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Board Archive  •  Poetry  •  June 2002
Poetry

This board is where members can post their own poetry, or provide helpful critiques to other poets. Most poets who post here are looking for constructive feedback, so please don't hold back your responses.

This particular board is designed for poetry of a more "composed" nature, as opposed to the Action Poetry board, which is for more spontaneous or collaborative poetic interaction.


When Time becomes a circle by Tim Cunningham Jun 30, 2002 10:32 AM
it keeps circling ahead by Billectric Jun 30, 2002 12:45 PM
Just Another Example by ~K Jul 1, 2002 1:56 AM
oh under by scraft Jul 1, 2002 4:54 AM
thanks for the by Tim Cunningham Jul 1, 2002 9:13 AM
Stains by Heartstarter Jun 29, 2002 1:33 PM
Coda by A.W. Jun 29, 2002 9:54 AM
Very by ~K Jun 30, 2002 7:55 AM
nightshade muse by Burnt Kabob Jun 29, 2002 12:00 AM
A line for A by Harry Jun 28, 2002 6:11 PM
sanfransisco's enlightend elite by Kristopher Jun 28, 2002 4:10 PM
englightened hobos..nice idea by scraft Jul 1, 2002 6:07 AM
lovesick by embryo Jun 28, 2002 10:23 AM
Relaxing by cixi5 Jun 28, 2002 9:29 AM
... by scraft Jul 1, 2002 6:15 AM
confessional crisis of conscience by redwyrd Jun 28, 2002 9:14 AM
a brilliant by josh tonkin Jul 29, 2002 4:25 AM
thanks again by redwyrd Jul 30, 2002 11:36 PM
Fatigue by Tim Cunningham Jun 28, 2002 8:38 AM
darn right by scraft Jul 1, 2002 5:58 AM
In the begining...(PC) by slurpy Jun 28, 2002 12:41 AM
You just had to say hello... by ~K Jun 27, 2002 10:44 PM
Regret? by wantabeurdog Jul 2, 2002 3:55 PM
Exile by ~K Jul 2, 2002 5:01 PM
If you ... by wantabeurdog Jul 2, 2002 7:00 PM
i cry in my sleep sometimes by KissOfThisButterfly Jun 27, 2002 10:15 PM
so do i by scraft Jul 1, 2002 6:08 AM
Veneer - please critique by Lennon4Tibet Jun 27, 2002 4:04 PM
Veneer by penny Jun 27, 2002 9:59 PM
pretty good by KissOfThisButterfly Jun 27, 2002 10:19 PM
thinking - by not alice Jun 27, 2002 2:55 PM
story by KissOfThisButterfly Jun 27, 2002 10:24 PM
Granting Amnesty for Forbidden Sins by stellar Jun 27, 2002 2:35 PM
well by scraft Jul 1, 2002 4:56 AM
That is a problem by wantabeurdog Jul 1, 2002 7:39 PM
well.... by scraft Jul 2, 2002 4:10 AM
stellar by wantabeurdog Jul 1, 2002 7:42 PM
insecurity by snakhi Jun 27, 2002 12:54 PM
stronger than u think by dust Jun 27, 2002 1:15 PM
in the rooms of the mind (aka) o mindlove by visualnoise Jun 27, 2002 12:41 PM
drowned by palafax Jun 27, 2002 11:05 AM
I REALLY by ~K Jun 27, 2002 11:41 PM
there's something by Illuminara Jun 28, 2002 4:58 PM
Last Dance by Billectric Jun 30, 2002 12:32 PM
Dreaming Eden by HepKat Jun 26, 2002 7:39 PM
Seraphim's Tears by ~K Jun 27, 2002 4:47 AM
I know by wantabeurdog Jun 30, 2002 5:50 PM
The Myth of Angels by ~K Jun 30, 2002 9:28 PM
Owww, nice by Tim Cunningham Jul 4, 2002 12:18 PM
ah by ~K Jul 5, 2002 12:33 AM
So I'm telling you now by ~K Jun 26, 2002 7:20 PM
posting by wantabeurdog Jul 2, 2002 4:03 PM
On My Own by ~K Jul 2, 2002 4:47 PM
Oh my! by wantabeurdog Jul 2, 2002 5:16 PM
Over the rainbow by ~K Jul 2, 2002 5:33 PM
Oh God by wantabeurdog Jul 2, 2002 6:05 PM
How I know I'm God by ~K Jul 2, 2002 6:24 PM
What To Do On A Friday by Dave The Dov Jun 26, 2002 4:20 PM
pushyoupull by michaelsferrell Jun 26, 2002 4:11 PM
A Bottle Of Wine by Dave The Dov Jun 26, 2002 3:59 PM
mathematics of the great thinkers by snakhi Jun 26, 2002 11:35 AM
this is kinda by Illuminara Jun 28, 2002 5:00 PM
coal by snakhi Jun 26, 2002 11:29 AM
thanks by widowmaker Jun 26, 2002 11:35 AM
format by snakhi Jun 26, 2002 11:25 AM
