extremis Jun 24, 2004 3:51 PM
sounds interesting by Rosie Jun 25, 2004 3:25 AM
Im jerking my cock off to the lucrative book proposal by KB Jun 23, 2004 1:40 PM
strangely enough by in_extremis Jun 24, 2004 3:40 PM
still life, 13 x 25, private collection by beatvibe Jun 23, 2004 10:17 AM
very original by Holden Jun 23, 2004 10:57 AM
You're right by beatvibe Jun 23, 2004 12:21 PM
hi marc by jamelah Jun 23, 2004 10:59 AM
Hmmm... by beatvibe Jun 23, 2004 12:20 PM
probably by jamelah Jun 24, 2004 6:22 AM
New Dimensions in Prose by beatvibe Jun 24, 2004 10:50 AM
Alright, check THIS out... REVISED by nightbird Jun 22, 2004 10:38 PM
........................ by Holden Jun 23, 2004 1:27 AM
SEAN? by nightbird Jun 23, 2004 9:28 AM
I am not sure by Holden Jun 23, 2004 10:38 AM
reads like by firsty Jun 23, 2004 6:11 AM
This story... by nightbird Jun 23, 2004 9:31 AM
sure by firsty Jun 23, 2004 9:37 AM
Touche by nightbird Jun 23, 2004 8:39 PM
thanks for reading by firsty Jun 24, 2004 5:16 AM
Well, Fisty... by nightbird Jun 24, 2004 8:30 PM
o by firsty Jun 25, 2004 5:55 AM
I didn't realize Kerouac by Holden Jun 25, 2004 7:38 AM
Ha! by nightbird Jun 25, 2004 10:41 AM
My point.... by Holden Jun 25, 2004 10:58 AM
well... by nightbird Jun 25, 2004 11:08 AM
the problem by in_extremis Jun 25, 2004 11:13 AM
kerouac was unique by firsty Jun 25, 2004 11:16 AM
kerouac sucks by ellipsis Jun 25, 2004 11:21 AM
ha ha by firsty Jun 25, 2004 11:24 AM
hey now by ellipsis Jun 25, 2004 11:31 AM
well, i'm partial by firsty Jun 25, 2004 11:35 AM
alright then by ellipsis Jun 25, 2004 11:37 AM
Thank you - by nightbird Jun 25, 2004 11:26 AM
yeah, i'm a real sweetheart by jamelah Jun 25, 2004 12:11 PM
OH MY GOD!!! by nightbird Jun 26, 2004 8:27 PM
And how does by Holden Jun 25, 2004 11:25 AM
look by Holden Jun 25, 2004 11:27 AM
It's funny- by nightbird Jun 25, 2004 11:29 AM
um... by Holden Jun 25, 2004 11:32 AM
oops. by ellipsis Jun 25, 2004 11:36 AM
No by nightbird Jun 26, 2004 8:30 PM
Why? by nightbird Jun 25, 2004 11:28 AM
So Jack by Holden Jun 25, 2004 11:29 AM
everything is relative by firsty Jun 25, 2004 11:30 AM
Very Much Briliant by KB Jun 24, 2004 4:10 AM
you sir by in_extremis Jun 24, 2004 3:31 PM
That is by nightbird Jun 26, 2004 8:33 PM
NOBODY'S EVERYBODY by Summer Dawn Jun 22, 2004 10:37 PM
great! by applestangerines Jun 23, 2004 7:10 PM
INTERVIEW WTH THE GREATEST GUITARIST IN THE WORLD by Summer Dawn Jun 23, 2004 10:21 PM
summer and music by applestangerines Jun 27, 2004 12:59 PM
just one thing, and then we can move on by in_extremis Jun 24, 2004 3:54 PM
Dear Apple Tangerine by Summer Dawn Jun 27, 2004 1:48 PM
Stories by DeLurking Jun 22, 2004 6:22 PM
i think this is by in_extremis Jun 24, 2004 4:08 PM
thanks... by DeLurking Jun 26, 2004 5:43 PM
"Watching Baby With Canine " ___ (Please___Comment) by Scone_Dog Jun 22, 2004 4:13 PM
please by in_extremis Jun 24, 2004 4:12 PM
Putt by Scone_Dog Jun 25, 2004 10:07 AM
