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The Haiku Board

Try out your original haikus here. If you would like to be critiqued, please say so (PC=please critique, or NC=no critique).

kkizer offers some useful background information on haiku :

The classic form of haiku generally involves the seasons or some simple, unadulterated (not overly verbose) description of life or an instant image before the poet. The three poets generally considered to be masters of the haiku tradition are Basho (1644-94), Buson (1716-83) and Issa (1763-1827). They differed greatly: Basho was spiritual and poignant, Buson was more artistic and Issa was more emotional and humane.

What's interesing to note is that the commonly accepted 5-7-5 syllable style was never used by any of them. In fact, according to my research, the only 5-7-5 syllable style I could discover was as part of a larger poem called a RENGA, which was a collaborative poem. The first poet wrote the first verse in the 5-7-5 form, and each following poet had a different structure to follow.

For more on the history of haiku, please read this page.


not a pond by Jimboloco May 31, 2004 11:04 AM
... by Beth Vieira May 31, 2004 1:22 PM
Japan by Andeh May 29, 2004 2:41 PM
London by Andeh May 29, 2004 2:43 PM
China by Andeh May 29, 2004 2:47 PM
hong kong by wendyfaber Jun 2, 2004 3:07 AM
reluctant searcher [pc] by wendyfaber Jun 2, 2004 3:11 AM
Yeah by Andeh Jun 2, 2004 9:57 AM
tourist greeting by wendyfaber Jun 2, 2004 3:04 AM
Summer vacation by Sylph May 29, 2004 12:58 PM
Astronomy (For J.K.L.) by Netzari5730 May 28, 2004 5:35 PM
Lovely by Createyers Jun 1, 2004 9:53 AM
cypress pc by Beth Vieira May 27, 2004 5:43 PM
sumi-e by mtmynd May 27, 2004 5:49 PM
... by Beth Vieira May 27, 2004 6:52 PM
Beth by mtmynd May 28, 2004 7:30 AM
starfish pc by Beth Vieira May 27, 2004 5:41 PM
--- by mtmynd May 27, 2004 5:57 PM
... by Beth Vieira May 27, 2004 6:51 PM
bird rock pc by Beth Vieira May 27, 2004 5:39 PM
--- by mtmynd May 27, 2004 5:46 PM
... by Beth Vieira May 27, 2004 6:49 PM
... by pottygok May 30, 2004 9:47 PM
thanks by Beth Vieira May 31, 2004 1:19 PM
lines by beatvibe May 27, 2004 4:07 PM
snort by mtmynd May 27, 2004 5:23 PM
PC A Modern Introduction to Philosophy by Nicholas S. May 26, 2004 10:16 AM
I like it but I don't know much about haiku by tinker jack May 30, 2004 8:55 AM
Yeah by Nicholas S. May 30, 2004 11:33 AM
beats me by tinker jack May 31, 2004 10:09 AM
no rules for dreams (haiku like? PC) by tinker jack May 31, 2004 10:29 AM
shop talk by Jimboloco May 31, 2004 11:06 AM
all I can do is ramble, you striked me wordless by tinker jack May 31, 2004 8:07 PM
divers pc by Beth Vieira May 25, 2004 4:19 PM
... by pottygok May 26, 2004 5:39 AM
... by Beth Vieira May 27, 2004 5:37 PM
kelp pc by Beth Vieira May 25, 2004 4:17 PM
... by pottygok May 26, 2004 5:46 AM
you are by Createyers May 26, 2004 2:25 PM
