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Board Archive  •  Poetry  •  December 2003
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This board is where members can post their own poetry, or provide helpful critiques to other poets. Most poets who post here are looking for constructive feedback, so please don't hold back your responses.

This particular board is designed for poetry of a more "composed" nature, as opposed to the Action Poetry board, which is for more spontaneous or collaborative poetic interaction.


Riding the winds with Dad by Uncle B Dec 30, 2003 10:05 PM
boy by daisyrain Dec 30, 2003 11:13 PM
winds by vance Dec 31, 2003 12:23 AM
me too by MichaelAMichael Dec 31, 2003 8:50 AM
it all started when by Rosie Dec 30, 2003 9:44 PM
silver star by MichaelAMichael Dec 31, 2003 9:07 AM
:) by Rosie Dec 31, 2003 10:02 AM
Details by MichaelAMichael Jan 1, 2004 8:14 AM
!! by zero hero Jan 6, 2004 9:16 AM
glad by Rosie Jan 7, 2004 10:21 AM
terror trip to tampa by c.w. williams Dec 30, 2003 9:21 PM
pt. 1 by c.w. williams Dec 30, 2003 9:32 PM
pt. 2 by c.w. williams Dec 30, 2003 9:42 PM
pt. 3 by c.w. williams Dec 30, 2003 9:58 PM
Man by PainKiller Dec 31, 2003 8:45 AM
It was by c.w. williams Jan 1, 2004 12:53 PM
excellent. by Ambon Pereira Dec 31, 2003 4:00 PM
the trip by c.w. williams Jan 1, 2004 1:21 PM
alienation soup by in a sense Dec 30, 2003 8:45 PM
:) by Rosie Jan 1, 2004 11:14 AM
Snakeskin and green felt are my skins (for the time being) by fabled construct Dec 30, 2003 3:03 PM
I Barely Remember to be Alive by PainKiller Dec 30, 2003 12:11 PM
hmm. by Illuminara Dec 30, 2003 6:48 PM
how by PainKiller Dec 31, 2003 8:48 AM
well by Illuminara Dec 31, 2003 12:12 PM
I don't know by PainKiller Dec 31, 2003 1:24 PM
the pick up by 4 degrees Dec 30, 2003 9:14 AM
loved these lines by PainKiller Dec 30, 2003 12:47 PM
th by 4 degrees Dec 31, 2003 2:38 PM
.... by Colonel Kurtz Jan 2, 2004 2:10 AM
... by 4 degrees Jan 2, 2004 11:07 AM
paean in the wind by vance Dec 30, 2003 8:54 AM
gold star by MichaelAMichael Dec 31, 2003 9:04 AM
words of mind by 4 degrees Dec 30, 2003 8:23 AM
you don't need to be a fortune-teller by vance Dec 30, 2003 8:43 AM
ain't by 4 degrees Dec 30, 2003 8:55 AM
read this liked it by MichaelAMichael Dec 31, 2003 9:13 AM
i by 4 degrees Dec 31, 2003 2:44 PM
words are like lovers by vance Dec 30, 2003 7:55 AM
Platinum Star by MichaelAMichael Dec 31, 2003 9:17 AM
I agree by vance Dec 31, 2003 10:17 AM
Love Science by Lightning Rod Dec 30, 2003 5:10 AM
yep by MichaelAMichael Dec 31, 2003 9:26 AM
who am i by sonofthesun Dec 30, 2003 3:47 AM
lichen by sonofthesun Dec 30, 2003 3:48 AM
beautiful by zero hero Dec 30, 2003 7:18 AM
The Air is a Heavy Hand by PainKiller Dec 30, 2003 12:06 PM
Baby - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -Crippled by fabled construct Dec 30, 2003 2:31 AM
good one by sonofthesun Dec 30, 2003 2:36 AM
hee hee by fabled construct Dec 30, 2003 3:04 PM
septemberpoemaboutthedeathofarelationshipioncehad by Colonel Kurtz Dec 30, 2003 1:47 AM
short but queer by Colonel Kurtz Dec 30, 2003 1:26 AM
Alone by Kristopher Dec 30, 2003 12:56 AM
....... by Colonel Kurtz Dec 30, 2003 12:59 AM
poem by Colonel Kurtz Dec 30, 2003 12:41 AM
. by Colonel Kurtz Dec 30, 2003 12:57 AM
... by paperknife_solution Dec 30, 2003 6:27 PM
the horror...the horror by zygotenmycoffee Jan 1, 2004 11:52 AM
...... by Colonel Kurtz Jan 1, 2004 5:56 PM
My Furnace is Busted by Kristopher Dec 30, 2003 12:32 AM
pilot light by Illuminara Dec 30, 2003 12:49 AM
in the sweetness of thunderclouds by feed_yr_head Dec 29, 2003 9:42 PM
it is at the very moment by doreen peri Dec 29, 2003 7:25 PM
that was by MichaelAMichael Jan 2, 2004 11:18 AM
the only reason I go places is so I don't smoke so much by in a sense Dec 29, 2003 5:28 PM
I loved by PainKiller Dec 30, 2003 6:24 AM
a crash course in love (emoticon edited) by zero hero Dec 30, 2003 6:55 AM
thanks by in a sense Dec 30, 2003 8:47 PM
yep by MichaelAMichael Dec 31, 2003 9:01 AM
...Phosphor.. by PainKiller Dec 29, 2003 11:00 AM
I wonder do I have the endurance (pc) by ModernAncient Dec 29, 2003 10:44 AM
what by 4 degrees Dec 29, 2003 10:49 AM
mental masturbation by 4 degrees Dec 29, 2003 10:17 AM
Thanks... by mutoditna Dec 29, 2003 10:29 AM
the by 4 degrees Dec 29, 2003 10:36 AM
Cool by mutoditna Dec 29, 2003 10:44 AM
.. by 4 degrees Dec 29, 2003 10:46 AM
I almost poked my eye out by zero hero Dec 29, 2003 12:46 PM
Think by mutoditna Dec 29, 2003 7:58 AM
ive by 4 degrees Dec 29, 2003 9:06 AM
I think... by mutoditna Dec 29, 2003 9:31 AM
hey by 4 degrees Dec 29, 2003 9:37 AM
Mmmff by mutoditna Dec 29, 2003 9:44 AM
take by 4 degrees Dec 29, 2003 9:51 AM
I disagree by mutoditna Dec 29, 2003 10:08 AM
hey! by PainKiller Dec 29, 2003 12:25 PM
well by 4 degrees Dec 29, 2003 1:10 PM
yay! by PainKiller Dec 29, 2003 2:01 PM
(someone wanna help me with a name for this one?) by Spazmatical Dec 28, 2003 9:39 PM
when I by PainKiller Dec 29, 2003 12:01 PM
i never by Spazmatical Dec 29, 2003 2:27 PM
how about by doreen peri Dec 29, 2003 7:37 PM
thats by Spazmatical Dec 31, 2003 9:03 PM
reflexion by 4 degrees Dec 28, 2003 6:16 PM
the lonely cat poem by DocStray Dec 28, 2003 1:31 PM
pardon this repost by zero hero Dec 28, 2003 6:13 PM
yes , it does have it place as a haiku in some ways by DocStray Dec 28, 2003 10:14 PM
death at the doorstep by doreen peri Dec 28, 2003 7:07 AM
I am the worlds worst flirt (edited) by zero hero Dec 28, 2003 1:44 PM