Ponce by Scone_Dog Jun 25, 2004 10:16 AM
you're the one by firsty Jun 25, 2004 10:31 AM
haha by ellipsis Jun 25, 2004 10:34 AM
call me a camel by in_extremis Jun 25, 2004 10:48 AM
Hasan Sas by Scone_Dog Jun 25, 2004 10:56 AM
Its a linear story! by Scone_Dog Jun 25, 2004 11:24 AM
now to comment on the piece by ellipsis Jun 25, 2004 10:40 AM
Zinedine Zidane by Scone_Dog Jun 25, 2004 11:01 AM
hm by ellipsis Jun 25, 2004 11:05 AM
Pavel Nedved by Scone_Dog Jun 25, 2004 11:14 AM
no! by ellipsis Jun 25, 2004 11:16 AM
p.s. by ellipsis Jun 25, 2004 11:18 AM
ok i gave this piece a shot by firsty Jun 25, 2004 11:23 AM
EXACTLY by Scone_Dog Jun 25, 2004 11:29 AM
Park You Helpless Zebra, and Don't Brood Languishing (Please, this must be C.) by Scone_Dog Jun 22, 2004 3:58 PM
E-mail by Rosie Jun 22, 2004 9:06 AM
Duster's Deep by foolish_Paeter Jun 22, 2004 6:55 AM
Up above, by foolish_Paeter Jun 22, 2004 7:00 AM
So in the morning by foolish_Paeter Jun 22, 2004 7:15 AM
"I heard what you did to Larabeth" Gene says by foolish_Paeter Jun 22, 2004 9:24 AM
At night I wrote letters to Larabeth. by foolish_Paeter Jun 22, 2004 9:32 AM
They fixed the Old Pine that Gene bell-felled. by foolish_Paeter Jun 22, 2004 9:35 AM
Larabeth always wrote back to me on flowered stationery by foolish_Paeter Jun 23, 2004 11:07 AM
A month later Derrick and Beal started "going steady." by foolish_Paeter Jun 23, 2004 11:20 AM
Jazz Scene (PC) by slog Jun 21, 2004 9:09 PM
self by Tulate Jun 22, 2004 5:18 AM
DIAL_OGUE by Arcadia Jun 21, 2004 8:41 PM
Ferg ______ (THIS MUST BE CRITICIZED!!! PC) by Scone_Dog Jun 21, 2004 7:39 AM
Dropping acid at Metro Zoo in Miami again? by Holden Jun 21, 2004 8:23 AM
New wordplay, by ghostwalker Jun 21, 2004 11:03 AM
Prague by Scone_Dog Jun 22, 2004 3:46 PM
you got it... by firsty Jun 21, 2004 11:46 AM
is by foolish_Paeter Jun 22, 2004 9:13 AM
Telegraph Mother Speaks Electricity On The Dove by Scone_Dog Jun 22, 2004 3:51 PM
scar by firsty Jun 22, 2004 7:27 PM
Hakan sukur by Scone_Dog Jun 23, 2004 10:12 AM
the musicality by foolish_Paeter Jun 22, 2004 9:14 AM
Felt (PC) by Scone_Dog Jun 22, 2004 3:43 PM
oh yeah by foolish_Paeter Jun 23, 2004 11:24 AM
Throw something in there about fucking by KB Jun 23, 2004 2:02 PM
aBOUT hALf a pROTION OF sOMETHING UNPREDICTABLY NESSASRIY FOR TELLING THE TRUTH by Harry Jun 21, 2004 1:26 AM
cool by Billectric Jun 21, 2004 6:26 PM
it is pretty cool. by Harry Jun 22, 2004 7:55 AM
shleepy by Rosie Jun 20, 2004 1:05 PM
HERE COMES THE SUN by Summer Dawn Jun 19, 2004 8:57 PM
Great! Wonderful! Hilarious! I love it! by Poet_Girl_In_LaLaLand Jun 26, 2004 11:09 AM
A little poem for you: by Summer Dawn Jun 27, 2004 2:09 PM
very nice - by PhilipHarris Jun 27, 2004 2:14 PM
i need the sun by Rohsiph Jun 19, 2004 8:32 PM
n by jota Jun 19, 2004 1:02 PM
just what by Billectric Jun 19, 2004 7:20 PM
-?- by mtmynd Jun 19, 2004 7:32 PM
n by foolish_Paeter Jun 22, 2004 9:16 AM
for fucks sake, jota... by feral Jun 29, 2004 4:38 PM