reading by Beth Vieira May 26, 2004 5:07 PM
... by pottygok May 27, 2004 5:45 AM
I agree by Createyers May 27, 2004 6:33 AM
thanks by Createyers May 27, 2004 6:31 AM
resonance by Beth Vieira May 27, 2004 5:34 PM
tides pc by Beth Vieira May 25, 2004 4:16 PM
: by Createyers May 26, 2004 2:23 PM
... by Beth Vieira May 27, 2004 5:26 PM
foam pc by Beth Vieira May 25, 2004 4:15 PM
... by pottygok May 26, 2004 5:56 AM
... by Beth Vieira May 27, 2004 5:19 PM
Meditation: Nos. 1& 2 by Createyers May 24, 2004 11:28 AM
greedy death (PC) by tinker jack May 24, 2004 3:15 PM
boney fish (PC) by tinker jack May 24, 2004 3:33 PM
! by Createyers May 25, 2004 8:46 AM
I never knew by Createyers May 25, 2004 8:45 AM
thank you for most helpful comment by tinker jack May 29, 2004 5:59 PM
haha by Createyers Jun 1, 2004 6:27 AM
house by beatvibe May 23, 2004 9:43 PM
young man to old one - a series by seajay1221 May 21, 2004 8:04 PM
red eyes by rumball107 May 21, 2004 8:00 PM
eternal golden dawn by sonofthesun May 21, 2004 7:20 PM
xy-xx=0 by tinker jack May 21, 2004 5:10 PM
curiosity by sharon eiser May 21, 2004 6:41 PM
untitled by tinker jack May 21, 2004 9:30 PM
on an unrelated note.. by Createyers May 24, 2004 12:57 PM
G-d no by tinker jack Jun 3, 2004 10:09 AM
macabre, eh? by Createyers Jun 3, 2004 11:46 AM
skull and crossbones by tinker jack Jun 5, 2004 3:31 AM
but of course by Createyers Jun 7, 2004 6:17 AM
swimming at sunset by Beth Vieira May 21, 2004 4:01 PM
breathing in sunset by judih. May 21, 2004 8:56 PM
seafood dinner by Beth Vieira May 21, 2004 3:58 PM
reef by Beth Vieira May 21, 2004 3:56 PM
monday haiku by beatvibe May 21, 2004 9:57 AM
friday haiku by Arcadia May 21, 2004 10:41 AM
this summer - pc by Mie May 21, 2004 7:41 AM
Collide-out-Dreams by Createyers May 20, 2004 2:26 PM
hesitation is... by orange May 19, 2004 1:39 PM
Haiku Onto You!!!! by Dave The Dov May 19, 2004 12:25 PM
images [pc] by Beth Vieira May 17, 2004 4:29 PM
Hannah Ahrendt asks by tinker jack May 18, 2004 7:33 AM
i hate it by Mie May 21, 2004 7:42 AM
it's awful by Beth Vieira May 21, 2004 11:02 AM
princess tree [pc] by Beth Vieira May 16, 2004 2:30 PM
purple shower by purple shower May 16, 2004 3:55 PM
sunday afternoon [pc] by Beth Vieira May 16, 2004 2:27 PM
haha by Mie May 21, 2004 8:21 AM
hummingbird [pc] by Beth Vieira May 16, 2004 2:25 PM
humming of the spheres by purple shower May 16, 2004 3:57 PM
... by pottygok May 20, 2004 6:34 AM
... by Beth Vieira May 20, 2004 10:53 AM
... by pottygok May 21, 2004 7:17 AM
excellent by Beth Vieira May 21, 2004 10:59 AM
PC by tinker jack May 16, 2004 2:04 PM
woman hater by arielWN May 16, 2004 3:30 PM
thanks by tinker jack May 16, 2004 4:18 PM
dam by tinker jack May 16, 2004 4:19 PM
hurry up and do it ku (PC) by tinker jack May 20, 2004 7:10 AM
Abyssmal by arielWN May 15, 2004 5:48 AM
Silent Running.. by crazyspyder May 15, 2004 10:15 PM
Mexi.. by artguy May 14, 2004 6:51 PM