waiting for a friend by zero hero Dec 29, 2003 11:07 AM
death.. by doreen peri Dec 29, 2003 7:33 PM
that means a lot to me, thanks by zero hero Dec 30, 2003 3:03 AM
I would tell you here (last line edited) by zero hero Dec 30, 2003 4:32 AM
Final Arrangemants for DeeDee's Going Away Dinner by jamesdean Dec 28, 2003 12:19 AM
kick-ass. by izeveryboyin Jan 4, 2004 11:49 PM
We All Must Live! by izeveryboyin Dec 27, 2003 1:17 PM
last four lines by jamesdean Dec 28, 2003 12:13 AM
I must agree by PainKiller Dec 29, 2003 12:29 PM
agree whole heartedly. by sohburceptonweakdays Jan 4, 2004 11:30 PM
Thanks. by izeveryboyin Jan 7, 2004 4:10 PM
Waiting by ModernAncient Dec 27, 2003 12:41 PM
hha by jamesdean Dec 28, 2003 12:30 AM
the sign read 'know vacancy' by mtmynd Dec 27, 2003 8:27 AM
i loved it. by izeveryboyin Dec 27, 2003 12:57 PM
stiletto love by mtmynd Dec 27, 2003 8:16 AM
quixote goes in for observation by vance Dec 27, 2003 3:43 AM
watch me now by judih. Dec 27, 2003 3:48 AM
candies by vance Dec 27, 2003 3:57 AM
more intresting by temppixie Dec 27, 2003 4:05 PM
dead at twenty-seven by Boom tin dog Dec 26, 2003 11:04 PM
I think by Silas Dec 26, 2003 11:08 PM
i don't know by Boom tin dog Dec 26, 2003 11:19 PM
hardly a jest i assure you by jamesdean Dec 28, 2003 12:11 AM
with a scream by Silas Dec 26, 2003 10:50 PM
Love your work Silas by Sylph Dec 28, 2003 5:48 PM
My Mantra to You by Uncle B Dec 26, 2003 10:20 PM
lovely by Silas Dec 26, 2003 10:52 PM
RODEO by pharroh Dec 26, 2003 10:13 PM
just by Silas Dec 26, 2003 10:54 PM
Untitled Poem (not in its entirety) by Mr Mojo Risin Dec 26, 2003 10:12 PM
I guess you by Silas Dec 26, 2003 10:59 PM
Paper Angels by Sylph Dec 26, 2003 6:30 AM
the longest by Silas Dec 26, 2003 11:05 PM
hmm by Sylph Dec 27, 2003 8:39 AM
wasn't by Silas Dec 27, 2003 11:14 AM
i suppose by Sylph Dec 27, 2003 1:21 PM
and all of a sudden everbody stopped caring. by paperknife_solution Dec 26, 2003 5:38 AM
wow man by Silas Dec 26, 2003 11:10 PM
thats by 4 degrees Dec 28, 2003 6:34 PM
Didn't I tell you by PainKiller Dec 29, 2003 12:35 PM
wheather man blues. by paperknife_solution Dec 30, 2003 1:14 AM
Roof-top, Shanti Lodge, India by Silas Dec 26, 2003 1:55 AM
a fine portrait by Silas Dec 26, 2003 1:53 AM
Fine by mutoditna Dec 29, 2003 7:55 AM
confessions of a poet / terrorist by Silas Dec 26, 2003 1:51 AM
life with wanton humor by doreen peri Dec 25, 2003 7:44 PM
real nice of you to by Silas Dec 26, 2003 11:15 PM
Some Lullaby by LBNorton Dec 25, 2003 11:13 AM
A Sailor and his Sea by Uncle B Dec 25, 2003 10:35 AM
this one... by daisyrain Dec 31, 2003 3:40 PM
(bamboo man) by rain70 Dec 24, 2003 11:04 PM
somehow I knew it would rain tonight by zero hero Dec 25, 2003 2:35 AM
(bright sermon) by rain70 Dec 24, 2003 10:52 PM
"with lift of hymn" by Ambon Pereira Dec 25, 2003 8:59 AM
Gargoyle by LBNorton Dec 24, 2003 6:26 PM
excellent poem, by Ambon Pereira Dec 25, 2003 9:03 AM
!!! by pharroh Dec 26, 2003 10:21 PM
at best, by Ambon Pereira Dec 24, 2003 1:49 PM
I'll be sure to be by Illuminara Dec 24, 2003 2:19 PM
Christmas Eve by fabled construct Dec 24, 2003 12:25 PM
Bacon (please critique) by charlie young Dec 24, 2003 3:08 AM
"critique"? by rain70 Dec 24, 2003 11:06 PM
thank you, merry christmas! by charlie young Dec 25, 2003 5:26 PM
thank you, merry christmas! by charlie young Dec 25, 2003 5:32 PM
Violet Roadside Flower, O-- by LBNorton Dec 23, 2003 9:28 PM
I wish by PainKiller Dec 24, 2003 8:12 AM
A better compliment by LBNorton Dec 24, 2003 8:38 AM
The Crying Fever by coke-line carl Dec 23, 2003 9:12 PM
sorry another vanity post of mine by zero hero Dec 23, 2003 10:51 PM
have you ever considered by PainKiller Dec 24, 2003 8:11 AM
writing stories? ha! by coke-line carl Dec 26, 2003 1:29 AM
Bravo by frankiecrisp Dec 24, 2003 9:10 AM
Random Jabber by Elgi Jan 3, 2004 3:15 PM
hello my good fellow by Elgi Jan 3, 2004 3:23 PM
2 lined matrix by Cotton Mouth Soldier Dec 23, 2003 8:25 PM
love people and use things... by PainKiller Dec 24, 2003 8:04 AM
lovely... by Cotton Mouth Soldier Dec 24, 2003 10:20 AM
Pay It Forward by Dolphintigerflame Jan 7, 2004 8:53 AM
The Room was Illuminated by a Glass of Milk by frankiecrisp Dec 23, 2003 6:11 PM
immature by iwishiwasonetoo Dec 23, 2003 6:15 PM
what by 4 degrees Dec 23, 2003 6:21 PM
younger then that by zero hero Dec 23, 2003 7:07 PM
sounds good to me by zero hero Dec 23, 2003 7:06 PM
Yellow springtime too (please tell me what you think) by iwishiwasonetoo Dec 23, 2003 4:36 PM
orgasmic by 4 degrees Dec 23, 2003 5:15 PM
it is funny that by zero hero Dec 23, 2003 11:13 PM
habitual bereavement by 4 degrees Dec 23, 2003 10:21 AM
sounds like by PainKiller Dec 23, 2003 10:31 AM
um by 4 degrees Dec 23, 2003 4:55 PM
well it's just by PainKiller Dec 24, 2003 6:46 AM
yes by 4 degrees Dec 24, 2003 7:38 AM
die by iwishiwasonetoo Dec 23, 2003 5:00 PM
hmm by 4 degrees Dec 23, 2003 5:03 PM
my writing by iwishiwasonetoo Dec 23, 2003 5:10 PM
i by 4 degrees Dec 23, 2003 5:12 PM
not that poem by iwishiwasonetoo Dec 23, 2003 5:14 PM
ha by 4 degrees Dec 23, 2003 5:16 PM
turkey by iwishiwasonetoo Dec 23, 2003 5:16 PM
well by 4 degrees Dec 23, 2003 5:19 PM
tragic by iwishiwasonetoo Dec 23, 2003 5:22 PM
i by 4 degrees Dec 23, 2003 5:24 PM
you by iwishiwasonetoo Dec 23, 2003 5:25 PM
nope by 4 degrees Dec 23, 2003 5:28 PM
nope by iwishiwasonetoo Dec 23, 2003 5:30 PM
k.. by 4 degrees Dec 23, 2003 5:31 PM
