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Board Archive  •  Poetry  •  October 2003
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This board is where members can post their own poetry, or provide helpful critiques to other poets. Most poets who post here are looking for constructive feedback, so please don't hold back your responses.

This particular board is designed for poetry of a more "composed" nature, as opposed to the Action Poetry board, which is for more spontaneous or collaborative poetic interaction.


paper cut on a dear john by c.w. williams Oct 31, 2003 9:18 AM
yes, this too is excellent by judih. Nov 16, 2003 7:49 PM
sparks fly off hugs by jonathankyou Oct 31, 2003 4:52 AM
short poem by spaceboy381 Oct 30, 2003 11:43 PM
snowball poetry (only not) by friendlyrobot Oct 30, 2003 10:26 PM
My Father was not God by Gravydog Oct 30, 2003 9:42 PM
Sunday at a Buddhist Temple by Mage Oct 30, 2003 7:07 PM
i mage by judih. Oct 30, 2003 8:38 PM
somethin' was speakin' by hassanisabbah Oct 31, 2003 6:54 AM
I want to be there too by Jimboloco Oct 31, 2003 8:37 AM
they all die in the end by mindwash Oct 30, 2003 4:24 PM
The Snake by coolazice Oct 30, 2003 2:37 PM
Awake by coolazice Oct 30, 2003 2:26 PM
The Trip Home (ppc) by Yelkopopovickykozel Oct 30, 2003 2:00 PM
Midwest Nights(PC) by Holden Oct 30, 2003 12:49 PM
thoughts... by Holden Oct 30, 2003 9:12 PM
A different kind of pain by Cyberwriter Oct 30, 2003 11:15 AM
Rise. by Ambon Pereira Oct 30, 2003 3:39 AM
dandy by jessa_lynne Oct 30, 2003 4:20 AM
Wonderful! by rain70 Oct 30, 2003 10:30 AM
would you like any milk or sugar with that tea? by Ambon Pereira Oct 31, 2003 9:32 AM
requiem for a game show announcer: rod roddy RIP (PC) by hassanisabbah Oct 29, 2003 12:15 PM
i like by um Oct 30, 2003 2:34 AM
donky-shine by hassanisabbah Oct 30, 2003 2:42 PM
well by um Oct 31, 2003 1:15 AM
yeah by jessa_lynne Oct 30, 2003 4:17 AM
Blackout Vesper (edited) PC! by pottygok Oct 29, 2003 11:31 AM
i could by um Oct 30, 2003 2:41 AM
Never, Never Again. by Kristopher Oct 28, 2003 8:35 PM
Never, Never again by Rosie Oct 28, 2003 10:57 PM
Dell Hell (first post) PC by Holden Oct 28, 2003 7:45 PM
A.I. by manzeken revived Oct 28, 2003 7:56 PM
Needs more... by pottygok Oct 29, 2003 11:21 AM
writing... by Holden Oct 29, 2003 3:01 PM
No one's questioning... by pottygok Oct 31, 2003 2:25 PM
Opium by Cotton Mouth Soldier Oct 28, 2003 3:36 PM
Liars to the Lions (from: Patching the Flower-My Buddhist Poems). by rain70 Oct 28, 2003 10:52 AM
how blank does you mind need to be? by doreen peri Oct 28, 2003 10:22 AM
"A poem is a ritual refering to divine orders." by rain70 Oct 28, 2003 11:36 AM
great quote! by doreen peri Oct 28, 2003 4:28 PM
what could be sweeter? by mindchef Oct 28, 2003 3:46 PM
billy! by doreen peri Oct 28, 2003 4:29 PM
what is your definition of plagairism? by Lightning Rod Oct 28, 2003 4:02 PM
no by doreen peri Oct 28, 2003 4:26 PM
episode xanax 78: poetess-streetwalker, visiting park SR-71... by hassanisabbah Oct 28, 2003 10:02 AM
by jessa_lynne Oct 29, 2003 4:33 AM
sweetness the cat. by tzdustman Oct 31, 2003 12:38 PM
what is madness but nobility by hassanisabbah Oct 31, 2003 1:31 PM
