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The Haiku Board

Try out your original haikus here. If you would like to be critiqued, please say so (PC=please critique, or NC=no critique).

kkizer offers some useful background information on haiku :

The classic form of haiku generally involves the seasons or some simple, unadulterated (not overly verbose) description of life or an instant image before the poet. The three poets generally considered to be masters of the haiku tradition are Basho (1644-94), Buson (1716-83) and Issa (1763-1827). They differed greatly: Basho was spiritual and poignant, Buson was more artistic and Issa was more emotional and humane.

What's interesing to note is that the commonly accepted 5-7-5 syllable style was never used by any of them. In fact, according to my research, the only 5-7-5 syllable style I could discover was as part of a larger poem called a RENGA, which was a collaborative poem. The first poet wrote the first verse in the 5-7-5 form, and each following poet had a different structure to follow.

For more on the history of haiku, please read this page.


haiho by buddhabitch Sep 30, 2003 2:02 AM
loosing sleep by zen_ Oct 1, 2003 8:56 AM
haiout by buddhabitch Sep 30, 2003 1:56 AM
haiya by buddhabitch Sep 30, 2003 1:49 AM
TV by Arcadia Sep 28, 2003 6:38 PM
Bo by zen_ Sep 28, 2003 6:36 PM
O NO! by buddhabitch Sep 30, 2003 2:26 AM
less on by e_dog Sep 28, 2003 6:13 PM
your critique, sir by zen_ Sep 28, 2003 6:25 PM
I think somewhere there is some by Arcadia Sep 28, 2003 6:29 PM
Where is that confounded Road Map by zen_ Sep 28, 2003 6:39 PM
What by Arcadia Sep 28, 2003 6:42 PM
this map by zen_ Sep 28, 2003 7:00 PM
oh by Arcadia Sep 29, 2003 9:53 AM
haikarate by buddhabitch Sep 30, 2003 2:32 AM
Neither, actually by zen_ Oct 1, 2003 8:53 AM
overcoming -- PC by e_dog Sep 28, 2003 6:10 PM
overcoming--(commentary) by zen_ Sep 28, 2003 6:56 PM
Too much... by pottygok Sep 29, 2003 9:31 AM
no clouds in the lungs... by buddhabitch Sep 30, 2003 2:51 AM
beatvibe by Emelia Sep 28, 2003 12:21 AM
coming by zen_ Sep 28, 2003 7:06 PM
haiHah! by buddhabitch Sep 30, 2003 2:55 AM
Paulinskill River (Delaware Tributary), Blairstown, NJ by steere Sep 27, 2003 7:43 AM
river by Emelia Sep 28, 2003 12:19 AM
cedar creek behind the cabin by buddhabitch Sep 30, 2003 3:00 AM
magic beans by buddhabitch Sep 27, 2003 3:28 AM
java love potion by panta rhei Sep 27, 2003 4:11 AM
Morning by artguy Sep 27, 2003 6:04 AM
ritual liquid by judih. Sep 27, 2003 6:15 AM
mine by zen_ Sep 28, 2003 7:19 PM
for bill by anniefay Sep 26, 2003 11:41 AM
HAHAHA by Billectric Sep 26, 2003 11:50 AM
ah bill by anniefay Sep 26, 2003 11:58 AM
Haiku Onto You by Dave The Dov Sep 26, 2003 11:13 AM
I'm new here! by Pander Sep 25, 2003 7:14 PM
............ by anonymous-one Sep 25, 2003 7:37 PM
intro to utterance by judih. Sep 25, 2003 7:55 PM
You cat you. by Girl Sep 25, 2003 9:53 PM
answer: c by beatvibe Sep 24, 2003 9:31 AM
a novel idea by zen_ Sep 25, 2003 1:23 AM
() by rain70 Sep 25, 2003 2:38 PM
Ego out of equation. by DarkMatta-Legend Sep 23, 2003 12:29 AM
turning inward by Jimboloco Sep 23, 2003 12:12 PM
who knows by MichaelAMichael Sep 22, 2003 2:10 PM