hop skip and jump by iwishiwasonetoo Dec 23, 2003 5:32 PM
slow by 4 degrees Dec 23, 2003 5:41 PM
oceans at dusk/sunrise by anewday Dec 23, 2003 9:46 AM
in the car....sand rubs the back of my thighs and sticks to leather seats by anewday Dec 23, 2003 9:53 AM
She buried them in the snow, thinking nobody would ever know by flood Dec 23, 2003 9:05 AM
--@ by Emelia Dec 30, 2003 3:48 PM
big love by 4 degrees Dec 23, 2003 9:00 AM
Sex in the Land of Love by the mingo Dec 23, 2003 8:43 AM
sleeping through history by c.w. williams Dec 22, 2003 10:18 PM
this is by PainKiller Dec 23, 2003 8:19 AM
thanks much... by c.w. williams Dec 23, 2003 11:09 PM
"as long as you go..." by Ambon Pereira Dec 24, 2003 6:21 AM
thanks, ambon by c.w. williams Dec 30, 2003 2:44 PM
Early Train (pc) by ModernAncient Dec 22, 2003 7:36 PM
THE MEDIA (These Days) by Fightsong Dec 22, 2003 5:57 PM
Train to Skye by temppixie Dec 22, 2003 10:21 AM
Self-Awareness by PainKiller Dec 22, 2003 8:35 AM
he took offense by Rosie Dec 22, 2003 8:28 AM
turn his face by Scary_Star Dec 22, 2003 7:14 AM
Boredom and Bollocks by Dolphintigerflame Dec 22, 2003 7:01 AM
A Rosary Makes For Good Brass Knuckles by Honus Dec 22, 2003 1:45 AM
i'll whore myself for a dishrag. by paperknife_solution Dec 21, 2003 7:19 PM
pull that paperknife by Illuminara Dec 22, 2003 1:08 AM
hmmm... by paperknife_solution Dec 22, 2003 5:58 AM
yessss...... by Scary_Star Dec 22, 2003 7:19 AM
ahm... by paperknife_solution Dec 22, 2003 7:41 AM
.... by PainKiller Dec 22, 2003 8:22 AM
gees... by paperknife_solution Dec 22, 2003 12:45 PM
I was just by PainKiller Dec 22, 2003 1:59 PM
oh. by paperknife_solution Dec 22, 2003 2:19 PM
hmmm... by Illuminara Dec 22, 2003 12:06 PM
who doesn't enjoy a good shit in the morning? by m'oon Dec 21, 2003 5:38 PM
A couple Poems by jimmynew Dec 21, 2003 4:38 PM
.. by Yabyum Dec 21, 2003 4:13 PM
and i by Sylph Dec 21, 2003 5:44 PM
there are certainly by searching Dec 21, 2003 9:40 PM
my tattoo by Yabyum Dec 23, 2003 2:23 PM
i am happy by Vaselina Feb 17, 2004 6:44 PM
Understanding. by Ambon Pereira Dec 21, 2003 3:08 PM
i love it by Elgi Feb 12, 2004 12:01 PM
fooled by charlie young Dec 21, 2003 3:00 PM
the diary of ambon pereira, pg.3 (brief entry) by Ambon Pereira Dec 21, 2003 10:11 AM
Dearest My Darling. by Ambon Pereira Dec 21, 2003 9:51 AM
mail train by vance Dec 21, 2003 8:48 AM
mail train by temppixie Dec 22, 2003 10:12 AM
Two Trees Found On an Empty BeachThat Had Been Planted.............. by madhatter1979 Dec 21, 2003 6:56 AM
tomorrows sun by curtis apple Dec 21, 2003 4:31 AM
tomorrows sun by curtis apple Dec 21, 2003 4:56 AM
on the other hand by zero hero Dec 21, 2003 5:04 AM
the double posting makes me feel weird by zero hero Dec 21, 2003 5:50 AM
pleased i am by curtis apple Dec 21, 2003 5:58 AM
me too to you by zero hero Dec 21, 2003 6:03 AM
A labor of love by zero hero Dec 21, 2003 4:58 AM
I would for you by son_of_sham Dec 20, 2003 8:37 PM
i really like this by searching Dec 20, 2003 9:59 PM
thank-you by son_of_sham Dec 20, 2003 10:43 PM
those are certainly good ones by searching Dec 21, 2003 9:34 PM
well at least... by son_of_sham Dec 23, 2003 2:51 PM
losing! by Scary_Star Dec 20, 2003 6:53 PM
against? by Saint41 Dec 20, 2003 11:57 PM
Driftercrazydrunkmad by Kristopher Dec 20, 2003 6:30 PM
begs the question by Saint41 Dec 20, 2003 10:06 PM
worship. play. by paperknife_solution Dec 20, 2003 12:52 PM
if Paris is worth a mass by zero hero Dec 20, 2003 7:53 PM
Snow by the mingo Dec 20, 2003 10:15 AM
I'd buy by rain70 Dec 20, 2003 10:51 AM
thanks ,clint ... by the mingo Dec 21, 2003 11:57 AM
liked this by firecracker Dec 20, 2003 1:19 PM
thanks, fire ... by the mingo Dec 21, 2003 12:00 PM
sincerity breeds belivers. by paperknife_solution Dec 20, 2003 5:20 AM
it doesn't take a lot with poets. by Saint41 Dec 20, 2003 10:03 AM
Ashes from ashes by Cotton Mouth Soldier Dec 20, 2003 5:03 AM
good by Saint41 Dec 20, 2003 9:20 AM
again... by c.w. williams Dec 20, 2003 9:30 AM
... by fabled construct Dec 22, 2003 3:37 AM
replay by Illuminara Dec 20, 2003 1:20 AM
i like this by firecracker Dec 20, 2003 1:25 PM
no by Illuminara Dec 20, 2003 1:27 PM
hm by ellipsis Dec 20, 2003 4:27 PM
2nd attempt (replay) by Illuminara Dec 20, 2003 1:36 PM
? by paperknife_solution Dec 20, 2003 1:48 PM
?? by Illuminara Dec 20, 2003 2:02 PM
alright. by paperknife_solution Dec 20, 2003 3:24 PM
these will stick to my ribs by zero hero Dec 20, 2003 7:47 PM
Four Poems by Saint41 Dec 20, 2003 12:55 AM
these are interesting by firecracker Dec 20, 2003 1:26 PM
must be the weather by 4 degrees Dec 19, 2003 9:33 PM
that makes the punks wear leather by Saint41 Dec 20, 2003 1:00 AM
re by 4 degrees Dec 20, 2003 9:34 PM
voces dela diabla by richard_stiph Dec 19, 2003 6:20 PM
why hide in low level spanish? by Saint41 Dec 20, 2003 1:06 AM
if you can't read Spanish,on what account do you believeyourself to bequalified by Ambon Pereira Dec 20, 2003 7:09 AM
my spanish knowledge by Saint41 Dec 20, 2003 9:51 AM
The Sun Always Shines, but not on you (it's more prose i think) by Johnny_Jerko Dec 19, 2003 5:39 PM
yes. by paperknife_solution Dec 20, 2003 1:54 PM
Bad sex by Rosie Dec 19, 2003 2:28 PM
I don't know spontaneous by zero hero Dec 19, 2003 4:41 PM
unspontaneous by zero hero Dec 19, 2003 5:08 PM
yes by Rosie Dec 19, 2003 9:20 PM
strange feeling to feel useless to a woman by zero hero Dec 19, 2003 10:16 PM
there's that by Illuminara Dec 20, 2003 12:56 AM