There they stood. by Jon Converse Jun 19, 2004 12:45 PM
Okay, by Holden Jun 20, 2004 1:38 AM
it really does not matter, making sense by livingston Jun 19, 2004 10:53 AM
Tommorow's Sunday - why not confess to a priest and have him forgive you? by Summer Dawn Jun 19, 2004 11:48 AM
go to flames by livingston Jun 19, 2004 12:09 PM
"Algebra Lounge" ____ (This must be commented ON) PC by Scone_Dog Jun 19, 2004 4:07 AM
sorry... by KB Jun 19, 2004 5:28 AM
"i just like the way they hang" she says with a laugh, by KB Jun 18, 2004 11:33 PM
advice... by Holden Jun 20, 2004 1:26 AM
that was a true story by KB Jun 23, 2004 2:00 PM
4 (pc) by slog Jun 18, 2004 10:25 PM
no more balzac by livingston Jun 18, 2004 11:44 PM
you get five cool points by KB Jun 19, 2004 6:00 AM
? by livingston Jun 19, 2004 10:29 AM
I wasnt by KB Jun 19, 2004 8:57 PM
Hey Slog, by Holden Jun 20, 2004 1:47 AM
what is half nihilism by slog Jun 21, 2004 10:13 AM
Slog, by Holden Jun 22, 2004 5:52 PM
Brad and the turettes of the family by teegan Jun 18, 2004 10:06 PM
. , ? ! --------- Learn to Love them by KB Jun 19, 2004 6:02 AM
richmond house by livingston Jun 18, 2004 12:46 PM
Whooh Nelly! by Summer Dawn Jun 18, 2004 1:31 PM
Whooh Nelly! by Summer Dawn Jun 18, 2004 1:34 PM
suzie by livingston Jun 18, 2004 12:40 AM
hey this is five minutes in my house by teegan Jun 18, 2004 9:47 PM
shift-ing by livingston Jun 17, 2004 6:18 PM
Summer Dawn replies to Livingston by Summer Dawn Jun 17, 2004 7:37 PM
child by livingston Jun 18, 2004 12:17 AM
Well, now it's settled... by nightbird Jun 18, 2004 12:25 AM
finding by livingston Jun 18, 2004 12:58 AM
i'm a fan by firsty Jun 18, 2004 5:31 AM
sorry by livingston Jun 18, 2004 1:15 PM
hm by ellipsis Jun 18, 2004 1:41 PM
growing by livingston Jun 18, 2004 5:10 PM
Hi Livingston.... by Hester Prynne Jun 18, 2004 5:25 PM
yeah by livingston Jun 18, 2004 11:10 PM
sloppiness is not a style by firsty Jun 21, 2004 9:55 AM
anal retentive? by livingston Jun 27, 2004 4:20 AM
Grow Your Own... by nightbird Jun 18, 2004 8:46 PM
frog biology by livingston Jun 18, 2004 11:14 PM
Morrison's Poetry sucks by KB Jun 19, 2004 10:32 PM
Ok, Ok by nightbird Jun 19, 2004 10:36 PM
no, what i mean is by ellipsis Jun 19, 2004 3:23 PM
imagination by firsty Jun 21, 2004 8:57 AM
SO!!! by nightbird Jun 22, 2004 6:19 PM
waiting to see? by firsty Jun 22, 2004 7:29 PM
Waiting to see... by nightbird Jun 22, 2004 7:45 PM
instead of by firsty Jun 23, 2004 5:22 AM
why dont you write something? by livingston Jun 27, 2004 4:14 AM
my dream by livingston Jun 27, 2004 4:07 AM
thank you by livingston Jun 27, 2004 4:23 AM
lol @ firsty by KB Jun 19, 2004 6:08 AM
No offense Livingston, by Holden Jun 20, 2004 1:13 AM
i'd love to know by firsty Jun 21, 2004 8:34 AM
EXACTLY (PC) by Scone_Dog Jun 21, 2004 7:46 AM
stop sniffing keyboard cleaner by KB Jun 19, 2004 5:52 AM
WELL KB... by nightbird Jun 19, 2004 9:38 AM
The Axarquian Sun Magazine - Summer Solstice Issue by Summer Dawn Jun 17, 2004 4:07 PM