forgiveness... by snakhi Jun 26, 2002 11:18 AM
Help me edit this, rip it apart by Kristopher Jun 26, 2002 10:59 AM
Rice paper eyes... by penny Jun 27, 2002 10:04 PM
Habibi Rakkasah by picasso Jun 26, 2002 7:13 AM
mystical, by newSkinjoy98 Jun 26, 2002 11:07 AM
thank you very much for this poem by stilltrucking Jun 26, 2002 11:12 AM
bathed by palafax Jun 26, 2002 6:41 AM
cool by Billectric Jun 30, 2002 12:51 PM
title -0 by papillon_8hr Jun 26, 2002 3:21 AM
i dont know, by newSkinjoy98 Jun 26, 2002 11:09 AM
u r by papillon_8hr Jun 27, 2002 6:37 AM
Well, actually, by Tim Cunningham Jun 27, 2002 1:14 AM
I'm by papillon_8hr Jun 27, 2002 6:39 AM
Role Model by Silas Jun 26, 2002 12:46 AM
Dada Is... (Repost for Skinjoy) by HepKat Jun 25, 2002 9:39 PM
i think you by newSkinjoy98 Jun 26, 2002 11:06 AM
Thanks by HepKat Jun 26, 2002 7:35 PM
hep-- by newSkinjoy98 Jun 27, 2002 3:47 PM
The by HepKat Jun 30, 2002 8:35 PM
I think by ~K Jun 26, 2002 7:35 PM
I by HepKat Jun 26, 2002 7:38 PM
Belle De nuit by cixi5 Jun 25, 2002 4:38 PM
ah, by newSkinjoy98 Jun 26, 2002 11:11 AM
Invisable by shorttigger Jun 25, 2002 9:56 AM
Ongoing pyrimd of... by Harry Jun 25, 2002 9:28 AM
I have something in similar style. by Kristopher Jun 25, 2002 1:07 PM
Send me the rest by Harry Jun 25, 2002 5:05 PM
I'm going to delete the next post by Billectric Jun 25, 2002 8:10 AM
ok, it's deleted . . . by Billectric Jun 25, 2002 8:09 AM
? by ra ra ra ra ra Jun 25, 2002 9:15 AM
Elongated shrew by Billectric Jun 30, 2002 12:36 PM
Here is the deal by Billectric Jun 30, 2002 12:43 PM
stop copying by IRIS Jun 25, 2002 1:48 PM
No more deletes, no more deletes by Billectric Jun 30, 2002 12:34 PM
green box by ra ra ra ra ra Jun 25, 2002 1:48 AM
yes i know by ra ra ra ra ra Jun 25, 2002 2:38 AM
it's not bad by Billectric Jun 25, 2002 8:07 AM
Two Worlds To Dance To by Burnt Kabob Jun 24, 2002 11:37 PM
Satisfaction in Suburbia (PC) by ModernAncient Jun 24, 2002 11:05 PM
outside my window by cixi5 Jun 24, 2002 9:32 PM
To Scraft concerning " Howl " by cixi5 Jun 24, 2002 9:13 PM
allusions by Kristopher Jun 25, 2002 12:12 AM
Thanks by cixi5 Jun 25, 2002 8:52 AM
regarding by Kristopher Jun 25, 2002 12:58 PM
What a well written comment--poetry w/o an audience is masturbation by penny Jun 27, 2002 10:10 PM
How Interesting by cixi5 Jun 28, 2002 9:19 AM
Mossy by Billectric Jun 24, 2002 7:03 PM
gibberish by redwyrd Jun 24, 2002 5:49 PM
who said by josh tonkin Jul 29, 2002 4:26 AM
on faith and innocence by snakhi Jun 24, 2002 3:47 PM
this is such a cliche analogy by snakhi Jun 24, 2002 3:45 PM
DEATH by Mr Fox Jun 24, 2002 1:52 PM
Oh Death by widowmaker Jun 24, 2002 2:05 PM
hope i live by Mr Fox Jun 24, 2002 3:08 PM
Silence. by IRIS Jun 24, 2002 1:12 PM
Weekly writings by Tim Cunningham Jun 24, 2002 12:43 PM
The Heart Pours Fourth by Dave The Dov Jun 24, 2002 11:40 AM
Heart-felt by Tim Cunningham Jun 24, 2002 12:39 PM
Eternity by widowmaker Jun 24, 2002 1:41 PM
On a Building Somewhere by scraft Jun 24, 2002 9:50 AM
Yes! by Tim Cunningham Jun 24, 2002 12:37 PM
no, not at all by scraft Jun 24, 2002 2:24 PM
the going world by widowmaker Jun 24, 2002 1:36 PM
ghosty reality by dust Jun 24, 2002 8:38 AM
eerie by stellar Jun 24, 2002 9:24 AM
Indecisivness by cixi5 Jun 24, 2002 8:01 AM
I want what I want by Tim Cunningham Jun 24, 2002 8:40 AM
No problem by cixi5 Jun 24, 2002 9:21 AM
in other words by dust Jun 24, 2002 8:43 AM
I agree by cixi5 Jun 24, 2002 9:24 AM
... by stellar Jun 24, 2002 9:28 AM
Lonely Nights in a Miami Bar by scraft Jun 24, 2002 5:07 AM
Now this is by Tim Cunningham Jun 24, 2002 8:38 AM