sunny woman by zero hero Dec 20, 2003 7:29 PM
Sometimes by rain70 Dec 20, 2003 10:48 AM
hurry back poet by zero hero Dec 20, 2003 7:30 PM
i like by Rosie Dec 22, 2003 8:42 AM
good sex? by Johnny_Jerko Dec 19, 2003 5:46 PM
this is funny by Rosie Dec 19, 2003 9:11 PM
without sugar. by Ambon Pereira Dec 19, 2003 9:28 PM
this by rain70 Dec 20, 2003 10:42 AM
yes by Rosie Dec 22, 2003 8:42 AM
Sex is like pizza by rain70 Dec 20, 2003 10:40 AM
you're right by Rosie Dec 22, 2003 8:44 AM
oh man by Gothic-Hippie-Chic Dec 21, 2003 11:27 AM
it was a good experience by Rosie Dec 22, 2003 8:47 AM
this is a bit sexually charged by jessa_lynne Dec 19, 2003 12:35 PM
this is way cool by k--os- Dec 19, 2003 3:39 PM
yet so much passion by zero hero Dec 19, 2003 4:33 PM
yeah passion like is so cool by k--os- Dec 19, 2003 5:57 PM
10-4 by zero hero Dec 19, 2003 6:24 PM
(virtues) by rain70 Dec 19, 2003 11:56 AM
ah yes by Sylph Dec 19, 2003 12:22 PM
me too by zero hero Dec 19, 2003 4:43 PM
You are by rain70 Dec 20, 2003 10:27 AM
"the absent dress still drenched with sunlight shining on the floor." by Ambon Pereira Dec 20, 2003 7:27 AM
(note for everyone) by rain70 Dec 20, 2003 10:25 AM
Cursed by PainKiller Dec 19, 2003 8:58 AM
Car Wash by hoolapoop Dec 18, 2003 8:26 PM
. by Yabyum Dec 18, 2003 4:33 PM
I believe by frontal-abstraction Dec 18, 2003 4:45 PM
fucking beautiful by PainKiller Dec 19, 2003 6:22 AM
I believe by Sylph Dec 19, 2003 7:09 AM
yes - by runshadow Dec 19, 2003 9:41 AM
amazing... by c.w. williams Dec 19, 2003 10:48 AM
thanks to you all. by Yabyum Dec 21, 2003 5:19 AM
Dead Coat Tails by frankiecrisp Dec 18, 2003 4:33 PM
Thunder Rolling Down the Mountain by Andeh Dec 18, 2003 3:55 PM
Rats with wings by pole Dec 18, 2003 2:33 PM
Why Do I Do This? by PainKiller Dec 18, 2003 1:52 PM
Webbed feet (PC) by fabled construct Dec 18, 2003 12:48 PM
Enjoyed these lines: by c.w. williams Dec 20, 2003 9:12 AM
Love not, pay the system.. by Cotton Mouth Soldier Dec 18, 2003 12:37 PM
wow by fabled construct Dec 18, 2003 12:54 PM
Ideas should be free... by Cotton Mouth Soldier Dec 18, 2003 1:15 PM
OK! by fabled construct Dec 18, 2003 1:24 PM
shit... by c.w. williams Dec 18, 2003 3:00 PM
Hard hitting with a velvet fist by Openg Dec 19, 2003 3:54 PM
it is hard to keep love, resist change, and find strength by jonathankyou Dec 18, 2003 11:17 AM
i missed your writing by jessa_lynne Dec 19, 2003 4:47 AM
thank you so much by jonathankyou Dec 19, 2003 8:43 AM
Another shitty poem that will garner no comments by PainKiller Dec 18, 2003 11:08 AM
Had... by c.w. williams Dec 18, 2003 11:22 AM
duration. by Ambon Pereira Dec 18, 2003 11:54 AM
... by fabled construct Dec 18, 2003 12:56 PM
You all proved me wrong by PainKiller Dec 18, 2003 1:54 PM
i have my days too by Rosie Dec 19, 2003 8:17 AM
This is My Friends and I (my best poem yet, but that's not saying much) by Johnny_Jerko Dec 18, 2003 9:13 AM
these lines.... by c.w. williams Dec 20, 2003 9:03 AM
christmas lights by Rosie Dec 18, 2003 8:25 AM
this song by Rosie Dec 18, 2003 8:54 AM
now you've got this song stuck in my head by PainKiller Dec 18, 2003 9:24 AM
typical of me by jessa_lynne Dec 18, 2003 8:17 AM
reply by MagentaCilantro Dec 19, 2003 1:18 AM
something fake about fall i wrote by jessa_lynne Dec 18, 2003 8:02 AM
Teenage Lament by frankiecrisp Dec 18, 2003 6:56 AM
Another night drunk and at home ( please critique) by Johnny_Jerko Dec 18, 2003 2:21 AM
this line: by jessa_lynne Dec 18, 2003 5:21 AM
i'm not that young by Johnny_Jerko Dec 18, 2003 9:27 AM
don't worry by jessa_lynne Dec 19, 2003 4:30 AM
Newberry Castle (oh please give me constructive feedback!) by MagentaCilantro Dec 17, 2003 11:11 PM
okay, i'll try by jessa_lynne Dec 18, 2003 5:12 AM
... by pottygok Dec 21, 2003 5:06 PM
The Girl Who Stole My Breath And Didn't Leave Change by Johnny_Jerko Dec 17, 2003 4:23 PM
feb 6 by slog Dec 17, 2003 1:36 PM
A ramble here does (my daddy's ramble) by pinstripe Dec 17, 2003 10:43 AM
cuckoo by 4 degrees Jan 21, 2004 6:21 AM
ha! by pinstripe Jan 22, 2004 2:34 AM
On Writing by frankiecrisp Dec 17, 2003 10:18 AM
... by PainKiller Dec 17, 2003 10:56 AM
A Happy Smile by PainKiller Dec 17, 2003 9:30 AM
..ghost..(please critique) by flore` Dec 17, 2003 7:32 AM
... by pottygok Dec 17, 2003 1:55 PM
A rush of grain, scratching, and pleasure by fabled construct Dec 17, 2003 4:04 AM
question by PainKiller Dec 17, 2003 6:21 AM
well... by fabled construct Dec 17, 2003 2:38 PM
DADA poems by Johnny_Jerko Dec 17, 2003 4:16 PM
i don't by fabled construct Dec 18, 2003 2:44 AM
re:dada by paperknife_solution Dec 20, 2003 3:29 PM
Ode To Prayer And Hope by Johnny_Jerko Dec 16, 2003 3:55 PM
i like it by fabled construct Dec 17, 2003 4:12 AM
Patience. by Ambon Pereira Dec 16, 2003 11:18 AM
i wish by fabled construct Dec 17, 2003 4:15 AM
I have by runshadow Dec 19, 2003 9:49 AM
The Farce of Triumph by PainKiller Dec 16, 2003 10:41 AM
imagery is by fabled construct Dec 17, 2003 4:20 AM
I have to say by PainKiller Dec 17, 2003 6:17 AM
working a sonnet, missing a quatrain by lost Dec 16, 2003 9:25 AM
i enjoy this kind of thing by fabled construct Dec 17, 2003 4:23 AM
thanks by lost Dec 17, 2003 1:36 PM
what about this by lost Dec 17, 2003 2:16 PM
hmmmm by fabled construct Dec 17, 2003 2:30 PM
...emotional thing... by fly-Irie Dec 16, 2003 6:29 AM
Pile of bodies, just as they were when alive. by pole Dec 16, 2003 4:29 AM
nice imagery by madhatter1979 Dec 16, 2003 4:32 AM