cute by livingston Jun 17, 2004 6:25 PM
the only one that could ever reach me... by livingston Jun 16, 2004 5:13 PM
scene 2 gurls car by livingston Jun 18, 2004 1:21 PM
The Masonic Greeting by elvin Jun 15, 2004 6:40 PM
Italy by Rosie Jun 15, 2004 3:43 PM
whoah! by Rosie Jun 17, 2004 12:10 AM
Dreams - Edited & Revisited by writerwellknown Jun 15, 2004 12:57 PM
women, chicks and bitches by livingston Jun 16, 2004 4:57 PM
I really enjoyed by Hester Prynne Jun 17, 2004 7:21 PM
dreams by livingston Jun 18, 2004 1:30 PM
An Afternoon with tea. by Jon Converse Jun 15, 2004 1:19 AM
She was a long tall one by slog Jun 14, 2004 10:40 PM
innocent casualty by pharroh Jun 14, 2004 10:21 PM
Milestone by HopelesslyHopeless Jun 14, 2004 2:53 PM
i considered setting myself on fire by KB Jun 19, 2004 5:57 AM
heh by HopelesslyHopeless Jun 20, 2004 12:11 AM
You blow my mind. You just wrote my biography. by Holden Jun 20, 2004 2:16 AM
the future by HopelesslyHopeless Jun 20, 2004 9:23 PM
flash monkey fiction by firsty Jun 14, 2004 8:23 AM
here's what i think: by pelerine Jun 14, 2004 2:21 PM
just a mix i guess by firsty Jun 14, 2004 2:27 PM
angry masterbation by KB Jun 19, 2004 5:50 AM
cannot fake it by livingston Jun 13, 2004 9:37 PM
RE:CAN'T by nightbird Jun 14, 2004 11:30 PM
i relate by livingston Jun 16, 2004 4:47 PM
From the Early Adventures of S.C. Heide by PhilipHarris Jun 13, 2004 3:49 PM
nice to see you by firsty Jun 14, 2004 7:44 AM
thanks - by PhilipHarris Jun 15, 2004 2:18 PM
at the old church by e_dog Jun 13, 2004 2:24 PM
Watertown, Chapter Ten by jota Jun 12, 2004 9:28 AM
wow, jota by judih. Jun 13, 2004 10:06 AM
2 by jota Jun 13, 2004 12:40 PM
don't mind if you do by judih. Jun 13, 2004 8:06 PM
hip cats by Billectric Jun 19, 2004 7:21 PM
kicked out of better places than this by livingston Jun 12, 2004 3:12 AM
kicked out by nightbird Jun 14, 2004 11:34 PM
heart by livingston Jun 16, 2004 5:26 PM
to ruminate by 4 degrees Jun 11, 2004 8:21 AM
p.s. by 4 degrees Jun 11, 2004 8:31 AM
a sock? by judih. Jun 11, 2004 9:56 PM
..... by 4 degrees Jun 11, 2004 10:59 PM
! by judih. Jun 12, 2004 1:49 AM
masterbating by livingston Jun 12, 2004 3:18 AM
master-bating by livingston Jun 17, 2004 6:32 PM
a sock? by 4 degrees Jun 17, 2004 10:18 PM
is it by Jon Converse Jun 19, 2004 12:50 PM
Your name sounds as tiny bells tingling by zen_ Jun 23, 2004 8:52 PM
stolen by livingston Jun 10, 2004 11:37 PM
churning, burning artist by livingston Jun 10, 2004 11:07 PM
It's True by nightbird Jun 11, 2004 9:20 AM
nightbird by fabled construct Jun 14, 2004 8:12 AM
3 pc by slog Jun 10, 2004 9:59 PM
what i like by firsty Jun 11, 2004 6:13 AM
all fast random by slog Jun 11, 2004 10:41 PM
dylan thomas by slog Jun 11, 2004 10:42 PM
i was by firsty Jun 12, 2004 6:22 AM
i like dylan we share by slog Jun 13, 2004 9:42 AM
the phone call to the dead zone by livingston Jun 10, 2004 6:57 PM
