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The Guy on the Other Side (PC) by elemental123 Nov 29, 2002 9:33 PM
That was a wild ride! by Billectric Nov 30, 2002 6:44 AM
Thanks for reading by elemental123 Nov 30, 2002 10:40 AM
orgasm! by Baby2 Nov 30, 2002 8:14 PM
Step lively, step lively now. by Rickety Nov 29, 2002 4:49 AM
5 More Short Stories ( Bastard Child Style) by BuddhistPunk Nov 28, 2002 9:12 AM
yes yes yes yes YES by the bastard child Nov 28, 2002 4:18 PM
5 Short Stories ( Bastard Child Style) by BuddhistPunk Nov 28, 2002 6:13 AM
cracked by jota Nov 28, 2002 8:49 AM
demons and stories by idiglife Nov 28, 2002 4:38 AM
A Portrait of the Artist as a Young Man... by PhilipHarris Nov 27, 2002 9:55 PM
chasing jack keroauc/how bad i need to get laid reprise by slog Nov 27, 2002 2:13 PM
you animal by rastaruined Dec 7, 2002 1:20 PM
no, I think by scootertrash Jan 23, 2003 1:34 AM
Potent Opiate/'chapter one' (long, critique if you wish) by snuffbox Nov 27, 2002 10:17 AM
sketch this disparity [scenes of few words] by in_extremis Nov 27, 2002 8:36 AM
ah, relationship disintegration by jamelah Dec 2, 2002 12:40 PM
funny you should mention that by in_extremis Dec 2, 2002 1:06 PM
By The Side Of the Road by artguy Nov 26, 2002 8:19 AM
Keep With It by Links Dec 4, 2002 6:15 PM
STORY CHALLENGE CARRIES ON... SASHA'S CHALLENGE by anniefay Nov 26, 2002 7:06 AM
5 more short stories to tide you over by the bastard child Nov 26, 2002 2:22 AM
I really by BuddhistPunk Nov 28, 2002 9:17 AM
pillpopping (please critique) by weezer Nov 25, 2002 3:33 PM
disturbing by Crowbar Nov 26, 2002 6:47 AM
no sympathy by weezer Nov 26, 2002 7:45 AM
jumping to by Crowbar Nov 27, 2002 1:53 AM
winter solstice sketch by in_extremis Nov 25, 2002 11:05 AM
nice by scootertrash Nov 25, 2002 3:40 PM
winter by Emelia Nov 25, 2002 6:17 PM
in_extremis... by mtmynd Nov 25, 2002 6:42 PM
like a canvas by buddhabitch Nov 26, 2002 9:58 AM
The Mayor by ra ra ra ra ra Nov 24, 2002 3:00 PM
PC by ra ra ra ra ra Nov 26, 2002 3:40 PM
plasters by Crowbar Nov 27, 2002 9:24 AM
PLASTERS by ra ra ra ra ra Nov 27, 2002 1:51 PM
HIKE [editted repost] by Emelia Nov 24, 2002 11:05 AM
sleep peacefully, young man by jamelah Nov 24, 2002 8:53 AM
ahhh,,,Jamelah by mtmynd Nov 24, 2002 11:45 AM
just a quick sketch by jamelah Nov 24, 2002 1:26 PM
nice by jota Nov 27, 2002 8:51 PM
depot pc by bigguy Nov 23, 2002 12:09 PM
two sides of a coin by Crowbar Nov 25, 2002 4:55 PM
err... by bigguy Nov 25, 2002 6:06 PM
oops by Crowbar Nov 25, 2002 6:31 PM
oops re by bigguy Nov 26, 2002 6:57 PM
between equals by Crowbar Nov 27, 2002 7:40 AM
hey by bigguy Nov 27, 2002 3:39 PM
Preamble by Stark Nov 23, 2002 10:40 AM
This-Real-Sex by Stark Nov 23, 2002 10:40 AM
John... by mtmynd Nov 24, 2002 7:28 AM
thank you cecil by John B. Nov 30, 2002 12:12 PM
GAAAAWWWDDDDAAAAMMMMNNNN!!!!! by elemental123 Dec 1, 2002 7:17 PM
i'll take THAT as a compliment! by Stark Dec 3, 2002 3:22 AM
The Great American Bash (PC) by snuffbox Nov 22, 2002 8:10 PM
orgasms by Crowbar Nov 25, 2002 4:35 PM
some info.... by snuffbox Nov 26, 2002 4:36 PM
“If you build it they will come…” by Crowbar Nov 27, 2002 2:07 AM