It's by PainKiller Dec 16, 2003 8:57 AM
confusion by Clichedeepness Dec 16, 2003 10:55 AM
the by pole Dec 16, 2003 1:59 PM
sounds like a modest mouse line by Johnny_Jerko Dec 16, 2003 4:02 PM
fraid ive never heard of them by pole Dec 17, 2003 2:13 PM
Mucho by Johnny_Jerko Dec 17, 2003 4:12 PM
Tear Streaked Face by madhatter1979 Dec 16, 2003 4:07 AM
reminds me of my dad by PainKiller Dec 16, 2003 8:56 AM
Going Back by madhatter1979 Dec 16, 2003 4:05 AM
Sleep by the mingo Dec 16, 2003 4:05 AM
Pop Culture by madhatter1979 Dec 16, 2003 4:00 AM
irony? by pole Dec 16, 2003 7:07 AM
we are products of our environments by PainKiller Dec 16, 2003 8:55 AM
The Truth by LOSTPOET1 Dec 16, 2003 11:03 AM
Hold up a second everyone by madhatter1979 Dec 16, 2003 10:00 PM
don't get mad... Mad by LOSTPOET1 Dec 16, 2003 10:13 PM
Mad: by PainKiller Dec 17, 2003 9:12 AM
oh... by pole Dec 17, 2003 9:24 AM
Beautiful Memories by madhatter1979 Dec 16, 2003 3:49 AM
Naptime by madhatter1979 Dec 16, 2003 3:39 AM
Reflection by madhatter1979 Dec 16, 2003 3:34 AM
Too Busy Looking to See by madhatter1979 Dec 16, 2003 3:29 AM
My Belief piece by ARAHH Dec 16, 2003 3:28 AM
A New Way to Stop and Smell the Roses by madhatter1979 Dec 16, 2003 3:19 AM
If you wish for change by PainKiller Dec 16, 2003 7:00 AM
Change by LOSTPOET1 Dec 16, 2003 10:15 PM
re by madhatter1979 Dec 16, 2003 11:09 PM
note to all by madhatter1979 Dec 16, 2003 2:45 AM
Sadness. by Ambon Pereira Dec 16, 2003 2:05 AM
question by PainKiller Dec 16, 2003 6:56 AM
well, by Ambon Pereira Dec 16, 2003 11:23 AM
hmmm by PainKiller Dec 16, 2003 12:46 PM
Excellent... by c.w. williams Dec 16, 2003 1:09 PM
coloured air banquet [NZ spelling of colored, for you americans] by Silas Dec 15, 2003 9:53 PM
i love the by jessa_lynne Dec 16, 2003 5:03 AM
~ a little piece without a crack ~ by doreen peri Dec 15, 2003 8:10 PM
Fall by jamesdean Dec 17, 2003 6:16 PM
Hallway by Mayo Dec 15, 2003 12:14 PM
Still life by runshadow Dec 15, 2003 8:10 AM
I can't believe that by PainKiller Dec 16, 2003 6:51 AM
:) by runshadow Dec 16, 2003 2:37 PM
devolution by jessa_lynne Dec 15, 2003 7:55 AM
collective conscious by PainKiller Dec 15, 2003 8:59 AM
not out to please by jessa_lynne Dec 16, 2003 4:57 AM
.... by PainKiller Dec 16, 2003 6:34 AM
yeah by jessa_lynne Dec 16, 2003 7:53 AM
!!! by PainKiller Dec 16, 2003 10:21 AM
Jess-us by Silas Dec 15, 2003 9:58 PM
I like, I really like by madhatter1979 Dec 16, 2003 4:44 AM
No More Made-up Words... by PainKiller Dec 15, 2003 6:45 AM
... by fabled construct Dec 15, 2003 11:41 AM
seriously by madhatter1979 Dec 16, 2003 4:50 AM
this is where you are wrong: by PainKiller Dec 16, 2003 6:58 AM
I seriously hope by madhatter1979 Dec 16, 2003 10:04 PM
irony again? by pole Dec 16, 2003 7:29 AM
yeah by madhatter1979 Dec 16, 2003 11:10 PM
I believe by PainKiller Dec 17, 2003 6:52 AM
I am glad by PainKiller Dec 16, 2003 6:30 AM
Webbed Feet (please critique) edited by fabled construct Dec 15, 2003 3:26 AM
an irresistable invitation by judih. Dec 15, 2003 4:57 AM
... by fabled construct Dec 16, 2003 4:13 AM
Fun... by pottygok Dec 15, 2003 7:09 PM
your big cheese gives you away, without even a glance atchya dead eyes by sonofthesun Dec 15, 2003 1:42 AM
this just over the wire by B3jamboree Dec 14, 2003 8:53 PM
as creeping is an act that creeps do by e_dog Dec 14, 2003 8:04 PM
XIII -Written by Me and Kyle- by Uncle B Dec 14, 2003 2:54 PM
oh to be kyle and me.... by anewday Dec 14, 2003 9:55 PM
mechanisms of love magic by doreen peri Dec 14, 2003 1:43 PM
great by fabled construct Dec 15, 2003 3:38 AM
i was beginning... by doreen peri Dec 15, 2003 6:25 AM
_ by fabled construct Dec 15, 2003 11:58 AM
before and after by Lightning Rod Dec 15, 2003 6:08 AM
thank you for.. by doreen peri Dec 15, 2003 6:26 AM
Window Kwansaba by Saint41 Dec 14, 2003 1:12 PM
well by um Dec 14, 2003 11:45 PM
clipboard by minfin Dec 14, 2003 10:54 AM
Bedclothed and warm round the naval(please critique,) by fabled construct Dec 14, 2003 9:13 AM
reminds me of sweaters and cold windows. by Saint41 Dec 14, 2003 12:53 PM
i think by fabled construct Dec 15, 2003 2:16 AM
very van gogh by judih. Dec 15, 2003 4:56 AM
cheers! by fabled construct Dec 15, 2003 12:10 PM
... by pottygok Dec 15, 2003 7:14 PM
... by fabled construct Dec 16, 2003 1:12 AM
let your art grow in itself by madhatter1979 Dec 16, 2003 5:06 AM
good advice by fabled construct Dec 16, 2003 2:41 PM
... by pottygok Dec 16, 2003 12:02 PM
i agree by fabled construct Dec 16, 2003 2:40 PM
fragments by Clichedeepness Dec 16, 2003 9:54 AM
reply by MagentaCilantro Dec 16, 2003 10:25 AM
haha by PainKiller Dec 17, 2003 9:19 AM
I remember being there by torchboy Dec 14, 2003 7:36 AM
NIGHT by torchboy Dec 14, 2003 7:28 AM
i agree by fabled construct Dec 14, 2003 9:31 AM
taking a bath in ink by Saint41 Dec 14, 2003 1:06 PM
The Sun Does not Shine Today by torchboy Dec 14, 2003 7:17 AM
i like it by fabled construct Dec 14, 2003 9:40 AM
Link your Favorite Posts by um Dec 14, 2003 5:53 AM
a vampire's secret (pc) by flore` Dec 14, 2003 4:38 AM
Dance Dance Revolution by Saint41 Dec 14, 2003 12:58 AM
real funny by fabled construct Dec 14, 2003 9:23 AM
its about time I decided to leave by anewday Dec 13, 2003 9:15 PM
sneaky jesus lines need more room to breathe. by Saint41 Dec 13, 2003 11:36 PM
how did Jesus, in his wanderings, end up in my poem? by anewday Dec 14, 2003 10:27 AM
Very well put! by Mayo Dec 15, 2003 11:59 AM