morning trek by jessa_lynne Oct 28, 2003 5:11 AM
Shoot by Orbit Oct 28, 2003 5:32 AM
thanks by jessa_lynne Oct 29, 2003 4:30 AM
no time poetry by jonathankyou Oct 28, 2003 6:19 AM
maybe by jessa_lynne Oct 29, 2003 4:31 AM
The flowers know how bad they've got it by flood Oct 27, 2003 3:26 PM
:) by Rosie Oct 27, 2003 6:51 PM
thank you by flood Oct 28, 2003 4:26 AM
sunday 10/26 by jonathankyou Oct 27, 2003 1:12 PM
Herr Kapitan Narcissus (anti-poem 23) by hassanisabbah Oct 27, 2003 1:11 PM
makes me think of Mahlkey, from Gunter Grass by Ambon Pereira Oct 28, 2003 2:20 AM
The Chemist's Football/Abandoned Marsupial And Jack London's Glove by friendlyrobot Oct 27, 2003 10:22 AM
Sub-station by Siege Oct 27, 2003 3:11 AM
A Local Study of Study (Critique Welcome) by chrispoet Oct 27, 2003 2:22 AM
eks-sta-sea with ess-tea-see by hassanisabbah Oct 27, 2003 10:22 AM
the stars' studded brasslights beaming from the hidebound cover of night by Ambon Pereira Oct 28, 2003 2:15 AM
mostly monosyllabic nonsense by Ambon Pereira Oct 26, 2003 2:55 PM
AWESOME! Very clever little poem. by chrispoet Oct 27, 2003 3:11 AM
tableau of mirrors: the scribe chorizon displays his chronometer by hassanisabbah Oct 26, 2003 8:56 AM
very by um Oct 26, 2003 10:57 PM
-the physiology of poetry- by IntensityJunky Oct 25, 2003 11:14 PM
it's inevitable by jonathankyou Oct 25, 2003 8:38 PM
you by jessa_lynne Oct 27, 2003 4:27 AM
aww by jonathankyou Oct 27, 2003 1:09 PM
questions between a daydream by celeste Oct 25, 2003 3:24 PM
ode strapped on a gurney by hassanisabbah Oct 25, 2003 4:14 PM
not quite by celeste Oct 25, 2003 7:55 PM
in search of joisey exquisite by hassanisabbah Oct 25, 2003 9:07 PM
stuck in peanut butter by celeste Oct 26, 2003 5:16 AM
yonkers daydream by hassanisabbah Oct 26, 2003 7:16 AM
zzzzzzzzzzzz by celeste Oct 27, 2003 2:34 PM
a fly buzzzzzzed by hassanisabbah Oct 27, 2003 3:24 PM
death in CDC infirmary by hassanisabbah Oct 25, 2003 2:43 PM
Turn Around by jota Oct 25, 2003 1:33 PM
Turbo love by jota Oct 25, 2003 11:53 AM
how by Illuminara Oct 25, 2003 12:01 PM
wish you were here by jota Oct 25, 2003 12:07 PM
malvolio at the sock hop by hassanisabbah Oct 25, 2003 2:14 PM
bow, kiss by jota Oct 25, 2003 12:10 PM
and I by Illuminara Oct 25, 2003 12:13 PM
you by jota Oct 25, 2003 12:21 PM
winter by Illuminara Oct 25, 2003 11:24 AM
November Runs by jota Oct 25, 2003 12:02 PM
blue the sparkeling water by Illuminara Oct 25, 2003 12:09 PM
winter's ledge by jota Oct 25, 2003 12:19 PM
never told the truth by notimefornow Oct 25, 2003 9:43 AM
Erotica: ...... Vagina Poem, Nipples Addenda by judih. Oct 25, 2003 7:58 AM
erotica by panta rhei Oct 25, 2003 8:42 AM
swells by Illuminara Oct 25, 2003 9:43 AM
room service by doreen peri Oct 25, 2003 10:22 AM
shorter virgin by doreen peri Oct 25, 2003 10:31 AM
hmmmm... by mtmynd Oct 25, 2003 10:51 AM
just promise me by jota Oct 25, 2003 11:07 AM
hold on by mtmynd Oct 25, 2003 11:11 AM
quickie by judih. Oct 25, 2003 10:53 AM
the head of the breaking dawn by jota Oct 25, 2003 11:12 AM
ovum organum by jota Oct 25, 2003 11:04 AM
dear god by jota Oct 25, 2003 11:21 AM