road to heaven by widowmaker Jun 24, 2002 1:30 PM
johnny cash by um Jun 25, 2002 12:43 AM
A.D.D by ~K Jun 23, 2002 4:21 PM
~K by wantabeurdog Jun 23, 2002 4:49 PM
Silly by ~K Jun 23, 2002 4:56 PM
Everthing is about me by wantabeurdog Jun 23, 2002 5:15 PM
add by tantricslide Jun 23, 2002 9:03 PM
2+2 = 5 by ~K Jun 24, 2002 1:07 AM
2+2=4 by tantricslide Jun 24, 2002 7:35 AM
deleted by IRIS Jun 23, 2002 4:17 PM
This is actually by Tim Cunningham Jun 24, 2002 3:42 AM
Tim by IRIS Jun 24, 2002 12:26 PM
Okay by Tim Cunningham Jun 24, 2002 12:36 PM
For all those others...Please Critique by Happas Jun 23, 2002 3:33 PM
Well by Tim Cunningham Jun 24, 2002 3:45 AM
don't mind at all by Happas Jun 24, 2002 3:28 PM
Demon's Seed by Pneumatoad Jun 23, 2002 12:19 PM
7-11 by cixi5 Jun 23, 2002 7:38 AM
heating by um Jun 24, 2002 12:15 AM
thanks um by cixi5 Jun 24, 2002 7:48 AM
yw by um Jun 27, 2002 12:40 AM
Dust by scraft Jun 23, 2002 5:44 AM
Push by Tim Cunningham Jun 23, 2002 5:23 AM
nice by um Jun 24, 2002 12:21 AM
impressed by dust Jun 24, 2002 2:22 AM
Thanks by Tim Cunningham Jun 24, 2002 3:34 AM
One sleeping by Tim Cunningham Jun 23, 2002 5:13 AM
I enjoyed, but... by scraft Jun 23, 2002 5:25 AM
Oww, well, I understand by Tim Cunningham Jun 23, 2002 5:32 AM
yea... by scraft Jun 23, 2002 5:36 AM
Ginsberg (don't let title fool you) by scraft Jun 23, 2002 5:00 AM
hmm by cixi5 Jun 23, 2002 6:49 AM
i'm... by Curly Jun 24, 2002 8:31 AM
hmm....let me understand by scraft Jun 24, 2002 11:32 AM
sure its inspired by Kristopher Jun 25, 2002 12:18 AM
now that's more like by cixi5 Jun 25, 2002 9:54 AM
did you get the allusions in that ? by Kristopher Jun 25, 2002 12:53 PM
no problem by cixi5 Jun 25, 2002 4:22 PM
wow!! by tantricslide Jun 25, 2002 12:34 AM
time flies, dies, lies by scraft Jun 23, 2002 4:54 AM
that last sentence by Tim Cunningham Jun 23, 2002 5:15 AM
thanks by scraft Jun 23, 2002 5:21 AM
I still have exams by Tim Cunningham Jun 23, 2002 5:24 AM
now this... by cixi5 Jun 23, 2002 7:50 AM
BUFFALO RIVER HOME by um Jun 24, 2002 1:15 AM
To Tim C. re: At the Gardens by Kristessa Jun 23, 2002 1:18 AM
hey, cool reply by Tim Cunningham Jun 23, 2002 1:30 AM
At the gardens by Tim Cunningham Jun 22, 2002 11:27 PM
very by papillon_8hr Jun 24, 2002 4:10 AM
Thanks, as always by Tim Cunningham Jun 24, 2002 4:19 AM
will by papillon_8hr Jun 24, 2002 4:23 AM
:):) by Tim Cunningham Jun 24, 2002 4:26 AM
The Rigorous Fleeing of Humanity by Poet of the Damned Jun 22, 2002 4:05 PM
wow by wantabeurdog Jun 22, 2002 5:03 PM
He swallowed a fly by Tim Cunningham Jun 22, 2002 3:48 PM
I enjoyed by wantabeurdog Jun 22, 2002 5:08 PM
well, who knows what it's about? by Tim Cunningham Jun 22, 2002 11:49 PM
Death by Poet of the Damned Jun 22, 2002 3:31 PM
the line by wantabeurdog Jun 22, 2002 4:58 PM
silence by cixi5 Jun 22, 2002 3:12 PM
liked this by IRIS Jun 22, 2002 3:18 PM
silence by Tim Cunningham Jun 22, 2002 3:42 PM
your canvas by cixi5 Jun 22, 2002 2:57 PM
This by orphicgoblin Jun 22, 2002 3:02 PM
thanks you goblin you by cixi5 Jun 22, 2002 3:06 PM
I by Alienamigo Jun 24, 2002 12:57 PM
can you see me behind these leaves? by orange Jun 22, 2002 1:34 PM
Not yet by wantabeurdog Jun 22, 2002 2:04 PM
Colors of my crayons by softchew Jun 22, 2002 10:14 AM
Oh yes by wantabeurdog Jun 22, 2002 12:55 PM
White Fields I by scraft Jun 22, 2002 4:14 AM
Damn by wantabeurdog Jun 22, 2002 1:13 PM
wow by tantricslide Jun 22, 2002 11:26 PM
always like having an audience by scraft Jun 23, 2002 4:43 AM
A matrix by Tim Cunningham Jun 23, 2002 7:23 AM
yes, perfect, whoopie! by scraft Jun 23, 2002 8:44 AM
ashes to dust by Illuminara Jun 21, 2002 6:33 PM