sun by bennat Dec 13, 2003 1:25 PM
who loves the sun? by Saint41 Dec 13, 2003 11:15 PM
ehhhh by bennat Dec 14, 2003 2:03 AM
So I Ask You into Your Eyes by Dead burroughs Dec 13, 2003 12:25 PM
good but by Saint41 Dec 13, 2003 10:52 PM
to writers by 4 degrees Dec 13, 2003 12:03 PM
maya angelou with the problems of holden caulfied by Saint41 Dec 13, 2003 11:48 PM
suffocation by auziea Dec 13, 2003 9:04 AM
is that by Illuminara Dec 13, 2003 11:04 AM
trippy by Saint41 Dec 14, 2003 12:23 AM
so i can't spell by auziea Dec 20, 2003 3:45 AM
Bling Bling by hoolapoop Dec 12, 2003 5:33 PM
I by c.w. williams Dec 12, 2003 6:54 PM
in-adventures of philo - by AlexanderPanos Dec 12, 2003 12:14 PM
love is an olympic sport by c.w. williams Dec 12, 2003 10:37 AM
Just Another Poem by jim vinny Dec 12, 2003 9:28 AM
buddha-ful thoughts ,transparent sighs by zil Dec 12, 2003 2:36 AM
postponed by Silas Dec 12, 2003 1:15 AM
comment by PainKiller Dec 12, 2003 6:28 AM
Your Words. Not MIne. by jamesdean Dec 11, 2003 7:58 PM
without thought remember by sonofthesun Dec 11, 2003 6:06 PM
well well well, by jamesdean Dec 11, 2003 7:53 PM
thanks jamesdean by sonofthesun Dec 14, 2003 11:47 PM
even better by jamesdean Dec 15, 2003 4:34 PM
Cut-Up St. Patricks Day by LoganR Dec 11, 2003 4:57 PM
I like by PainKiller Dec 12, 2003 6:24 AM
I by Kristopher Dec 11, 2003 12:55 PM
Te by Arcadia Dec 11, 2003 1:22 PM
Maybe it’s Just a Pulled Muscle by jim vinny Dec 11, 2003 12:51 PM
. by Kristopher Dec 11, 2003 1:06 PM
makes me by Silas Dec 11, 2003 4:31 PM
great by firecracker Dec 11, 2003 5:06 PM
The Rain Falls The Wind Blows (with or without me alive in the world) by PainKiller Dec 11, 2003 11:46 AM
re by Dove Dec 11, 2003 8:50 PM
in re: re by PainKiller Dec 12, 2003 6:19 AM
Monday Evening Blues PC by Dove Dec 11, 2003 11:45 AM
armpits of heaven by Tulate Dec 11, 2003 1:35 PM
... by pottygok Dec 15, 2003 7:22 PM
Just noticed this critique by Dove Dec 20, 2003 3:06 PM
... by pottygok Dec 21, 2003 5:12 AM
a good man by Rosie Dec 11, 2003 8:47 AM
and what I need... by c.w. williams Dec 11, 2003 10:08 AM
:) by Rosie Dec 12, 2003 8:55 AM
i think by Silas Dec 11, 2003 4:34 PM
flirting? by Rosie Dec 12, 2003 8:56 AM
was it by c.w. williams Dec 13, 2003 1:30 AM
!!! by Rosie Dec 15, 2003 8:12 AM
ego by 4 degrees Dec 11, 2003 5:33 AM
!! by Rosie Dec 11, 2003 8:53 AM
thank by 4 degrees Dec 12, 2003 5:24 AM
po.e.try by MagentaCilantro Dec 10, 2003 11:25 PM
my bird by Silas Dec 10, 2003 9:35 PM
Morgen (PC) by slog Dec 10, 2003 3:44 PM
AUFSTEHEN! by jamesdean Dec 11, 2003 7:59 PM
i just like by slog Dec 12, 2003 8:13 AM
Du liebst mich nicht!! 1 und 2 (PC) by slog Dec 10, 2003 3:43 PM
NEIN NEIN by jamesdean Dec 11, 2003 7:55 PM
Where ever by Dead burroughs Dec 10, 2003 12:30 PM
who needs drugs when... by c.w. williams Dec 10, 2003 9:16 AM
re by prisilla Dec 10, 2003 3:57 PM
impressive by slog Dec 10, 2003 4:06 PM
good stuff by firecracker Dec 11, 2003 5:18 AM
1. by slog Dec 10, 2003 9:00 AM
Really? by Silas Dec 10, 2003 10:50 AM
i dont know by slog Dec 10, 2003 4:04 PM
hmmm by firecracker Dec 11, 2003 5:19 AM
READing by slog Dec 11, 2003 7:50 AM
GastroAnatomic Melodica by HeavierThanAir Dec 10, 2003 8:15 AM
I´ve finished by Arcadia Dec 10, 2003 10:44 AM
Fear. by Ambon Pereira Dec 10, 2003 4:33 AM
...hmmm... by HeavierThanAir Dec 10, 2003 8:45 AM
The terms of service (pc) by fabled construct Dec 9, 2003 3:01 PM
Anger. by Ambon Pereira Dec 9, 2003 11:41 AM
* * * * by Darwin's_Nephew Dec 12, 2003 9:03 AM
kurt cobain by 4 degrees Dec 9, 2003 9:46 AM
The culural impact by Silas Dec 10, 2003 10:42 AM
re by 4 degrees Dec 10, 2003 11:10 AM
someone feels like me by psychomuse Dec 15, 2003 8:35 AM
re by madhatter1979 Dec 16, 2003 4:39 AM
see no evil, hear no evil... by Rosie Dec 9, 2003 9:07 AM
bovine estrus by spot Dec 9, 2003 8:44 AM
That has to be by Silas Dec 10, 2003 10:52 AM
Belligerently Whimsical by jojojo000 Dec 9, 2003 8:18 AM
Ć by 4 degrees Dec 9, 2003 8:09 AM
A Poem that I Wrote by jojojo000 Dec 9, 2003 7:42 AM
The Iceman cometh... by PainKiller Dec 9, 2003 7:15 AM
an imaginary suicide letter by jessa_lynne Dec 9, 2003 4:20 AM
Fuck. by Silas Dec 10, 2003 11:01 AM
well if ya liked that by jessa_lynne Dec 10, 2003 12:03 PM
. by Kristopher Dec 11, 2003 1:03 PM
hey. wonderful by Kristopher Dec 11, 2003 12:58 PM
and vice versa by jessa_lynne Dec 13, 2003 12:14 PM
hm by Kristopher Dec 30, 2003 12:40 AM
"Tokyo No. 1" by in_earth Dec 9, 2003 12:00 AM
sexy by jessa_lynne Dec 10, 2003 12:05 PM
me too! by in_earth Dec 10, 2003 6:54 PM
dramaqueen by prisilla Dec 8, 2003 7:29 PM
the applause by anewday Dec 8, 2003 10:09 PM
Oh, but by Hester Prynne Dec 8, 2003 11:46 PM
Winter by LoganR Dec 8, 2003 4:56 PM
re by prisilla Dec 8, 2003 7:13 PM
/ - - - - by the mingo Dec 9, 2003 5:36 AM
Instrument of Chance by flood Dec 8, 2003 4:38 PM
left a message... by the mingo Dec 9, 2003 5:39 AM
what will our joke be by Silas Dec 8, 2003 4:00 PM
silas if i erect ... by the mingo Dec 9, 2003 5:27 AM
Yes by Silas Dec 9, 2003 11:27 AM
mmmff by 4 degrees Dec 8, 2003 2:47 PM
why? by jamesdean Dec 8, 2003 2:51 PM
maybe by 4 degrees Dec 8, 2003 2:52 PM
ARE YOU CALLING ME A PUSSY? by jamesdean Dec 8, 2003 6:57 PM
uh by 4 degrees Dec 9, 2003 7:52 AM
possibly by 4 degrees Dec 8, 2003 2:57 PM
all by jamesdean Dec 8, 2003 6:56 PM
and by 4 degrees Dec 9, 2003 7:55 AM
hahhahhhha by jamesdean Dec 11, 2003 7:46 PM
not to worry by 4 degrees Dec 12, 2003 5:32 AM