toss a note of gratitude by judih. Oct 25, 2003 11:29 AM
ribs and wings by jota Oct 25, 2003 11:34 AM
dear god by panta rhei Oct 25, 2003 11:42 AM
Capital XXX by mtmynd Oct 25, 2003 11:08 AM
hot man other side of peep hole by judih. Oct 25, 2003 11:26 AM
How to steal a woman's heart by jota Oct 25, 2003 11:39 AM
well, I think by Illuminara Oct 25, 2003 11:48 AM
ah, carmen by jota Oct 25, 2003 12:00 PM
yer by doreen peri Oct 25, 2003 12:29 PM
Room 718 by Lightning Rod Oct 25, 2003 11:46 AM
geeeeeezzz by doreen peri Oct 25, 2003 12:27 PM
zzzzzttt crackle pop pop pop by jota Oct 25, 2003 12:31 PM
ah doreen by jota Oct 25, 2003 12:34 PM
i know by jota Oct 25, 2003 12:30 PM
ah judih by jota Oct 25, 2003 1:41 PM
friday fish fry reified by hassanisabbah Oct 25, 2003 1:49 PM
ooh look ma, an orgy by midnite Oct 26, 2003 6:55 AM
Truckstop Poetry available for review- by Spun Oct 24, 2003 5:53 PM
Levi Asher's Litkicks Poetry Orchestra by Lightning Rod Oct 24, 2003 1:25 PM
supernova--the priests tale by no good Oct 24, 2003 6:25 AM
yO.. by feloniousslunk Oct 24, 2003 5:48 PM
landscape by no good Oct 24, 2003 6:15 AM
my last revision (maybe) PC by jessa_lynne Oct 24, 2003 4:31 AM
... by pottygok Oct 24, 2003 12:18 PM
okay okay by jessa_lynne Oct 24, 2003 12:22 PM
yes. by pottygok Oct 26, 2003 6:06 PM
high school by jessa_lynne Oct 27, 2003 4:56 AM
Which college? by pottygok Oct 29, 2003 11:12 AM
The Evergreen State College by jessa_lynne Oct 30, 2003 4:35 AM
Sure... by pottygok Oct 31, 2003 2:28 PM
Insomnia by desolation underwood Oct 24, 2003 4:19 AM
Kokopelli, The Final by desolation underwood Oct 24, 2003 3:20 AM
One-Man Wake by desolation underwood Oct 24, 2003 1:47 AM
Contemporary Zen (PC) by desolation underwood Oct 24, 2003 1:01 AM
I like by Arcadia Oct 24, 2003 10:18 AM
... by pottygok Oct 29, 2003 11:26 AM
Nonsensical Words from Nonsensical Me (PC) by desolation underwood Oct 24, 2003 12:43 AM
Little Warriors by Hester Prynne Oct 23, 2003 8:47 PM
Hi Hes by ~K Oct 23, 2003 9:00 PM
Hi ~K! by Hester Prynne Oct 23, 2003 9:07 PM
:) by ~K Oct 23, 2003 9:16 PM
hey by Kristopher Oct 23, 2003 9:45 PM
Of days to come (PC) by Sabertash Oct 23, 2003 8:11 PM
Dear Diary by Kristopher Oct 23, 2003 7:33 PM
sadness spent home by squidwork Oct 23, 2003 5:46 PM
a connected prose i found by squidwork Jan 14, 2004 12:15 PM
Rape to frown uppon by p0dde Oct 23, 2003 2:44 PM
Horrible Stuff by Kristopher Oct 23, 2003 1:21 PM
american dreams by sjensen500 Oct 23, 2003 12:27 AM
guess what by Andeh Oct 23, 2003 7:38 PM
waltandtomandartandgenandme by son of poi Oct 22, 2003 10:13 PM
I just have to say by Sabertash Oct 23, 2003 7:54 PM
beccA by Tim Krauss Oct 22, 2003 7:30 PM
sounds like my kind of girl by Dead burroughs Oct 24, 2003 12:11 PM
Beauty in the Shuffle by Uncle B Oct 22, 2003 12:34 PM
your beauty was mine today by daisyrain Oct 22, 2003 10:40 PM
believe. by Ambon Pereira Oct 22, 2003 11:13 AM
{}{}{} by rain70 Oct 23, 2003 7:43 AM
(I HAVE!!) red ribbons by Tim Krauss Oct 22, 2003 10:42 AM
subject goes here. by exit_music Oct 28, 2003 8:00 AM
dialogue. by Ambon Pereira Oct 22, 2003 10:35 AM
now by Illuminara Oct 22, 2003 11:35 AM