ashes and dust by softchew Jun 22, 2002 10:18 AM
thanks chew by Illuminara Jun 22, 2002 10:45 AM
Opium Drained Hallucinations by wantabeurdog Jun 21, 2002 5:09 PM
Yes...I definetly by Tim Cunningham Jun 22, 2002 2:58 AM
very awesome by Poet of the Damned Jun 22, 2002 4:17 PM
Thank you both by wantabeurdog Jun 22, 2002 5:13 PM
Ocean Eyed Voltage by HepKat Jun 21, 2002 3:00 PM
solstice impending by manzeken Jun 21, 2002 9:03 AM
On soltice impending by cixi5 Jun 22, 2002 2:50 PM
street walk by dust Jun 21, 2002 9:03 AM
great by Tim Cunningham Jun 22, 2002 2:59 AM
Old lady by Tim Cunningham Jun 21, 2002 8:07 AM
I love it by ModernAncient Jun 21, 2002 8:43 PM
My pleasure !) by Tim Cunningham Jun 22, 2002 2:57 AM
wow by cixi5 Jun 22, 2002 3:01 PM
A simple question to self of love (PC) by scfonz Jun 20, 2002 9:56 PM
i... by Curly Jun 21, 2002 9:28 AM
Putting out the garbage by Tim Cunningham Jun 20, 2002 1:36 PM
Matthew's gospel by Tim Cunningham Jun 20, 2002 1:31 PM
cool! by AngelHeadedHipster Jun 21, 2002 5:29 AM
Penny Wishes by ModernAncient Jun 20, 2002 9:56 AM
like this by IRIS Jun 20, 2002 2:52 PM
Crack the Whip by ModernAncient Jun 20, 2002 9:56 AM
Alcohol by Tim Cunningham Jun 20, 2002 1:38 PM
folklore by Tim Cunningham Jun 20, 2002 5:07 AM
what toys by Croman Jun 20, 2002 9:29 AM
Poetry That's More Composed in Nature by Illuminara Jun 20, 2002 12:33 AM
rhyming and stuff by ra ra ra ra ra Jun 20, 2002 12:43 AM
my point by Illuminara Jun 20, 2002 12:44 AM
ignore that by ra ra ra ra ra Jun 20, 2002 12:46 AM
oh you agree by ra ra ra ra ra Jun 20, 2002 12:48 AM
apologies by Illuminara Jun 20, 2002 12:50 AM
ill put my scales away then by ra ra ra ra ra Jun 20, 2002 1:03 AM
am I there yet? by softchew Jun 22, 2002 10:24 AM
another artery severed by snakhi Jun 19, 2002 11:16 PM
untitled by snakhi Jun 19, 2002 11:13 PM
untitled by Tim Cunningham Jun 19, 2002 11:17 PM
unfeigned... by snakhi Jun 19, 2002 11:08 PM
Who broke your heart? by cixi5 Jun 22, 2002 3:05 PM
Walking on a generic New York street (PC) by slurpy Jun 19, 2002 10:47 PM
Charlie Parker (PC) by slurpy Jun 19, 2002 10:44 PM
never read that poem by Tim Cunningham Jun 19, 2002 10:49 PM
I'm not surprised by slurpy Jun 19, 2002 11:07 PM
sadly enough by Tim Cunningham Jun 19, 2002 11:16 PM
Kerouac poems by eddy Jun 20, 2002 2:00 AM
Let Me Feel....PC by teddie Jun 19, 2002 7:42 PM
it's too by piph Jun 19, 2002 8:59 PM
Not meant by teddie Jun 19, 2002 9:19 PM
aren't they though? by piph Jun 19, 2002 11:39 PM
yest but by slurpy Jun 19, 2002 11:27 PM
well... by piph Jun 19, 2002 11:37 PM
Miss you too much by surfermike Jun 21, 2002 3:13 AM
a pie contest in april. by obtuseclarity Jun 19, 2002 6:50 PM
this poem is self aware. feedback? by Kristopher Jun 19, 2002 5:06 PM
Nice paranoļa by Tim Cunningham Jun 19, 2002 10:48 PM
satire-irony-yes paranoid-I dont see it by Kristopher Jun 19, 2002 11:56 PM
There! outside these walls, halls and nightmares. Feedback??? by Kristopher Jun 19, 2002 5:04 PM
Going to sleep (for the little ones) by Tim Cunningham Jun 19, 2002 2:52 PM
The Sailboat by midday shadows Jun 19, 2002 10:51 AM
Secret love-making by Tim Cunningham Jun 19, 2002 8:09 AM
experience by spanky2 Jun 19, 2002 10:45 AM
indeed by darkblood Jun 19, 2002 10:53 AM
ssssssssssssstttttt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Both of you by Tim Cunningham Jun 19, 2002 12:21 PM
Carnal by ~K Jun 19, 2002 12:57 PM
the hallway of a woman by josh tonkin Jun 19, 2002 5:21 AM
A million by Tim Cunningham Jun 19, 2002 7:55 AM
no end in sight by josh tonkin Jun 19, 2002 5:18 AM