Seuss by jamesdean Dec 15, 2003 4:37 PM
well by 4 degrees Dec 16, 2003 5:12 AM
More than one way to visit God by Uncle B Dec 8, 2003 12:02 PM
a real 'wheel'ist by anewday Dec 8, 2003 12:30 PM
RELIGION HAS MURDERED MORE PEOPLE THAN CANCER. by jamesdean Dec 8, 2003 2:36 PM
and people by Illuminara Dec 8, 2003 3:31 PM
Perhap by jamesdean Dec 8, 2003 6:51 PM
if you wanna play that game, by flood Dec 8, 2003 5:10 PM
all i was trying to say by Uncle B Dec 8, 2003 6:28 PM
am i red boy. by jamesdean Dec 8, 2003 6:49 PM
LOL! by Mayo Dec 9, 2003 2:24 PM
it's not a matter of topping each other. by jamesdean Dec 8, 2003 6:53 PM
Taking a bong I envision marilyn quayle’s ass hilted high by popsicle Dec 8, 2003 7:12 PM
I forgot--buddhist hucksters, hindu creepos, zen zealots by popsicle Dec 8, 2003 8:03 PM
what's behind the curtain? by jamesdean Dec 11, 2003 7:51 PM
memories by GinBin Dec 12, 2003 12:28 PM
river faith by daisyrain Dec 11, 2003 6:21 PM
December waters?! by Kubla Kahn Dec 12, 2003 7:40 AM
Departing Ennui by Snow Leopard Dec 8, 2003 10:35 AM
clouds by drkbird Dec 9, 2003 1:03 AM
And On The Mountain There Is Nothing by Snow Leopard Dec 8, 2003 10:34 AM
hapiness poem (random hu(man) by rain70 Dec 8, 2003 10:30 AM
lust for life by jamesdean Dec 8, 2003 2:43 PM
So by rain70 Dec 9, 2003 9:59 AM
Made Into Mirth. by Ambon Pereira Dec 9, 2003 2:51 AM
Hm. by rain70 Dec 9, 2003 9:56 AM
buddhist roll, prayer wheels-- by Ambon Pereira Dec 9, 2003 12:07 PM
My Arabesque by PainKiller Dec 8, 2003 9:24 AM
not bad by Illuminara Dec 8, 2003 9:50 AM
you don't think by PainKiller Dec 8, 2003 11:07 AM
you don't think by PainKiller Dec 8, 2003 11:07 AM
well by Illuminara Dec 8, 2003 11:13 AM
Some elements are cliche for a reason. by jamesdean Dec 8, 2003 2:48 PM
I wish i was Arabic!! by jamesdean Dec 8, 2003 2:46 PM
thanks by PainKiller Dec 9, 2003 7:53 AM
I'm not changing, life is by kodachrome Dec 8, 2003 6:11 AM
akasha's dream by flore` Dec 8, 2003 1:51 AM
You by rain70 Dec 8, 2003 11:33 AM
red by Illuminara Dec 7, 2003 11:23 PM
lighter and a glue stick (trust and a truth) by michaelsferrell Dec 7, 2003 10:27 PM
pachouli detonation module by popsicle Dec 7, 2003 8:45 PM
Kill by rain70 Dec 8, 2003 11:33 AM
Grifting With Lions by LoganR Dec 7, 2003 8:04 PM
i like by bennat Dec 8, 2003 12:56 AM
Thanks by LoganR Dec 8, 2003 4:35 PM
I Will Think No Evil Thoughts by prisilla Dec 7, 2003 5:08 PM
Give and take by Hester Prynne Dec 7, 2003 11:46 AM
holy... by the mingo Dec 7, 2003 12:27 PM
holy.. by rain70 Dec 7, 2003 12:32 PM
shit ! are ya still laying ... by the mingo Dec 7, 2003 1:56 PM
Well, Sparkle my monkey train! by Hester Prynne Dec 7, 2003 6:33 PM
too purty.. by feloniousslunk Dec 8, 2003 10:48 AM
The Book by Illuminara Dec 7, 2003 10:22 AM
reading ... by the mingo Dec 7, 2003 12:31 PM
seems by Illuminara Dec 7, 2003 3:31 PM
So.............. by popsicle Dec 7, 2003 9:26 PM
Well, popman by Illuminara Dec 7, 2003 9:44 PM
puh-leaze by popsicle Dec 7, 2003 10:17 PM
well, I suppose by Illuminara Dec 7, 2003 10:37 PM
a ghost who dances by Silas Dec 6, 2003 3:31 PM
i was... by the mingo Dec 7, 2003 12:40 PM
You know by Silas Dec 7, 2003 7:10 PM
Violet by prisilla Dec 6, 2003 1:39 PM
i knew as soon ... by the mingo Dec 7, 2003 1:01 PM
for the man, mingo by prisilla Dec 7, 2003 5:03 PM
Bleak Nothingness by daniel6 Dec 5, 2003 2:01 PM
re by prisilla Dec 6, 2003 1:23 PM
great jumping horned toads ... by the mingo Dec 7, 2003 1:14 PM
Implied Carnage by daniel6 Dec 5, 2003 11:14 AM
US? by JacopoBelbo84 Dec 6, 2003 9:26 AM
sorta by daniel6 Dec 7, 2003 8:07 PM
The Three R's, According to Ambon: by Ambon Pereira Dec 5, 2003 10:10 AM
Roll-Call. by Ambon Pereira Dec 5, 2003 10:21 AM
Recess. by Ambon Pereira Dec 5, 2003 10:36 AM
Rebellion. by Ambon Pereira Dec 5, 2003 10:37 AM
FUCK!! by JacopoBelbo84 Dec 6, 2003 9:58 AM
why is it ... by the mingo Dec 7, 2003 1:43 PM
it is human nature by Illuminara Dec 7, 2003 3:28 PM
come again, sirrah? by Ambon Pereira Dec 9, 2003 2:35 AM
hello Jacopo, by Ambon Pereira Dec 9, 2003 2:39 AM
i just dont know by 4 degrees Dec 4, 2003 9:10 PM
ya know... by the mingo Dec 7, 2003 1:34 PM
i have to get out of this place by wilmer neveragain Dec 4, 2003 8:58 PM
brain ripples by prisilla Dec 5, 2003 10:42 AM
hats off to ya, wilmer &... by the mingo Dec 7, 2003 1:46 PM
Prayer to Frida Kahlo by Silas Dec 4, 2003 5:12 PM
Didnt like...... by jamesdean Dec 4, 2003 7:05 PM
Jimmy Dean... by Silas Dec 4, 2003 7:44 PM
Change? by jamesdean Dec 8, 2003 2:33 PM
So I'm a writer now? by Kristopher Dec 4, 2003 4:07 PM
I feel ya... by SharpieMcL33t Dec 13, 2003 2:26 PM
thank you by Kristopher Dec 30, 2003 12:38 AM
My Vice, grips, holds me here by Kristopher Dec 4, 2003 3:42 PM
re by prisilla Dec 5, 2003 10:44 AM
The Diary of Ambon Pereira, pg. 2 by Ambon Pereira Dec 4, 2003 12:17 PM
yo comprende by jamesdean Dec 4, 2003 7:09 PM
genius by JacopoBelbo84 Dec 6, 2003 10:11 AM
Little Girls Lost to Heels of Stone by PainKiller Dec 4, 2003 11:12 AM
yikes by fabled construct Dec 4, 2003 11:51 AM
sometimes by Spazmatical Dec 4, 2003 1:19 PM
Boys by Kristopher Dec 4, 2003 4:16 PM
All I can say is by Hester Prynne Dec 8, 2003 5:12 PM
another war zone by fabled construct Dec 4, 2003 7:51 AM
strange brew-pc by bennat Dec 3, 2003 10:16 PM
i rilly like you by panzee Dec 4, 2003 7:35 AM
blah blah blah.... by PainKiller Dec 4, 2003 9:38 AM
bumble gumbo by panzee Dec 4, 2003 9:55 AM
mr. munky is clunky by panzee Dec 3, 2003 8:30 PM