Blues, Beauty, Love by Kristopher Oct 21, 2003 10:15 PM
beautiful by Tim Krauss Oct 22, 2003 9:56 AM
i am All is by Tim Krauss Oct 21, 2003 5:35 PM
Flowers in absurdity by ginsbergesque Oct 21, 2003 4:27 PM
my thoughts by Tim Krauss Oct 21, 2003 5:41 PM
my thoughts by Tim Krauss Oct 21, 2003 5:41 PM
Paradigm Virus by Dead burroughs Oct 21, 2003 1:31 PM
here ya go by Tim Krauss Oct 22, 2003 10:03 AM
Total stream by Dead burroughs Oct 22, 2003 11:09 AM
fucking awesome by Tim Krauss Oct 22, 2003 1:01 PM
hegel, a bagel, and practice your kegel by blue in green Oct 21, 2003 12:28 PM
hmmm... by Tim Krauss Oct 22, 2003 10:05 AM
mind and yet endlessly cradle could crew dada's Der Geist by Ambon Pereira Oct 22, 2003 11:01 AM
the red pillow (modern Pompeii) by rain70 Oct 21, 2003 12:08 PM
Ahhhhahahaha! by Tim Krauss Oct 22, 2003 10:07 AM
"and judge the halo/ like unsettled dust" by Ambon Pereira Oct 22, 2003 10:46 AM
For Jessa Lynne by Siege Oct 21, 2003 5:33 AM
... by rain70 Oct 21, 2003 10:11 AM
:) by jessa_lynne Oct 22, 2003 4:21 AM
(a thoughtful(full of thought)) hmm. by Tim Krauss Oct 22, 2003 10:11 AM
Can you guys tell me what you think of this?? by DreamRealms Oct 21, 2003 5:33 AM
well hey... by Tim Krauss Oct 22, 2003 10:14 AM
pc by jessa_lynne Oct 21, 2003 5:19 AM
That was rather... by Siege Oct 21, 2003 5:25 AM
... by pottygok Oct 21, 2003 7:49 AM
how's about... by jessa_lynne Oct 22, 2003 4:24 AM
Well... by pottygok Oct 22, 2003 10:38 PM
(an interested sounding) huh. by Tim Krauss Oct 22, 2003 10:19 AM
one last revison (maybe) pc by jessa_lynne Oct 24, 2003 4:22 AM
Grace by coolazice Oct 20, 2003 8:57 PM
me as the storm by Lexy Oct 20, 2003 8:05 PM
mr. mr. green by blue in green Oct 20, 2003 5:55 PM
hmmm by shishi Oct 21, 2003 12:20 AM
show not tell by blue in green Oct 21, 2003 6:08 AM
Zodaic by Spazmatical Oct 20, 2003 4:53 PM
my comment by Deez Oct 21, 2003 6:19 AM
blushes by Spazmatical Oct 21, 2003 6:24 PM
shallow by devotique Oct 20, 2003 4:29 PM
dont by Spazmatical Oct 20, 2003 4:48 PM
Vancouver re-visited by manzeken revived Oct 20, 2003 2:07 PM
Untitled by Deez Oct 20, 2003 1:25 PM
feet poem by SkunkyBabe Oct 20, 2003 12:15 PM
(Compassion piece for string quartet, ignored.) by rain70 Oct 20, 2003 11:48 AM
Yet, by frontal-abstraction Oct 20, 2003 3:15 PM
... by rain70 Oct 21, 2003 10:13 AM
Hey rain by frontal-abstraction Oct 21, 2003 2:42 PM
Nobody Nose by shishi Oct 20, 2003 6:15 AM
hahaha by Deez Oct 20, 2003 1:28 PM
ummmmmm by shishi Oct 21, 2003 12:11 AM
Inlet by coolazice Oct 20, 2003 1:17 AM
Saturday morning on a sunlit deck by Silas Oct 19, 2003 10:20 PM
you know... by jessa_lynne Oct 20, 2003 4:59 AM
:-) by Silas Oct 20, 2003 11:00 PM
.. by shishi Oct 21, 2003 12:16 AM
Wonder by Pieridae Oct 19, 2003 10:07 PM
Sand in the teeth ... poem written at a Naragansette beach by DocStray Oct 19, 2003 8:56 PM
Man! by Silas Oct 19, 2003 10:48 PM
Thank you by DocStray Oct 20, 2003 11:39 AM
Blackout Vesper (PC) by pottygok Oct 19, 2003 7:22 PM
two things by chronicshankar Oct 19, 2003 7:39 PM
Uh...typo, I think... by pottygok Oct 19, 2003 11:37 PM
... by rain70 Oct 20, 2003 11:01 AM
... by pottygok Oct 20, 2003 5:11 PM