hah! ku by mtmynd May 13, 2004 11:07 AM
Hmmm-Ku by artguy May 14, 2004 7:12 PM
minus one by mtmynd May 13, 2004 11:02 AM
plus one by seajay1221 May 15, 2004 2:47 PM
575 by nimzoindian May 13, 2004 8:32 AM
haikus by josh tonkin May 12, 2004 5:07 PM
drinkin by zombielvis May 12, 2004 2:35 PM
what is trapping yemen? by fabled construct May 12, 2004 2:11 PM
gbg is the the by fabled construct May 12, 2004 2:05 PM
what the Jakey said by Bennie May 12, 2004 8:11 AM
Monday Thunder by Bennie May 10, 2004 1:30 PM
mmmmm by tonightwedrink May 10, 2004 6:50 PM
sweet smell by nimzoindian May 11, 2004 9:21 AM
Time dance by nimzoindian May 10, 2004 11:49 AM
dime trance by seajay1221 May 10, 2004 2:53 PM
A by tonightwedrink May 10, 2004 6:53 PM
Haiku Abounds by mtmynd May 10, 2004 6:57 AM
cool haiku by buddhabitch May 10, 2004 6:50 AM
warm haiku by panta rhei May 10, 2004 7:04 AM
sweet haiku by judih. May 10, 2004 8:46 AM
disecting haiku by buddhabitch May 10, 2004 6:46 AM
dissect this by tonightwedrink May 10, 2004 6:54 PM
Mother's Day [pc] by Beth Vieira May 9, 2004 5:11 PM
... by buddhabitch May 10, 2004 6:25 AM
mother-daughter-day by panta rhei May 10, 2004 7:08 AM
Sunday sun by Bennie May 9, 2004 3:55 AM
... by Beth Vieira May 9, 2004 5:12 PM
Monday by buddhabitch May 10, 2004 6:37 AM
sHai-lock by mtmynd May 8, 2004 7:50 AM
... by Beth Vieira May 9, 2004 5:13 PM
elementary by buddhabitch May 10, 2004 6:41 AM
push by Crackpot Jenkins May 8, 2004 7:35 AM
word by seajay1221 May 8, 2004 7:30 PM
word by Crackpot Jenkins May 10, 2004 7:48 PM
... by Beth Vieira May 9, 2004 5:15 PM
free form by buddhabitch May 8, 2004 7:31 AM
free form by buddhabitch May 8, 2004 7:47 AM
... by Beth Vieira May 9, 2004 5:16 PM
elemental by buddhabitch May 8, 2004 7:27 AM
elemental by buddhabitch May 8, 2004 7:42 AM
... by Beth Vieira May 9, 2004 5:17 PM
why by buddhabitch May 10, 2004 6:13 AM
What is haiku? by buddhabitch May 8, 2004 7:19 AM
... by firecracker May 8, 2004 9:07 PM
heh by buddhabitch May 10, 2004 6:08 AM
early hours by Mie May 7, 2004 11:21 PM
early hours II by Arcadia May 8, 2004 7:20 AM
... by Beth Vieira May 9, 2004 5:20 PM
a dream by seajay1221 May 8, 2004 7:13 PM
a dream by seajay1221 May 8, 2004 7:13 PM
plastic basket [pc] by Beth Vieira May 7, 2004 3:45 PM
... by pottygok May 12, 2004 12:13 PM
stic-ku by jim vinny May 7, 2004 2:26 PM
satisfying by tinker jack May 7, 2004 2:39 PM
stick em up by universe=one-song May 7, 2004 3:02 PM
How? by Beth Vieira May 7, 2004 3:42 PM
nice! by Arcadia May 8, 2004 7:16 AM
Thought Cloud by universe=one-song May 7, 2004 11:45 AM
cold front by seajay1221 May 9, 2004 7:43 PM
grandma sometimes you just have to wait her out (PC) or maybe just (?) by tinker jack May 7, 2004 7:39 AM
stepping through the window (pc) edited title and last line) by tinker jack May 6, 2004 7:54 AM
weary limbs reworked (PC) by tinker jack May 6, 2004 12:42 PM
pc by gov May 6, 2004 4:05 AM