(Whistling) for the Dog by ~K Jun 18, 2002 10:54 PM
let go or let's go by piph Jun 18, 2002 11:00 PM
........... by ~K Jun 18, 2002 11:13 PM
~K by wantabeurdog Jun 19, 2002 4:34 AM
Bad Dog! by ~K Jun 20, 2002 8:17 PM
Passing by walstead Jun 21, 2002 5:56 AM
righto then by stellar Jun 20, 2002 5:43 AM
Let's Do It!!!!! by ~K Jun 20, 2002 8:13 PM
Oh dear by stellar Jun 21, 2002 5:53 AM
well hidden by dust Jun 18, 2002 12:20 PM
Its never to late by ~K Jun 18, 2002 11:30 PM
key by dust Jun 24, 2002 2:56 AM
It seems by Tim Cunningham Jun 19, 2002 7:57 AM
thanks by dust Jun 19, 2002 12:36 PM
lol by Tim Cunningham Jun 19, 2002 12:38 PM
fourth and final one (what did y'all think of them four?) by Tim Cunningham Jun 18, 2002 12:07 PM
i liked by josh tonkin Jun 19, 2002 1:18 AM
the right word by papillon_8hr Jun 20, 2002 1:54 AM
I'm on it... by Tim Cunningham Jun 20, 2002 4:48 AM
The third poem by Tim Cunningham Jun 18, 2002 12:01 PM
beautiful. by darkblood Jun 19, 2002 10:52 AM
poem number two by Tim Cunningham Jun 18, 2002 9:21 AM
well by darkblood Jun 18, 2002 11:33 AM
:) by Tim Cunningham Jun 18, 2002 12:02 PM
what i picked up on the wrong side of the bed this morning by TwistedFlop Jun 18, 2002 8:21 AM
wow by Tim Cunningham Jun 18, 2002 12:03 PM
It's a mix by TwistedFlop Jun 19, 2002 10:09 AM
what i picked up on the wrong side of the bed this morning by TwistedFlop Jun 18, 2002 8:19 AM
Poem number 1 by Tim Cunningham Jun 18, 2002 7:25 AM
Forsaking Your Memory by ~K Jun 17, 2002 10:22 PM
"You bled through the decency of reality" by stellar Jun 18, 2002 4:45 AM
This is not about you!!!! by ~K Jun 19, 2002 1:28 PM
What? by stellar Jun 19, 2002 4:38 PM
cool by Tim Cunningham Jun 18, 2002 7:22 AM
Thanks for reading! by ~K Jun 19, 2002 1:25 PM
Post-modern crap (PC) by slurpy Jun 17, 2002 10:17 PM
umm by Kristopher Jun 17, 2002 10:21 PM
your certainly correct in part... by slurpy Jun 19, 2002 12:45 AM
Cassady in kimono. by $B-Love$ Jun 17, 2002 9:02 PM
mud bubble honey by jota Jun 17, 2002 9:35 PM
dad's rooms by manzeken Jun 17, 2002 7:42 PM
sorry by J. Randall Jun 18, 2002 12:32 AM
Reputed Legitimate Toboggon by stellar Jun 17, 2002 5:34 PM
This by orphicgoblin Jun 17, 2002 6:13 PM
Thank you by stellar Jun 19, 2002 4:24 AM
the showers of wonderland by darkblood Jun 17, 2002 12:38 PM
Hmmmm by Tim Cunningham Jun 18, 2002 7:21 AM
South of Houston by duluoz Jun 17, 2002 6:56 AM
hnnnnnnnn by $B-Love$ Jun 17, 2002 9:05 PM
to love and be silent by josh tonkin Jun 17, 2002 5:17 AM
New stuff to rip apart. Feed back is like crack I need it by Kristopher Jun 16, 2002 11:24 PM
nice by izzzy Jun 17, 2002 2:21 PM
nice by izzzy Jun 17, 2002 2:22 PM
I would love to rip this apart by ~K Jun 17, 2002 11:00 PM
feels like flesh by feelslikekansas Jun 16, 2002 9:28 PM
Liquid Lilacs by BlueWildFlower Jun 16, 2002 7:31 PM
The Massochist (PC) by slurpy Jun 16, 2002 3:36 PM
you by izzzy Jun 17, 2002 2:28 PM
leaf. - by obtuseclarity Jun 16, 2002 12:01 PM
a dream within reality by michaelsferrell Jun 16, 2002 7:21 AM
i by izzzy Jun 17, 2002 2:26 PM
neon &(alloverme) by michaelsferrell Jun 16, 2002 7:10 AM
woooo---- i'm by izzzy Jun 17, 2002 2:24 PM
fallen gods & spiritual intercourse by michaelsferrell Jun 16, 2002 6:51 AM
wow.. by izzzy Jun 17, 2002 2:23 PM
now is by josh tonkin Jun 16, 2002 6:15 AM
last line by J. Randall Jun 16, 2002 7:07 PM
negativity by josh tonkin Jun 17, 2002 1:33 AM
Dante thought Hell was bad by Tim Cunningham Jun 15, 2002 11:57 PM
i like by josh tonkin Jun 16, 2002 6:04 AM
im with you by josh tonkin Jun 15, 2002 9:55 PM
* * * * by subterrissole Jun 15, 2002 10:46 PM