PERSONIFICATION! by rain70 Oct 21, 2003 8:49 AM
Hark at you... by Siege Oct 21, 2003 8:57 AM
'ay Siege!!! by rain70 Oct 21, 2003 10:05 AM
... by pottygok Oct 22, 2003 10:48 PM
driving by firecracker Oct 21, 2003 9:28 AM
Nothing... by pottygok Oct 22, 2003 10:36 PM
life through two made into one by *DivineSoul* Oct 19, 2003 6:32 PM
I don't wonder anymore by Rosie Oct 19, 2003 12:07 AM
On a First Impression of Schumann (PC) by Illuminara Oct 18, 2003 8:22 PM
... by shishi Oct 20, 2003 6:18 AM
why xie xie! by Illuminara Oct 20, 2003 9:26 PM
that's funny, since I was thinking by blue in green Oct 20, 2003 10:04 PM
serf by Illuminara Oct 18, 2003 7:21 PM
Breather (Cairn poem # 6 : Li Po in Wales) by rain70 Oct 18, 2003 11:31 AM
the bride with a broken bone by Illuminara Oct 18, 2003 1:32 AM
Lake Side Bride by Kristopher Oct 18, 2003 12:53 AM
or by Illuminara Oct 18, 2003 1:34 AM
lake side glide by blue in green Oct 18, 2003 8:53 AM
initiation: henry miller's big sur toilet by blue in green Oct 17, 2003 9:03 PM
Om or ohm by Kristopher Oct 17, 2003 7:22 PM
if you found the alter of Issac by Illuminara Oct 18, 2003 1:51 AM
ahh.. the questions.. by doreen peri Oct 18, 2003 11:20 AM
take the law of Ohm! forsake the maw of om by blue in green Oct 18, 2003 12:38 PM
static hum by Kristopher Oct 18, 2003 8:24 PM
clap by Tim Krauss Oct 22, 2003 10:23 AM
surrealist lament (for roland topor) by celeste Oct 17, 2003 3:31 PM
celeste.. by doreen peri Oct 18, 2003 11:18 AM
Pure by Feign Oct 17, 2003 2:26 PM
critique by Illuminara Oct 18, 2003 8:32 PM
thank you by Feign Oct 19, 2003 6:59 AM
thank you by Feign Oct 19, 2003 6:59 AM
thank you by Feign Oct 19, 2003 7:00 AM
damned computer :oP by Feign Oct 19, 2003 7:01 AM
Insomnia by Birdland Oct 17, 2003 12:54 PM
this is.. by doreen peri Oct 18, 2003 11:16 AM
you are going to cheat on your boyfriend by jonathankyou Oct 17, 2003 9:02 AM
why? by long distance drunk Oct 17, 2003 1:41 PM
this is.. by doreen peri Oct 18, 2003 11:15 AM
Nothing by Deez Oct 17, 2003 7:57 AM
yea.. by jonathankyou Oct 17, 2003 9:00 AM
funny.. by Feign Oct 17, 2003 2:29 PM
sometimes.. by doreen peri Oct 18, 2003 11:13 AM
Yup..fearless by feloniousslunk Oct 16, 2003 3:42 PM
i don't know by Rosie Oct 17, 2003 9:17 AM
Hey... by feloniousslunk Oct 17, 2003 9:36 AM
i liked by Rosie Oct 17, 2003 9:53 AM
You're qwik... by feloniousslunk Oct 17, 2003 10:01 AM
great.. by doreen peri Oct 18, 2003 11:12 AM
how to attract the most beautiful sharks by jonathankyou Oct 16, 2003 12:42 PM
i by jessa_lynne Oct 17, 2003 5:01 AM
my comment by Deez Oct 17, 2003 6:46 AM
yes by frontal-abstraction Oct 18, 2003 8:07 AM
good lines! by doreen peri Oct 18, 2003 11:07 AM
i like the way you get down into the natural and uphold it. by Jimboloco Oct 31, 2003 8:35 AM
My "writing assignment" for ya'll... by pottygok Oct 16, 2003 12:31 PM
mine by pottygok Oct 16, 2003 12:55 PM
b. n g.'s writing project, with help from the Jolly Roger by blue in green Oct 16, 2003 2:16 PM
she smelled like orchids by searching Oct 15, 2003 10:40 PM
sounds like by jessa_lynne Oct 16, 2003 4:47 AM
october moon song by tzdustman Oct 15, 2003 1:36 PM
of your poem by PenName Oct 16, 2003 12:11 AM