Life on a Scraped Mirror (PC) by snuffbox Nov 22, 2002 7:16 PM
universal by Crowbar Nov 23, 2002 12:48 PM
new piece (Ballcourt Meditations) (PC) by foolish_Paeter Nov 22, 2002 3:53 PM
John Steamer by Crowbar Nov 23, 2002 10:32 AM
the story of the teeth. by ironhands Nov 22, 2002 1:22 PM
perfect by Emelia Nov 25, 2002 6:55 PM
especially by Emelia Nov 25, 2002 6:55 PM
Malynda PC - work novel in progress first couple pages by darkmanjack Nov 22, 2002 11:48 AM
Intense by Crowbar Nov 22, 2002 1:32 PM
jack... by PhilipHarris Nov 22, 2002 4:36 PM
On Her Knees by PhilipHarris Nov 21, 2002 1:47 PM
PH by shishi Nov 21, 2002 8:28 PM
enjoyed by smg Dec 2, 2002 3:29 PM
love story by jamelah Nov 21, 2002 12:13 PM
JAM by zygotenmycoffee Nov 21, 2002 1:08 PM
hey, thanks by jamelah Nov 21, 2002 1:27 PM
That's funny by zygotenmycoffee Nov 21, 2002 1:37 PM
a few remarks by Emelia Nov 21, 2002 6:53 PM
this is great writing by mindchef Nov 22, 2002 2:17 PM
Fishbowl by djaiv Nov 23, 2002 9:22 PM
hey yeah by bigguy Nov 25, 2002 6:12 PM
on hope by Rachmaninov Nov 21, 2002 4:22 AM
Oh Hope by BuddhistPunk Nov 21, 2002 4:51 AM
some pieces (PC) by foolish_Paeter Nov 20, 2002 7:44 PM
a dream by foolish_Paeter Nov 20, 2002 7:48 PM
Time Book by foolish_Paeter Nov 20, 2002 7:50 PM
Turd Koan by foolish_Paeter Nov 20, 2002 7:54 PM
subway by nocturne 17 Nov 20, 2002 3:10 PM
This is allright . . . by shamatha Nov 21, 2002 7:42 AM
chicago nights by nocturne 17 Nov 21, 2002 8:00 PM
Very good by djaiv Nov 21, 2002 8:23 PM
fabulous idea by nocturne 17 Nov 22, 2002 10:47 AM
Well by djaiv Nov 23, 2002 7:48 AM
I don't write stories much, so... should I stick with poetry or keep going by djaiv Nov 20, 2002 1:27 PM
keep going by mindlosing Nov 20, 2002 1:45 PM
yeah by scootertrash Nov 20, 2002 2:48 PM
wonderful wonderful wonderful by nocturne 17 Nov 20, 2002 3:19 PM
i suggest you re-title this by judih. Nov 20, 2002 7:28 PM
How about by djaiv Nov 25, 2002 11:19 AM
this reminded me of a song by varp Nov 22, 2002 1:53 AM
Spice by Crowbar Nov 23, 2002 12:20 AM
THE LATE SHOW w CAMERON MOONEY -a work in progress (PC) by the bastard child Nov 20, 2002 5:16 AM
yeah by shyster Nov 22, 2002 4:32 PM
Question by Crowbar Nov 22, 2002 10:58 PM
the idea is by the bastard child Nov 23, 2002 9:38 PM
Sounds like a good idea by zygotenmycoffee Nov 23, 2002 10:14 PM
thanks by the bastard child Nov 24, 2002 3:58 AM
kewl by Crowbar Nov 24, 2002 5:18 PM
i thought i might have made a mistake by the bastard child Nov 26, 2002 2:15 AM
Tomorrow Mourning?????? by JackyDuluoz Nov 19, 2002 8:57 PM
JACKY by zygotenmycoffee Nov 25, 2002 6:41 AM
thank you by JackyDuluoz Nov 27, 2002 12:03 PM
the facade of the fourth- updated, but not complete- please critique by mindlosing Nov 19, 2002 2:20 PM
mindlosing by in_extremis Nov 19, 2002 2:50 PM
hey by mindlosing Nov 19, 2002 7:33 PM
some pc by Crowbar Nov 22, 2002 12:14 PM
very thorough by mindlosing Nov 22, 2002 6:06 PM
Continuing the saga (5 more very short stories) by the bastard child Nov 19, 2002 5:13 AM
WHAT A BASTARD! by zygotenmycoffee Nov 19, 2002 8:37 AM
hey neat by foolish_Paeter Nov 20, 2002 7:58 PM