This poem by Tim Cunningham Jun 15, 2002 11:50 PM
The Letter-Opener (Please Critique) by alvaro alarcon Jun 15, 2002 5:18 PM
Cool by Tim Cunningham Jun 15, 2002 11:48 PM
Shivering by Tim Cunningham Jun 15, 2002 2:33 PM
that was nice! by primavera Jun 15, 2002 3:41 PM
No need to thank me by Tim Cunningham Jun 15, 2002 11:46 PM
it was by josh tonkin Jun 15, 2002 9:36 PM
Eliot? by Tim Cunningham Jun 15, 2002 11:45 PM
Fantastic by Adair Vanderford Jun 21, 2002 10:48 AM
My homework experiment by Robipoet Jun 15, 2002 8:05 AM
Cosmic Experiment #2 by Robipoet Jun 15, 2002 8:00 AM
yes by josh tonkin Jun 15, 2002 10:08 PM
Questing Atlantis by redwyrd Jun 14, 2002 4:18 PM
Nice by Tim Cunningham Jun 15, 2002 2:16 PM
The only alien around... by zephyr Jun 14, 2002 3:53 PM
The Macroscope Jazz Requiem by Crimbobuline Jun 14, 2002 9:39 AM
good night bro by zion Jun 14, 2002 8:42 AM
Bro by Tim Cunningham Jun 15, 2002 2:41 PM
we sat beside each other by age Jun 13, 2002 6:54 PM
night blues by rouge saint Jun 13, 2002 6:34 PM
while i wait for the train to pass by redwyrd Jun 13, 2002 4:15 PM
cool by msultz Aug 15, 2002 4:31 PM
Drifting away by greenteaFRK Jun 13, 2002 4:14 PM
hey by FallenTear Jun 13, 2002 4:22 PM
10:30 word binge (a la dada) by redwyrd Jun 13, 2002 3:42 PM
xo by snakhi Jun 13, 2002 1:57 PM
um.. by greenteaFRK Jun 13, 2002 4:39 PM
i can see by snakhi Jun 14, 2002 3:36 PM
heart highway (?) by snakhi Jun 13, 2002 1:32 PM
Whenever a ghost appears by Tim Cunningham Jun 13, 2002 7:09 AM
policies by snakhi Jun 13, 2002 2:17 AM
This by Tim Cunningham Jun 13, 2002 7:04 AM
that reminds me by snakhi Jun 13, 2002 1:40 PM
Cool by Tim Cunningham Jun 13, 2002 1:52 PM
haha by snakhi Jun 13, 2002 2:02 PM
visions. by IRIS Jun 12, 2002 9:58 PM
Hmmm by Tim Cunningham Jun 13, 2002 7:01 AM
To the Sway by ryan storm Jun 12, 2002 9:53 PM
Pineal swirl by J. Randall Jun 13, 2002 1:20 PM
on dreaming (birth and death) by ryan storm Jun 13, 2002 6:35 PM
Where's your pickup (PLLLLLLLEAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSECRITIQUE!!!!!!) by slurpy Jun 12, 2002 8:55 PM
it was. by josh tonkin Jun 13, 2002 4:40 AM
pick-ups by J. Randall Jun 13, 2002 1:09 PM
thank you by slurpy Jun 16, 2002 3:02 PM
hot by greenteaFRK Jun 12, 2002 6:29 PM
Placid defemation (PC) by stellar Jun 12, 2002 3:54 PM
... by stellar Jun 14, 2002 10:45 AM
How Many Ways by ~K Jun 15, 2002 1:32 AM
The man next door died by Tim Cunningham Jun 12, 2002 8:45 AM
I'm On Crete by Plo Jun 12, 2002 8:10 AM
an omen by josh tonkin Jun 12, 2002 5:37 AM
It's good by Tim Cunningham Jun 12, 2002 8:49 AM
not mad by josh tonkin Jun 13, 2002 4:42 AM
Well by Tim Cunningham Jun 13, 2002 6:51 AM
poetry by J. Randall Jun 13, 2002 1:35 PM
the bazaar by josh tonkin Jun 12, 2002 5:23 AM
been there i think... by redwyrd Jun 13, 2002 3:50 PM
3Three by Crimbobuline Jun 12, 2002 4:47 AM
loved it by josh tonkin Jun 12, 2002 5:30 AM
perfect as bruises by michaelsferrell Jun 12, 2002 2:26 AM
Underneath ME by michaelsferrell Jun 12, 2002 2:11 AM
american dreaming. (just another nihlistic rant.) by josh tonkin Jun 11, 2002 11:25 PM
Damn! by J. Randall Jun 12, 2002 12:11 AM
thanks by josh tonkin Jun 12, 2002 4:05 AM
Wow! by AngelHeadedHipster Jun 12, 2002 5:15 AM
if you like this check out straitjacket by redwyrd (2posts down) by josh tonkin Jun 12, 2002 5:49 AM
thanks... by redwyrd Jun 13, 2002 7:33 PM
GREAT POEM- by Sid Jun 12, 2002 7:40 PM
um, will someone read and tell me what they think by sonofthesun Jun 11, 2002 10:08 PM
wonderful by redwyrd Jun 11, 2002 10:12 PM
it was. by josh tonkin Jun 11, 2002 11:27 PM