comment by Deez Oct 16, 2003 9:15 AM
How she loved them back by a majority of one Oct 15, 2003 12:22 PM
:) by Rosie Oct 15, 2003 5:45 PM
yes by um Oct 16, 2003 2:37 AM
Morning is the Mistress of the Moon by doreen peri Oct 15, 2003 6:08 AM
was this your quest entry? by doreen peri Oct 17, 2003 9:26 AM
yep, sure was by doreen peri Oct 17, 2003 9:26 AM
great! by doreen peri Oct 17, 2003 9:27 AM
you're welcome by doreen peri Oct 17, 2003 9:27 AM
i wonder.. by doreen peri Oct 17, 2003 2:32 PM
hmm ...well by doreen peri Oct 17, 2003 2:33 PM
really? you are? by doreen peri Oct 17, 2003 2:34 PM
you do? by doreen peri Oct 17, 2003 2:34 PM
of course.. by doreen peri Oct 17, 2003 2:36 PM
ok by doreen peri Oct 17, 2003 2:36 PM
yep by doreen peri Oct 17, 2003 2:37 PM
wait! by doreen peri Oct 17, 2003 2:38 PM
yes by doreen peri Oct 17, 2003 2:39 PM
outa my head by judih. Oct 17, 2003 10:51 PM
i did? by doreen peri Oct 18, 2003 8:24 AM
Morning rises like a lover's hips by blue in green Oct 17, 2003 10:46 PM
well thank you by doreen peri Oct 18, 2003 8:25 AM
mister by blue in green Oct 18, 2003 9:38 AM
ok meester by doreen peri Oct 18, 2003 11:05 AM
tokay easter by blue in green Oct 18, 2003 11:26 AM
two translations from Chinese (of rather dubious merit, of course) by Ambon Pereira Oct 15, 2003 6:06 AM
in which ambon, feeling slightly claustrophobic in his assigned by Ambon Pereira Oct 15, 2003 5:48 AM
wake. by Ambon Pereira Oct 15, 2003 5:48 AM
yakkety-yak. by Ambon Pereira Oct 15, 2003 5:49 AM
very impressive by zygotenmycoffee Oct 15, 2003 7:11 AM
bravo by blue in green Oct 15, 2003 9:48 AM
*in a voice like a chicken's cackle* by rain70 Oct 15, 2003 10:10 AM
hello ya'll, (and sorry i suck, in the amount of time it takes me to respond) by Ambon Pereira Oct 18, 2003 7:13 AM
interactive crap poetry! by jessa_lynne Oct 15, 2003 5:06 AM
mine by jessa_lynne Oct 15, 2003 5:06 AM
mine by doreen peri Oct 15, 2003 4:51 PM
mine by ellipsis Oct 15, 2003 6:00 PM
yes it did by doreen peri Oct 19, 2003 1:45 PM
and mine by celeste Oct 17, 2003 3:43 PM
some paradise by josh tonkin Oct 15, 2003 12:28 AM
moving van by lotusgrl Oct 14, 2003 7:23 PM
phantom femur mallets on obsidian by blue in green Oct 14, 2003 10:05 AM
gat aim by magic love Oct 15, 2003 1:43 AM
very by um Oct 15, 2003 2:19 AM
as night poured its liquid smile upon us in the form of cloud-blurred starlight by all hail the stars Oct 14, 2003 12:53 AM
i really by josh tonkin Oct 15, 2003 12:13 AM
i don't know how to talk to girls by all hail the stars Oct 14, 2003 12:47 AM
i don't know how to talk to boys, by m'oon Oct 14, 2003 5:19 PM
i think by Yabyum Oct 20, 2003 2:35 PM
of all the hearts... by auziea Dec 9, 2003 3:17 AM
shes lost control by josh tonkin Oct 14, 2003 12:41 AM
I always think by dionisio Oct 14, 2003 3:35 PM
hey lets write some instant poetry! by jonathankyou Oct 13, 2003 2:24 PM
here goes nothin... by tzdustman Oct 15, 2003 1:49 PM
why not? by Deez Oct 16, 2003 9:21 AM
yo you guys by jonathankyou Oct 16, 2003 12:40 PM
scary by jonathankyou Oct 13, 2003 2:19 PM
Columbine by the mingo Oct 13, 2003 5:42 AM
nice by josh tonkin Oct 15, 2003 12:15 AM