goodbye cat by Jimboloco Sep 23, 2003 5:48 AM
Best one i've read so far. by NicFiTycoon Oct 2, 2003 4:17 PM
Haiku Onto You by Dave The Dov Sep 22, 2003 1:37 PM
Again... by DarkMatta-Legend Sep 23, 2003 12:43 AM
leaves by zen_ Sep 23, 2003 7:12 AM
Autumn harvest by Sabertash Sep 22, 2003 12:48 PM
after 12 or so days without cigarettes or beer............ by Yabyum Sep 21, 2003 10:07 AM
a new look at sugar by zen_ Sep 21, 2003 9:12 PM
a year & two months by rain70 Sep 23, 2003 2:12 PM
10:59 pm by zen_ Sep 20, 2003 8:21 PM
Breath in by DarkMatta-Legend Sep 19, 2003 6:02 AM
terminologies by buddhabitch Sep 19, 2003 6:10 AM
... by pottygok Sep 19, 2003 1:37 PM
... by rain70 Sep 19, 2003 2:09 PM
seat of the soul by zen_ Sep 20, 2003 3:31 AM
hands put together in triangular form by sonofthesun Sep 19, 2003 3:36 AM
dew blossums by zen_ Sep 23, 2003 7:06 AM
zen doh by buddhabitch Sep 19, 2003 3:19 AM
daily practice by judih. Sep 19, 2003 3:29 AM
let's salsa by buddhabitch Sep 19, 2003 6:12 AM
vamanos bailar by Jimboloco Sep 21, 2003 4:30 AM
... by pottygok Sep 19, 2003 1:34 PM
covering up by Jimboloco Oct 14, 2003 6:23 AM
high ku by Jimboloco Sep 21, 2003 4:26 AM
i want a beatnik chick who takes no shit & i want her all to myself by Yabyum Sep 18, 2003 9:48 PM
sorry by Lawless Sep 20, 2003 8:55 AM
I remember Peggy (Funk) by Jimboloco Sep 26, 2003 11:35 AM
reading you by Jimboloco Oct 14, 2003 6:19 AM
stone temple on the coast of vietnam by Jimboloco Sep 18, 2003 6:10 PM
below the temple by Jimboloco Sep 21, 2003 4:33 AM
by the sea by Jimboloco Sep 21, 2003 4:35 AM
end of violence by Jimboloco Sep 21, 2003 4:42 AM
pagoda by Jimboloco Sep 23, 2003 5:43 AM
gallery..... by artguy Sep 18, 2003 2:49 PM
incantation by cylance Sep 18, 2003 2:16 AM
boozey by ironhands Sep 17, 2003 10:10 PM
gravity moves by zen_ Sep 20, 2003 3:23 AM
eat/en by MichaelAMichael Sep 17, 2003 10:40 AM
sea mine haiku edited PC by Lawless Sep 17, 2003 4:42 AM
thoughts by judih. Sep 17, 2003 10:57 AM
Re: by pottygok Sep 17, 2003 11:59 AM
comment ("sea mine") by zen_ Sep 18, 2003 8:29 PM
PC and all that jazz...(edited) by buddhabitch Sep 19, 2003 5:15 AM
thanks all by Lawless Sep 20, 2003 7:31 AM
Alibi by ARAHH Sep 17, 2003 4:35 AM
poetry PC by unwitting_coma Sep 17, 2003 2:00 AM
groovy by Lawless Sep 17, 2003 3:55 AM
I agree with Lawless... by pottygok Sep 17, 2003 12:12 PM
ditto by zen_ Sep 18, 2003 9:39 PM
My Watch Stopped by Boom tin dog Sep 16, 2003 2:04 PM
grass by calos Sep 15, 2003 10:05 PM
heater by calos Sep 15, 2003 10:01 PM
curtain by calos Sep 15, 2003 9:58 PM
light bulb by calos Sep 15, 2003 9:56 PM
haiku by calos Sep 15, 2003 9:52 PM
clouds by Emelia Sep 15, 2003 3:27 PM
dawn by quietus Sep 14, 2003 6:26 AM
Modulation by ARAHH Sep 14, 2003 6:11 AM
Haiku Onto You by Dave The Dov Sep 13, 2003 12:32 PM
optoacoustics by ARAHH Sep 13, 2003 8:08 AM
substitute streams by ARAHH Sep 13, 2003 8:02 AM
remembrance by stevadore Sep 12, 2003 6:25 AM
China by Lawless Sep 12, 2003 6:45 AM
that day as i came back home by poildecarotte Sep 12, 2003 8:11 AM
internet frustration by Lawless Sep 12, 2003 1:22 AM
brooklyn roof 2:55 am by ironhands Sep 12, 2003 12:04 AM