[C] by arielWN May 6, 2004 7:54 AM
... by pottygok May 6, 2004 7:57 AM
silence [pc] by Beth Vieira May 4, 2004 3:50 PM
silence? by buddhabitch May 5, 2004 10:02 AM
it worked for me, by tinker jack May 5, 2004 2:56 PM
... by pottygok May 6, 2004 7:59 AM
lazy by Beth Vieira May 6, 2004 12:50 PM
... by pottygok May 6, 2004 2:24 PM
authorities, books, etc by Beth Vieira May 6, 2004 4:08 PM
... by pottygok May 7, 2004 7:38 AM
thank you by Beth Vieira May 7, 2004 9:18 AM
... by pottygok May 11, 2004 12:16 AM
once again thanks by Beth Vieira May 11, 2004 5:44 PM
Basho I think of him every time I do a transaction at the drive in bank by tinker jack May 6, 2004 4:55 PM
shell [pc] by Beth Vieira May 4, 2004 3:49 PM
hi beth... by firecracker May 5, 2004 12:00 PM
... by pottygok May 6, 2004 7:49 AM
echoes by Beth Vieira May 6, 2004 12:54 PM
... by pottygok May 6, 2004 2:31 PM
PC Haiku PC Haiku? by buddhabitch May 4, 2004 8:20 AM
haiku trails by Beth Vieira May 4, 2004 3:53 PM
I am glad you liked... by buddhabitch May 5, 2004 9:26 AM
yes (pc) by tinker jack May 4, 2004 8:22 PM
logic and haiku by buddhabitch May 5, 2004 9:47 AM
dam I feel like a ditto head, your words ring so true sister by tinker jack May 5, 2004 3:06 PM
travelling man by tinker jack May 20, 2004 8:30 AM
. by arielWN May 4, 2004 6:03 AM
..... by 4 degrees May 4, 2004 1:38 PM
. by arielWN May 4, 2004 5:12 PM
interesting concept by 4 degrees May 4, 2004 5:36 PM
banal (mine not yours) by tinker jack May 4, 2004 8:12 PM
. by arielWN May 5, 2004 6:15 AM
mission accomplished by tinker jack May 5, 2004 2:48 PM
What is Haiku!? 5 Careful Lines by Dominic by iku_u_ku_2 May 3, 2004 9:43 PM
thank ku (pc) by tinker jack May 4, 2004 6:08 AM
clever ku by tinker jack May 4, 2004 8:28 PM
clever ku tu tu by iku_u_ku_2 May 4, 2004 10:40 PM
what is...haiku? by buddhabitch May 3, 2004 8:43 AM
What? is haiku by buddhabitch May 4, 2004 7:58 AM
empty water by Beth Vieira May 4, 2004 3:55 PM
pc by lazypainterjane May 3, 2004 8:28 AM
... by pottygok May 4, 2004 7:24 AM
mmm... by lazypainterjane123 May 4, 2004 8:09 AM
Two images... by pottygok May 4, 2004 1:32 PM
pc.... (i'm new!) by lazypainterjane May 3, 2004 8:28 AM
Howdy by buddhabitch May 3, 2004 8:55 AM
. by arielWN May 3, 2004 5:53 PM
... by pottygok May 4, 2004 7:19 AM
am now lazypainterjane123... couldn't remember my password by lazypainterjane123 May 4, 2004 7:57 AM
... by pottygok May 4, 2004 1:29 PM
downx3 by seajay1221 May 2, 2004 8:44 PM
Haiku Onto You!!!! by Dave The Dov May 2, 2004 9:54 AM
The Customer's Therapies [PC] by e_dog May 2, 2004 8:19 AM
what is haiku (PC) by tinker jack May 3, 2004 2:56 PM
Old trees (PC of course see disclaimer*) by tinker jack May 2, 2004 7:11 AM
late cold front by tinker jack May 2, 2004 7:46 AM
old trees by buddhabitch May 2, 2004 9:54 AM
treeup by tinker jack May 3, 2004 8:46 AM
... by pottygok May 4, 2004 7:11 AM


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