fifteen lines by Silas Oct 13, 2003 2:06 AM
just a comment by Deez Oct 13, 2003 8:25 AM
:-) by Silas Oct 13, 2003 11:32 AM
a very by josh tonkin Oct 15, 2003 12:17 AM
A few comments by chrispoet Oct 15, 2003 5:13 AM
Hey by Silas Oct 19, 2003 10:36 PM
Essense of Love? PC by weezer Oct 12, 2003 5:27 PM
hmm... by searching Oct 12, 2003 10:05 PM
not by weezer Oct 13, 2003 8:14 AM
... by pottygok Oct 15, 2003 1:57 AM
Dionysus and Dishes (Critique Welcome) by chrispoet Oct 12, 2003 4:13 PM
sounds like my room by Deez Oct 13, 2003 1:51 PM
I took my thirst to the well by Silas Oct 11, 2003 10:25 PM
Nice turn at the end by chrispoet Oct 12, 2003 4:11 PM
i agree by m'oon Oct 13, 2003 7:28 AM
but you knew that already, by m'oon Oct 13, 2003 7:49 AM
Well by Silas Oct 13, 2003 11:34 AM
PRAYER AND MEDITATION FOR PEACE (Critique Welcome) by chrispoet Oct 11, 2003 6:34 PM
Not by Silas Oct 11, 2003 10:35 PM
my dilema by m'oon Oct 13, 2003 7:25 AM
Finding Peace Amongst All The crap... by Silas Oct 13, 2003 10:33 PM
or maybe... by m'oon Oct 14, 2003 5:26 PM
Low by dionisio Oct 11, 2003 5:38 AM
Maybe by Silas Oct 11, 2003 10:38 PM
awol by Illuminara Oct 11, 2003 10:38 PM
less low now you know by dionisio Oct 13, 2003 1:55 PM
Unititled by Deez Oct 10, 2003 2:27 PM
If you by Silas Oct 11, 2003 10:42 PM
Owning and Owned by Nothing by Deez Oct 10, 2003 2:14 PM
Yes. by Silas Oct 11, 2003 10:44 PM
where we were by Dubbs Oct 10, 2003 1:46 AM
break by grey Oct 10, 2003 1:17 AM
This Used to be a Profession of Undying Love (PC) by Will Burrows Oct 9, 2003 7:07 PM
.... by pottygok Oct 9, 2003 11:48 PM
Thank you by Will Burrows Oct 12, 2003 6:24 PM
You're Welcome... by pottygok Oct 12, 2003 9:44 PM
Teacher of the Moth by rain70 Oct 9, 2003 9:20 AM
I write the by kodachrome Oct 8, 2003 9:28 PM
enjoyed by sonofthesun Oct 9, 2003 12:41 AM
sharp by Dubbs Oct 10, 2003 2:00 AM
The Auschwitz Diner by the mingo Oct 8, 2003 4:47 PM
Hermit's Psalm in the Face of No Danger At All by grushenka Oct 8, 2003 2:32 PM
Good One by Pieridae Oct 9, 2003 5:25 AM
listen to the kiss by dreamseeker Oct 8, 2003 1:25 PM
Is this even Poetry? by Harry Oct 8, 2003 10:23 AM
answers by Arcadia Oct 8, 2003 10:50 AM
is this even poetry? by Harry Dec 9, 2003 5:51 AM
prayer for the lost by celeste Oct 8, 2003 5:37 AM
good work by dreamseeker Oct 8, 2003 1:29 PM
Walked thru the Wetlands by GeorgiaPeach Oct 9, 2003 2:48 PM
Worn Thin by Superabe Oct 7, 2003 9:16 PM
is there any.......... by kodachrome Oct 7, 2003 8:32 PM
of alone. by anewday Oct 7, 2003 7:22 PM
I like... by Deez Oct 10, 2003 12:15 PM
... by Kristopher Oct 7, 2003 4:51 PM
divinergy by markk Oct 7, 2003 1:48 PM
yes, i can by judih. Oct 7, 2003 9:44 PM
sketches of silence by markk Oct 7, 2003 1:47 PM
night, rhinebeck ny, aug. 2003 by markk Oct 7, 2003 1:46 PM
gorilla man pt. 2 by gorilla_man Oct 7, 2003 1:15 PM
warm, by jonathankyou Oct 7, 2003 12:03 PM
those last 3 stanzas by ellipsis Oct 7, 2003 6:57 PM
thank you by jonathankyou Oct 13, 2003 2:21 PM
The Blood Pool by Uncle B Oct 7, 2003 10:13 AM
the pool by anewday Oct 7, 2003 12:15 PM
The Blood Pool by Q.T. Oct 7, 2003 6:29 PM
sarah by anewday Oct 7, 2003 10:06 PM