Yes foolish one by zygotenmycoffee Nov 21, 2002 8:00 AM
Story Challenge by sasha Nov 18, 2002 3:48 PM
?!? by Framello Nov 18, 2002 8:43 PM
the first one by in_extremis Nov 19, 2002 8:16 AM
Hey sasha, what's it gotta be called? by bobby.f.m Nov 19, 2002 12:34 AM
oh! by sasha Nov 19, 2002 3:18 PM
ooopsss... by anniefay Nov 25, 2002 4:53 AM
story challenge response by smg Nov 19, 2002 9:18 AM
heh! by sasha Nov 19, 2002 3:20 PM
Okay so by BuddhistPunk Nov 21, 2002 6:24 AM
Sara... by anniefay Nov 25, 2002 4:48 AM
Story Challenge Response by BuddhistPunk Nov 21, 2002 6:21 AM
uhhh, BP by anniefay Nov 25, 2002 4:51 AM
Story Challenge Response (Return of the Church Secretary) by anniefay Nov 24, 2002 6:06 PM
monday morning confusion by in_extremis Nov 18, 2002 10:10 AM
i'm amazed by jamelah Nov 18, 2002 11:37 AM
the first half is first rate by conked Nov 19, 2002 2:19 AM
thank you by in_extremis Nov 19, 2002 8:07 AM
elaboration by conked Nov 19, 2002 11:30 AM
on elaboration by in_extremis Nov 19, 2002 12:02 PM
wow by justalil Nov 19, 2002 6:31 AM
thanks justalil by in_extremis Nov 19, 2002 8:10 AM
very by justalil Nov 19, 2002 1:39 PM
1,2,3,4 by Emelia Nov 19, 2002 3:55 PM
The Sketch (PC) by slurpy Nov 17, 2002 10:46 PM
voicemail anchors--please critique by violet9ish Nov 17, 2002 10:03 PM
insight by Emelia Nov 24, 2002 6:20 PM
thank you by violet9ish Nov 24, 2002 9:41 PM
[repost] by Emelia Nov 17, 2002 9:19 PM
i feel... by Stark Nov 23, 2002 10:59 AM
stark by Emelia Nov 23, 2002 8:21 PM
Emelia by Stark Nov 24, 2002 5:10 AM
starters :) with you in mind.... by Stark Nov 24, 2002 6:31 AM
stark! by Emelia Nov 24, 2002 10:41 AM
of course not... by Stark Nov 29, 2002 12:16 PM
story challenge announcement (ed.): by panta rhei Nov 17, 2002 12:44 PM
woo! by sasha Nov 18, 2002 11:07 AM
As Yet Untitled Story...(PC) by snuffbox Nov 17, 2002 9:01 AM
The Other Statue of Liberty by jota Nov 17, 2002 7:30 AM
thank you jota by shyster Nov 17, 2002 1:50 PM
i'm glad you liked it Shyster by jota Nov 17, 2002 5:42 PM
I read this by mtmynd Nov 18, 2002 5:43 AM
Didn't he by varp Nov 15, 2002 6:35 PM
HAH!...good one Varp by zygotenmycoffee Nov 16, 2002 4:05 AM
well done... by feral Nov 16, 2002 4:59 AM
From the sky this looks like geometry | by Ginny. by Christian Silver Nov 15, 2002 9:16 AM
equations.. by sasha Nov 15, 2002 9:59 AM
aha by shyster Nov 15, 2002 6:27 PM
I will by varp Nov 15, 2002 6:47 PM
I fear by The Zookeeper Nov 16, 2002 5:42 AM
you're by jamelah Nov 17, 2002 1:21 PM
beautiful by violet9ish Nov 17, 2002 10:44 PM
I am not a sycophant by losetowin Nov 18, 2002 3:13 AM
i by tantricslide Dec 2, 2002 8:13 PM
drive like fangio - drink jack daniels (part one) by feral Nov 15, 2002 4:50 AM
part two... by feral Nov 15, 2002 5:18 AM
feral by picasso Nov 15, 2002 9:41 AM
part three... by feral Nov 16, 2002 4:30 AM
Raw... by mtmynd Nov 16, 2002 11:01 AM
tomorrow night... by feral Nov 17, 2002 4:05 AM
aww maan by mudshark Nov 22, 2002 11:23 PM
Well what do you think? by Sabertash Nov 14, 2002 9:06 PM
Cruel (also longish! pc if so inclined) by nocturne 17 Nov 14, 2002 4:22 PM