negev flat, 10:10 a.m. by judih. Sep 12, 2003 12:08 AM
Morningside Heights window... by Alex Uziel Sep 18, 2003 2:16 PM
The Spiess Awards from Modern Haiku by kkizer Sep 11, 2003 6:52 AM
Mid-Autumn Festival PC by Lawless Sep 10, 2003 8:37 PM
works for me by judih. Sep 10, 2003 8:47 PM
Hai de hoe by buddhabitch Sep 11, 2003 5:05 AM
an idea by kkizer Sep 11, 2003 6:40 AM
Also, economy... by pottygok Sep 11, 2003 12:57 PM
really can't thank you enough guys by Lawless Sep 12, 2003 3:28 AM
Freud's unhaiku about a powerstation. NC by Lawless Sep 10, 2003 8:32 PM
sandstorm by judih. Sep 10, 2003 6:35 AM
raid by starsailor Sep 14, 2003 4:08 AM
..... by Yabyum Sep 9, 2003 9:02 PM
taking the man by zen_ Sep 20, 2003 3:14 AM
taking one by zen_ Sep 20, 2003 3:16 AM
everything by elvin Sep 8, 2003 5:27 PM
I couldn't agree more by Lawless Sep 8, 2003 7:14 PM
Hong Kong Haikus (PC) by Lawless Sep 7, 2003 1:29 AM
Chinese bugs by poildecarotte Sep 7, 2003 1:46 AM
Some comments... by pottygok Sep 7, 2003 11:52 PM
brilliant by Lawless Sep 7, 2003 11:57 PM
You are quite welcome! by pottygok Sep 8, 2003 11:30 AM
Hong Kong Morning by Lawless Sep 6, 2003 7:04 PM
^ by rain70 Sep 6, 2003 10:31 AM
snow by poildecarotte Sep 6, 2003 8:47 AM
a flat in Bronxville, NY by poildecarotte Sep 6, 2003 8:40 AM
two minutes later by poildecarotte Sep 6, 2003 8:42 AM
North by artguy Sep 6, 2003 8:03 AM
A few more to riff on, critiques? by pottygok Sep 5, 2003 8:34 PM
here by judih. Sep 5, 2003 8:53 PM
A response... by pottygok Sep 5, 2003 9:24 PM
read and will by judih. Sep 5, 2003 9:31 PM
night eyes by judih. Sep 5, 2003 8:56 PM
the red bead of Mars by pottygok Sep 5, 2003 9:48 PM
i like: by ellipsis Sep 5, 2003 9:30 PM
.. by ellipsis Sep 5, 2003 9:32 PM
eating peppers by pottygok Sep 5, 2003 9:59 PM
the wasp (remembering kerouac's bee haiku) by kkizer Sep 5, 2003 7:35 AM
no flower by judih. Sep 5, 2003 7:48 AM
...ain't no bug either...*wink* by buddhabitch Sep 5, 2003 8:04 AM
glad you brought this up by judih. Sep 5, 2003 8:09 AM
it's interesting you mention it... by kkizer Sep 5, 2003 8:45 AM
Haiku On To You by Dave The Dov Sep 4, 2003 12:19 PM
halt by kkizer Sep 4, 2003 9:18 AM
Go by Arcadia Sep 4, 2003 10:21 AM
slow down by caramel Sep 29, 2003 2:25 AM
........ by Yabyum Sep 4, 2003 6:41 AM
beer bottles aren't ashtrays. by anonymous-one Sep 4, 2003 7:50 AM
what is beer by zen_ Sep 20, 2003 3:02 AM
be leave by buddhabitch Sep 4, 2003 5:42 AM
natural power by in_earth Sep 3, 2003 4:46 PM
a branch of olive by all hail the stars Sep 3, 2003 2:58 PM
hmmm..... by snakhi Sep 10, 2003 2:29 AM
last night at the dallas road cliffs by GordonWilson Sep 3, 2003 2:40 PM
During Bonn Om Touk by frontal-abstraction Sep 3, 2003 10:23 AM
Inversions Natural (PC) by frontal-abstraction Sep 3, 2003 9:10 AM
hummmm... by buddhabitch Sep 3, 2003 10:37 AM
thank you by frontal-abstraction Sep 3, 2003 11:09 AM
simultaneous celebrants by wendyfaber Sep 1, 2003 4:22 PM
oblivious by wendyfaber Sep 1, 2003 2:17 PM
wish by wendyfaber Sep 1, 2003 2:47 PM
connect by ARAHH Sep 1, 2003 1:23 PM
micro by ARAHH Sep 1, 2003 1:21 PM


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