you keep churning them out by elvin Jun 10, 2004 7:34 PM
truth is by livingston Jun 10, 2004 11:12 PM
phone call by nightbird Jun 10, 2004 8:13 PM
burning by livingston Jun 18, 2004 1:02 PM
oh yeah by Hester Prynne Jun 11, 2004 4:17 PM
i met you once by livingston Jun 18, 2004 12:53 PM
Good man by Chipzee Jun 10, 2004 6:55 PM
The Machinist. ( pc ) by caoimhinm Jun 10, 2004 11:18 AM
2 pc by slog Jun 9, 2004 10:09 PM
.......... by 4 degrees Jun 9, 2004 10:15 PM
did you like jumps that much? by slog Jun 10, 2004 9:51 PM
....... by 4 degrees Jun 11, 2004 8:24 AM
he is by slog Jun 11, 2004 10:44 PM
Birth of the Goddess by elvin Jun 9, 2004 9:38 PM
bravo! by livingston Jun 10, 2004 1:49 AM
Good story by Billectric Jun 10, 2004 7:49 AM
thanks! by elvin Jun 10, 2004 7:31 PM
The little piece of shiny stone. by Chipzee Jun 9, 2004 3:39 PM
dinner by mindbum Jun 10, 2004 12:40 PM
Your right, and thankyou by Chipzee Jun 10, 2004 1:43 PM
Understanding Women, a course review by Caper Jun 9, 2004 10:26 AM
I'd cry too by Hester Prynne Jun 10, 2004 3:31 PM
An Excerpt I Didn't Write by Aaron Lundstrom Jun 9, 2004 4:57 AM
at the top of the mountain by livingston Jun 8, 2004 11:43 PM
It truly is by Hester Prynne Jun 10, 2004 3:33 PM
a story part 1 pc by slog Jun 8, 2004 10:08 PM
Bemuse by ephemeral Jun 8, 2004 3:28 PM
VAGUE MAGIC Chapter 1 (please critique) by caoimhinm Jun 8, 2004 1:21 PM
VAGUE MAGIC Chapter2 ( pc ) by caoimhinm Jun 9, 2004 2:41 PM
VAGUE MAGIC Chapter2 part 2 by caoimhinm Jun 9, 2004 3:06 PM
Wednesday (pc) by Matt Kindelmann Jun 8, 2004 6:59 AM
A fine piece of writing by Harpman Jun 18, 2004 8:02 AM
thief vol1 (pc) by caoimhinm Jun 8, 2004 5:29 AM
thief vol2 by caoimhinm Jun 8, 2004 6:18 AM
thief vol2 by caoimhinm Jun 8, 2004 6:22 AM
relapse queen2 by livingston Jun 8, 2004 12:57 AM
dark matter by purple shower Jun 8, 2004 5:20 AM
blame it on the black star by zen_ Jun 8, 2004 7:39 AM
interpetation by livingston Jun 8, 2004 11:08 PM
recovering relapse queen by livingston Jun 7, 2004 12:30 AM
I don't understand it? by Chipzee Jun 7, 2004 2:37 PM
makes perfect sense to me... by zen_ Jun 7, 2004 7:31 PM
Is Kauai the spirit you saw? by Hester Prynne Jun 7, 2004 7:34 PM
I would ask the same. by zen_ Jun 7, 2004 8:13 PM
dont know-more like a human light like form by livingston Jun 7, 2004 11:21 PM
Oh MY GOD!!!! by zen_ Jun 8, 2004 1:54 AM
truth comes in degrees by zen_ Jun 7, 2004 7:55 PM
.... by 4 degrees Jun 7, 2004 9:08 PM
your stories by elvin Jun 7, 2004 9:02 PM
yes, by 4 degrees Jun 7, 2004 9:04 PM
wow by livingston Jun 7, 2004 10:42 PM
I like this. by Billectric Jun 8, 2004 12:03 PM
spirits by caoimhinm Jun 8, 2004 12:38 PM
dude no aa by slog Jun 8, 2004 10:18 PM
go party some more- your not cooked by livingston Jun 8, 2004 11:19 PM
i'm sorry by slog Jun 9, 2004 8:57 AM
me too by livingston Jun 9, 2004 7:12 PM
relapsequeen3 by livingston Jun 9, 2004 7:30 PM
There is a woman by Hester Prynne Jun 9, 2004 9:17 PM
queen by livingston Jun 10, 2004 1:44 AM