Reminds by Tim Cunningham Jun 12, 2002 2:57 AM
thank you all by sonofthesun Jun 12, 2002 2:02 PM
straitjacket by redwyrd Jun 11, 2002 9:44 PM
This has by ~K Jun 11, 2002 10:18 PM
Love that by stellar Jun 12, 2002 3:06 AM
excellent by josh tonkin Jun 12, 2002 5:40 AM
it made me smile by sonofthesun Jun 12, 2002 1:53 PM
how do you spell equadistant by sonofthesun Jun 11, 2002 9:27 PM
Scribblescribble (please critique) by ModernAncient Jun 11, 2002 6:18 PM
sweet sensless drivel... by redwyrd Jun 11, 2002 9:19 PM
My Spinning Head by Drewc Jun 11, 2002 6:01 PM
a poem i wrote! how bout some feedback... by playcebo Jun 11, 2002 3:45 PM
ah by michaelsferrell Jun 12, 2002 2:28 AM
vengence by spanky2 Jun 11, 2002 1:22 PM
The sight by anarkissed Jun 11, 2002 12:30 PM
The economy by Tim Cunningham Jun 11, 2002 12:52 PM
Without thought remember by sonofthesun Jun 11, 2002 10:06 AM
The day of zero by Tim Cunningham Jun 11, 2002 8:12 AM
HelloTim by visions Jun 11, 2002 8:57 AM
Thank you by Tim Cunningham Jun 11, 2002 9:18 AM
oh Tim by visions Jun 11, 2002 9:53 AM
*blush* by Tim Cunningham Jun 11, 2002 10:04 AM
artwork? by anarkissed Jun 11, 2002 11:57 AM
definitely by papillon_8hr Jun 19, 2002 2:33 AM
it's already by Tim Cunningham Jun 19, 2002 7:51 AM
taking it slow..... by papillon_8hr Jun 20, 2002 1:51 AM
on leaving by josh tonkin Jun 11, 2002 12:22 AM
alone by Illuminara Jun 11, 2002 12:29 AM
Whow by Tim Cunningham Jun 11, 2002 8:14 AM
www.FreeStyleLiterature.com by Medaplor Jun 10, 2002 3:51 PM
Complete Madness by Dubbs Jun 10, 2002 1:04 PM
Illusion by Tim Cunningham Jun 10, 2002 8:59 AM
really by Croman Jun 11, 2002 12:57 AM
Nice by Tim Cunningham Jun 11, 2002 8:15 AM
Tim C. by papillon_8hr Jun 19, 2002 2:31 AM
Papillon by Tim Cunningham Jun 19, 2002 7:53 AM
that's only..... by papillon_8hr Jun 24, 2002 4:03 AM
title- 0 by papillon_8hr Jun 10, 2002 3:17 AM
great by Tim Cunningham Jun 10, 2002 8:52 AM
thank you by papillon_8hr Jun 11, 2002 4:08 AM
Thank you by Tim Cunningham Jun 11, 2002 8:16 AM
the car park at the end of the world by Silas Jun 10, 2002 12:40 AM
Nice by Tim Cunningham Jun 10, 2002 8:53 AM
discovery of a bell, one million years from now by Silas Jun 10, 2002 12:38 AM
This is by ~K Jun 11, 2002 9:54 PM
The Insanity Sessions by HepKat Jun 9, 2002 4:57 PM
GO! by ContemplateJazz Jun 10, 2002 3:28 AM
being bop... by ContemplateJazz Jun 10, 2002 3:37 AM
Hell Yeah! by HepKat Jun 10, 2002 5:24 PM
Greeting Nature by writersblock886 Jun 9, 2002 2:47 PM
a pleasure by Croman Jun 11, 2002 2:12 AM
This is serious stuff... by Tim Cunningham Jun 9, 2002 1:29 PM
serious it is by flowersinherhair Jun 9, 2002 2:29 PM
my heart leaps of joy by Arnoa Jun 10, 2002 7:24 AM
Hahahahahaha by Tim Cunningham Jun 10, 2002 8:50 AM
Fire & Rust (lust in couplets) - a collaboration with litnrod by doreen peri Jun 9, 2002 10:40 AM
This could be... by Tim Cunningham Jun 9, 2002 1:23 PM
"Self-acceptance lies somewhere inside this sandwich I'm sure" by Crimbobuline Jun 9, 2002 8:51 AM
why by snakhi Jun 9, 2002 1:40 AM
Niles Canyon Road, Highway 84 by jota Jun 8, 2002 6:54 PM
Whow by tangerine Jun 9, 2002 4:28 AM
dream by jota Jun 9, 2002 6:56 AM
this... by Curly Jun 8, 2002 6:24 AM
Opened my eyes for this? by stellar Jun 7, 2002 2:32 PM
that was... by Curly Jun 8, 2002 6:28 AM
You are by stellar Jun 9, 2002 8:02 AM
R.I.P my friend (Thoughts appreciated) by Sabertash Jun 7, 2002 11:00 AM
very nice tribute by AngelHeadedHipster Jun 8, 2002 6:27 AM
writing on the wall by flowersinherhair Jun 7, 2002 8:38 AM
teenage angst (short piece) by AngelHeadedHipster Jun 7, 2002 6:15 AM