kelsey by Q.T. Oct 7, 2003 11:09 PM
it breaks my heart by GinBin Oct 24, 2003 1:28 PM
Thoughts by Mayo Nov 12, 2003 6:42 AM
Late in the morning by kilmes Oct 7, 2003 9:26 AM
drowning thought by Tim Krauss Oct 7, 2003 9:16 AM
Riots by weezer Oct 7, 2003 5:49 AM
Tides of Joy by Dead burroughs Oct 6, 2003 2:24 PM
The spacing is all wrong by Dead burroughs Oct 6, 2003 2:25 PM
It sparkles, It cowers by a majority of one Oct 6, 2003 1:08 PM
tru evil by B3jamboree Oct 6, 2003 12:04 AM
I was cold, and so tired. by Jon Converse Oct 5, 2003 9:03 PM
Onomatopoeiaville by Boom tin dog Oct 5, 2003 5:59 PM
bam by um Oct 5, 2003 11:25 PM
Jazz, rivers, and trains by Hester Prynne Oct 5, 2003 12:48 PM
We drove across the desert in a rented chevy by R.K.H Oct 5, 2003 9:31 AM
Crazy by Dead burroughs Oct 7, 2003 11:29 AM
amuck by m'oon Oct 5, 2003 8:53 AM
View From The Hollywood Freeway (PC) by Pander Oct 4, 2003 10:45 PM
I hate the city. by Girl Oct 4, 2003 10:50 PM
Up the ante... by pottygok Oct 5, 2003 8:11 PM
untitled .. by DocStray Oct 4, 2003 9:01 PM
this, by ellipsis Oct 4, 2003 9:09 PM
hah right now its next to my bed by DocStray Oct 4, 2003 9:33 PM
By the by Ellipsis , the base form i did for the poem i followed was thus by DocStray Oct 4, 2003 9:17 PM
Interesting form... by pottygok Oct 6, 2003 11:45 PM
Just another assignment by DocStray Oct 12, 2003 3:22 PM
Yeah... by pottygok Oct 12, 2003 11:08 PM
True by DocStray Oct 13, 2003 9:46 AM
I agree... by pottygok Oct 13, 2003 9:01 PM
alone by m'oon Oct 4, 2003 10:23 AM
they say the hand is quicker than the eye, but the heart, that's quickest by Ambon Pereira Oct 5, 2003 5:45 AM
blood by m'oon Oct 4, 2003 10:18 AM
chasity whore by m'oon Oct 4, 2003 9:59 AM
Gingivitis by B3jamboree Oct 4, 2003 4:20 AM
Right in the old puss (face!) by Pieridae Oct 4, 2003 4:59 AM
Autumm by zen_ Oct 3, 2003 2:53 PM
the goodship by rain70 Oct 3, 2003 12:28 PM
yeah, by m'oon Oct 4, 2003 4:58 PM
rain! by Ambon Pereira Oct 5, 2003 5:39 AM
Ashes of Angels and Stars by Uncle B Oct 3, 2003 10:59 AM
Strength by jim vinny Oct 3, 2003 9:42 AM
how fucking true by ellipsis Oct 3, 2003 11:00 AM
comets crashing by celeste Oct 3, 2003 6:22 AM
. . . by jessa_lynne Oct 3, 2003 8:47 AM
I wandered off to lots of places by Pieridae Oct 4, 2003 4:53 AM
Uncomfortable by Pieridae Oct 3, 2003 3:23 AM
departure by darkblood Oct 3, 2003 3:14 AM
cruel autumn by Rosie Oct 3, 2003 1:47 PM
Super/Dying Power (PC) by weezer Oct 2, 2003 2:44 PM
Coming from a point of peace.... by Cotton Mouth Soldier Oct 2, 2003 3:19 PM
thanks by weezer Oct 2, 2003 4:22 PM
A certain sadness by Pieridae Oct 3, 2003 2:40 AM
Tommy Gun Angels by Mage Oct 2, 2003 12:56 PM
Romanos by Arcadia Oct 2, 2003 1:38 PM
i don't really think i am by jonathankyou Oct 2, 2003 8:26 AM
Artist by Pieridae Oct 3, 2003 2:56 AM
o! (PC) by neuSkinjoy Oct 1, 2003 11:24 PM
word by jonathankyou Oct 2, 2003 8:30 AM
YAWN by Boom tin dog Oct 1, 2003 8:40 PM
ha ha by Lawless Oct 2, 2003 8:58 PM
el cucarracha by pharroh Oct 1, 2003 4:07 PM
puajjj! by Arcadia Oct 1, 2003 4:18 PM
6 x 36 Nocturnes, series five by Cenacle Oct 1, 2003 12:07 PM


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