i by bennat Dec 3, 2003 11:04 PM
I like by Hester Prynne Dec 4, 2003 12:55 AM
a reply to "viva la rivolution" by soluspoeta Dec 3, 2003 3:26 PM
Paradox by jamesdean Dec 3, 2003 4:31 PM
have you ever seen a vampirePCP? by jamesdean Dec 3, 2003 2:48 PM
i suck at enjoying poetry by Saint41 Dec 6, 2003 12:06 AM
i suck at enjoying poetry by Saint41 Dec 6, 2003 12:10 AM
PPoetry is for losersC by jamesdean Dec 3, 2003 2:45 PM
(no tittle) PC please by bennat Dec 3, 2003 12:43 PM
Have i got a deal for you......... by jamesdean Dec 3, 2003 2:26 PM
comment by PainKiller Dec 3, 2003 2:27 PM
thanks by bennat Dec 3, 2003 6:07 PM
well well i just....i just couldnt, thats all...i just .....couldnt. by jamesdean Dec 3, 2003 7:11 PM
Stroms and Streams by Uncle B Dec 3, 2003 12:11 PM
ahhh... by PainKiller Dec 3, 2003 2:25 PM
agreement is in order by jamesdean Dec 3, 2003 2:28 PM
who do you love?? by PainKiller Dec 4, 2003 6:50 AM
everyone by jamesdean Dec 4, 2003 6:57 PM
WONDERFUL by Mayo Dec 9, 2003 2:26 PM
Lifting the seed from where it was sown. (please critique) by pole Dec 3, 2003 8:52 AM
i feel ignorant. by jamesdean Dec 3, 2003 2:35 PM
Beside the Waters by Professor Gloom Dec 3, 2003 7:31 AM
oooooohhhhhhhhh by jamesdean Dec 3, 2003 2:32 PM
Laughter in the Cloak hall (PC) by fabled construct Dec 3, 2003 3:19 AM
C by PainKiller Dec 3, 2003 10:55 AM
Shoah by Kojo Dec 2, 2003 2:53 PM
I believe by PainKiller Dec 3, 2003 11:46 AM
A Penance Grasped from the Thorn by PainKiller Dec 2, 2003 1:31 PM
Really by jamesdean Dec 3, 2003 2:37 PM
yes! by PainKiller Dec 4, 2003 6:56 AM
(kirlian fingerprint)* by rain70 Dec 2, 2003 10:23 AM
frickin by bennat Dec 2, 2003 10:56 AM
Hey by rain70 Dec 3, 2003 10:12 AM
coolies by Sylph Dec 2, 2003 12:05 PM
Hey pretty lady by rain70 Dec 3, 2003 10:13 AM
magnificent. by Ambon Pereira Dec 3, 2003 2:35 AM
A word from you by rain70 Dec 3, 2003 10:14 AM
new version Lima , Peru PC PLEASE by bennat Dec 2, 2003 9:00 AM
some questions by PainKiller Dec 2, 2003 11:05 AM
well by bennat Dec 2, 2003 11:12 AM
and by dominated...... by jamesdean Dec 3, 2003 2:57 PM
Bennat by Andeh Dec 4, 2003 4:23 PM
All the Devils by PainKiller Dec 2, 2003 8:33 AM
this by bennat Dec 2, 2003 9:11 AM
reply ( or ranting- I know not which) by PainKiller Dec 2, 2003 1:17 PM
i can hear you by Spazmatical Dec 2, 2003 10:16 PM
or by PainKiller Dec 3, 2003 10:50 AM
wouldnt by Spazmatical Dec 3, 2003 1:02 PM
Vegas Dream(any critiques and feedback would be adored) by Spazmatical Dec 1, 2003 9:07 PM
mechanical beach by hella Dec 1, 2003 9:54 PM
last time by Spazmatical Dec 2, 2003 10:05 PM
comment by PainKiller Dec 2, 2003 11:09 AM
now by Spazmatical Dec 2, 2003 10:11 PM
..the catalonian bookstore.. by falbhanach Dec 1, 2003 8:43 PM
ironic.... by PainKiller Dec 2, 2003 2:27 PM
This came to me.....real quick.....What do you think? IS there anything here? by jamesdean Dec 1, 2003 7:29 PM
Ok, i hate this....why did i write it? by jamesdean Dec 1, 2003 7:38 PM
if it's shit by Illuminara Dec 1, 2003 8:42 PM
honestly? by Illuminara Dec 1, 2003 8:42 PM
???? by PainKiller Dec 2, 2003 1:05 PM
perhaps my own view by Illuminara Dec 2, 2003 1:55 PM
Death by rain70 Dec 2, 2003 9:23 AM
I think by ~K Dec 3, 2003 12:20 AM
YEs i thought of that by jamesdean Dec 3, 2003 2:18 PM
... by ~K Dec 4, 2003 12:50 AM
actually, i rather like this. by Ambon Pereira Dec 3, 2003 2:30 AM
As do i by jamesdean Dec 3, 2003 2:19 PM
Red Neck Long Gone Blues by Boom tin dog Dec 1, 2003 5:32 PM
I want a guitar by jamesdean Dec 1, 2003 7:13 PM
OLDIES (PC) by noangel Dec 1, 2003 5:09 PM
re by prisilla Dec 8, 2003 7:00 PM
Mongrels by noangel Dec 1, 2003 4:59 PM
when we dance the tango, could we ask for anything more. by jamesdean Dec 1, 2003 3:20 PM
and Listerine by Illuminara Dec 1, 2003 3:25 PM
I love it, by jamesdean Dec 1, 2003 3:35 PM
anywhere by Illuminara Dec 1, 2003 3:38 PM
This is not the cream cake I ordered, Mister...Mine was more manly. (PC) by GG_train Dec 1, 2003 3:04 PM
Yeah, Love is somethin like that....... by jamesdean Dec 1, 2003 3:24 PM
James Dead? by GG_train Feb 5, 2004 1:54 PM
I find by Illuminara Dec 1, 2003 3:28 PM
thankyou Illuminara by GG_train Feb 5, 2004 1:53 PM
eh by Hester Prynne Dec 1, 2003 4:54 PM
How is it sexist? by jamesdean Dec 1, 2003 6:54 PM
I personally by Illuminara Dec 1, 2003 6:58 PM
I would have said by Hester Prynne Dec 2, 2003 6:31 PM
im sorry by GG_train Dec 2, 2003 1:27 AM
Wrong is Right, Right is Wrong by Illuminara Dec 1, 2003 2:43 PM
i like by GG_train Dec 1, 2003 3:13 PM
the beauty of poetry by Illuminara Dec 1, 2003 3:20 PM
fair is foul and foul is fair by bullphrog Dec 1, 2003 3:39 PM
assume by Illuminara Dec 1, 2003 3:46 PM
IT would be hard to assume by bullphrog Dec 1, 2003 4:13 PM
the particular by Illuminara Dec 1, 2003 4:15 PM
my WORD! by bullphrog Dec 1, 2003 4:43 PM
never said by Illuminara Dec 1, 2003 5:03 PM
Heavens to mercatroy! by Hester Prynne Dec 1, 2003 5:35 PM
not so harsh by bullphrog Dec 1, 2003 6:01 PM
Oh man by Hester Prynne Dec 1, 2003 5:09 PM
before your feet by Illuminara Dec 1, 2003 5:10 PM
A Goddess laments, or Stick to your own kind. by Hester Prynne Dec 1, 2003 12:50 PM
Hester Prynne... by PainKiller Dec 1, 2003 2:21 PM
Man by Hester Prynne Dec 1, 2003 4:27 PM
miss prynne by bullphrog Dec 1, 2003 4:45 PM
aright, now first we're gonna do it by Hester Prynne Dec 1, 2003 5:20 PM


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