back then by firefly Jun 9, 2002 5:11 PM
Spare Bedroom Melancholy by Green Shirt Guy Jun 6, 2002 8:47 PM
Dignity by ModernAncient Jun 6, 2002 3:19 PM
I like by IRIS Jun 7, 2002 4:01 PM
lesser men & I'm ordinary(I wait) by michaelsferrell Jun 6, 2002 1:45 PM
F. Nietzsche the Temptor (Please Critique) by alvaro alarcon Jun 6, 2002 11:09 AM
The Nietzschean Dilemma (Please Critique) by alvaro alarcon Jun 6, 2002 10:29 AM
goofey by nocker Jun 10, 2002 1:01 PM
middlegroundsmiths by Crimbobuline Jun 6, 2002 8:02 AM
...god said cantankerate... by Crimbobuline Jun 6, 2002 7:48 AM
Hoping a soul in a library by izza Jun 6, 2002 5:10 PM
deathdeathdeathdeaddeath by michaelsferrell Jun 5, 2002 1:00 PM
Ink Painting by BlueWildFlower Jun 4, 2002 10:44 PM
Sand Castles by BlueWildFlower Jun 4, 2002 10:35 PM
I dig it by Kristopher Jun 5, 2002 12:50 PM
Thank you by BlueWildFlower Jun 6, 2002 12:23 AM
The Bones of Others by Jive Jun 4, 2002 7:53 PM
The dark side (an excersize in embracing the Id) by Kristopher Jun 4, 2002 3:21 PM
kristopher by piph Jun 4, 2002 10:53 PM
thanks by Kristopher Jun 5, 2002 12:56 AM
Prozac Living and Ridalin Lobotomy (please critique) by ModernAncient Jun 4, 2002 1:59 PM
cool by AngelHeadedHipster Jun 6, 2002 5:56 AM
Freezer Burn-Repost by HepKat Jun 4, 2002 12:27 PM
hepkat, by newSkinjoy98 Jun 5, 2002 8:26 AM
Andrew by HepKat Jun 5, 2002 9:12 PM
Hep... by CBL Jun 5, 2002 8:32 AM
The Cosmic Nipple by Crimbobuline Jun 4, 2002 9:11 AM
Mystical Graffiti by HepKat Jun 4, 2002 1:22 PM
yeah by um Jun 5, 2002 4:52 AM
Thankyou by Crimbobuline Jun 6, 2002 8:42 AM
Memory or dream by stellar Jun 4, 2002 8:43 AM
Of me by papillon_8hr Jun 4, 2002 3:05 AM
Macabre by Tim Cunningham Jun 20, 2002 4:53 AM
Blind as always by 1969 Jun 3, 2002 11:06 PM
clowns by stellar Jun 3, 2002 4:06 PM
Consider Me by ~K Jun 11, 2002 11:10 PM
I by stellar Jun 12, 2002 6:14 AM
gazed up stars by michaelsferrell Jun 3, 2002 2:29 PM
i know i don't always by piph Jun 3, 2002 3:04 PM
Voyage by Alienamigo Jun 3, 2002 12:58 PM
I by HepKat Jun 5, 2002 9:23 PM
Take a stitch Hep..... by Alienamigo Jun 6, 2002 6:31 AM
the hallway of a woman (PC) by josh tonkin Jun 3, 2002 6:14 AM
final.....words by papillon_8hr Jun 3, 2002 2:22 AM
*red cheeks* by Tim Cunningham Jun 20, 2002 4:56 AM
YELLing to Minutes by newSkinjoy98 Jun 3, 2002 12:39 AM
Torn lonesome page of love's bold scripture -please read and respond by lovelight Jun 2, 2002 9:10 PM
your words by Kristopher Jun 4, 2002 11:52 AM
Hot & Cold./ How Does That Work ? by IRIS Jun 2, 2002 4:20 PM
Sunday......................... by Uncle B Jun 2, 2002 10:00 AM
Ode to Sartre's blind eye (short experimental piece) by AngelHeadedHipster Jun 2, 2002 7:51 AM
An edit by izza Jun 2, 2002 12:06 PM
another edit :) by Crimbobuline Jun 4, 2002 9:17 AM
Psitron Village by Robipoet Jun 2, 2002 5:30 AM
one time by um Jun 2, 2002 6:22 AM
yeah by um Jun 3, 2002 12:38 AM
dreams&sensual by michaelsferrell Jun 1, 2002 5:27 PM
re: dreams&sensual by AngelHeadedHipster Jun 2, 2002 7:46 AM
did you walk like me (please critique) by ModernAncient Jun 1, 2002 3:19 PM
Mother earth bent over (an attempt at an edit) by izza Jun 1, 2002 4:04 PM
looks good to me by IRIS Jun 1, 2002 4:13 PM
Liked alot by Doberman8 Jun 3, 2002 4:08 PM
My life among the needle by Uncle B Jun 1, 2002 2:34 PM
poems/rants long reading by Kristopher Jun 1, 2002 1:17 PM
Any comments? by Kristopher Jun 1, 2002 4:28 PM
mellow out by fatcat41 Jun 1, 2002 11:10 PM
Im mellow by Kristopher Jun 4, 2002 2:33 AM
yea by Kristopher Nov 8, 2002 12:06 AM


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