ahhhhhhhh by livingston Jun 6, 2004 9:17 PM
heh heh....oh my dear livingston..... by Hester Prynne Jun 7, 2004 8:02 PM
i'm listening, too... by purple shower Jun 8, 2004 5:28 AM
It felt pretty by Hester Prynne Jun 8, 2004 9:26 AM
u are good by livingston Jun 8, 2004 11:22 PM
19,453 words by jota Jun 6, 2004 4:55 PM
another third by jota Jun 6, 2004 5:23 PM
long by judih. Jun 7, 2004 4:20 AM
hey yoda, errr, i mean jota by Knip Jun 7, 2004 10:47 PM
it's by jota Jun 8, 2004 10:20 AM
Wellll, doggies ! by Billectric Jun 8, 2004 12:07 PM
cuz of you by jota Jun 12, 2004 10:23 AM
hitch hiking by livingston Jun 5, 2004 11:38 PM
Travels anew by Roamergene/aol.com Jun 5, 2004 10:20 PM
Water Walk -- Levin A. Diatschenko by elvin Jun 5, 2004 6:24 AM
A fighting Marriage -- Levin A. Diatschenko by elvin Jun 5, 2004 6:23 AM
dunno by livingston Jun 8, 2004 11:46 PM
son of a bitch by livingston Jun 5, 2004 2:36 AM
a nice piece by fingurz Jun 6, 2004 8:34 PM
Son of a... by nightbird Jun 6, 2004 10:35 PM
cocaine, anybody? by feral Jun 4, 2004 6:47 PM
HAHA!!! why is it that there is something about Christians by zen_ Jun 4, 2004 9:53 PM
tarot by judih. Jun 4, 2004 10:11 PM
you, sweet lady by zen_ Jun 5, 2004 11:30 PM
maybe, but i still wanna see the home video by judih. Jun 6, 2004 7:56 PM
fresh christian meat tastes sweet.... by feral Jun 5, 2004 2:19 AM
Morman Elder held against his will by ex beauty queen who had her way with him. by tinker jack Jun 5, 2004 1:27 PM
water into wine by Billectric Jun 5, 2004 6:13 PM
if it doesn't say amanna...it's not a radar range by zen_ Jun 5, 2004 11:36 PM
her name was neighbor by mindbum Jun 4, 2004 6:41 PM
alright, then by Andeh Jun 5, 2004 8:49 PM
well by mindbum Jun 5, 2004 11:36 PM
(Livingston's request) more Soul Debris (Please Critique) by nightbird Jun 4, 2004 10:18 AM
more by livingston Jun 4, 2004 11:34 AM
what makes by livingston Jun 4, 2004 6:10 PM
Kathleen by nightbird Jun 5, 2004 11:04 PM
yes i am by livingston Jun 5, 2004 11:19 PM
Vlad the Imbiber(PC) by tkeiser Jun 3, 2004 9:57 PM
somewhat amusing by Billectric Jun 4, 2004 5:09 AM
No hamsters were killed in the writing of this story! by Moz Jun 3, 2004 4:01 AM
Ice cream in Guantanemo Bay by brussels charles Jun 3, 2004 3:25 AM
Transparent House, or The Betty Vine by Levin A. Diatschenko by elvin Jun 2, 2004 8:15 PM
i love this by livingston Jun 3, 2004 1:36 AM
wow by elvin Jun 3, 2004 6:52 AM
Thanks. by Moz Jun 4, 2004 2:46 AM
cool! by elvin Jun 5, 2004 6:20 AM
wierdness by livingston Jun 6, 2004 1:52 PM
livingston! by elvin Jun 7, 2004 8:52 PM
partyon dude by livingston Jun 8, 2004 1:59 AM
two more here by elvin Jun 8, 2004 9:47 PM
witness by livingston=mine Jun 2, 2004 5:31 PM
confussed by elvin Jun 2, 2004 8:22 PM
"Watching Baby With Canine" ___ This Must Be Critiqued! by Scone_Dog Jun 2, 2004 8:49 AM
intrigue by livingston Jun 3, 2004 1:12 AM


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