hey nocturne [longish] by in_extremis Nov 15, 2002 9:01 PM
hello by nocturne 17 Nov 16, 2002 6:54 AM
hey again by in_extremis Nov 16, 2002 3:44 PM
I Love Death (pc if you are so inclined -it's longish!) by nocturne 17 Nov 14, 2002 4:20 PM
why i hate Choices Market by in_extremis Nov 14, 2002 11:17 AM
why i dig this by nocturne 17 Nov 14, 2002 9:15 PM
tell me by in_extremis Nov 15, 2002 8:35 AM
excellent by LankyAl Nov 15, 2002 4:36 AM
hey al by in_extremis Nov 15, 2002 8:34 AM
This is funny by shamatha Nov 15, 2002 10:11 AM
Yes by varp Nov 15, 2002 7:04 PM
hey guys by in_extremis Nov 15, 2002 8:15 PM
sooo by varp Nov 16, 2002 1:48 AM
wow by in_extremis Nov 16, 2002 2:47 AM
better now? by varp Nov 16, 2002 2:51 AM
here's the deal by in_extremis Nov 16, 2002 4:13 PM
I think by varp Nov 16, 2002 8:23 PM
this is exactly what i found in it... by justalil Nov 19, 2002 8:45 AM
yeah, your whiny ass by jota Nov 16, 2002 8:39 PM
thanks jota by in_extremis Nov 16, 2002 9:18 PM
why i love 'why i hate choices market' by justalil Nov 19, 2002 8:29 AM
Fuck You and Your Mother, Too (pc) by nocturne 17 Nov 14, 2002 8:42 AM
An obsession by the bastard child Nov 14, 2002 3:10 AM
I laughed a bit by varp Nov 15, 2002 7:09 PM
Big plans (PC, not done yet...) by ModernAncient Nov 13, 2002 3:33 PM
these are my fav parts... (I condensed/ editted the story) by Emelia Nov 17, 2002 9:05 PM
appertif (please comment) by nocturne 17 Nov 12, 2002 4:47 PM
------- by justalil Nov 12, 2002 6:58 PM
i really by smg Nov 13, 2002 9:23 AM
Ginny keeps putting her hands in the fire. by Christian Silver Nov 12, 2002 3:45 AM
why? by midnight Nov 12, 2002 4:02 AM
Throw the Christian to the lions! by zygotenmycoffee Nov 12, 2002 5:07 AM
Good to have you back by losetowin Nov 12, 2002 9:39 AM
most by Billectric Nov 12, 2002 1:50 PM
I'm there by Randall Nov 13, 2002 3:30 AM
nice piece... by jules27 Nov 14, 2002 10:49 AM
a blue world order by Jim Furnish Nov 11, 2002 10:21 PM
Jim by Hester Prynne Nov 11, 2002 11:50 PM
yeah by varp Nov 12, 2002 2:35 AM
blue world order by shishi Nov 12, 2002 3:22 AM
What a treat... by buddhabitch Nov 12, 2002 4:22 AM
salt wind by judih. Nov 12, 2002 6:00 AM
jim by panta rhei Nov 12, 2002 7:33 AM
submit this by jota Nov 12, 2002 7:47 AM
jim by jamelah Nov 12, 2002 12:19 PM
felt like i was there by piphed Nov 12, 2002 2:20 PM
Damn, Mr Furnish... by mtmynd Nov 12, 2002 6:17 PM
awesome by anniefay Nov 13, 2002 8:27 AM
A little bit by shamatha Nov 15, 2002 10:14 AM
thanks everybody !...... by Jim Furnish Nov 18, 2002 2:24 PM
I hadn't said so, but... by bobby.f.m Nov 19, 2002 2:37 AM
story challenge 11/11/02 by panta rhei Nov 11, 2002 12:26 PM
colony of love (this is tough) by smg Nov 11, 2002 1:03 PM
man, by smg Nov 12, 2002 1:34 PM
dude by jamelah Nov 12, 2002 2:13 PM
C6H5(NH2)CH3 by panta rhei Nov 13, 2002 2:08 AM
no... it probably can never by panta rhei Nov 13, 2002 2:14 AM
short by varp Nov 18, 2002 2:00 AM
colony of love (satan's date) by jamelah Nov 12, 2002 8:04 AM
fuckin a man by smg Nov 12, 2002 1:33 PM
jamelah by picasso Nov 12, 2002 1:53 PM
satan's slipping by piphed Nov 12, 2002 2:34 PM
hilarious by panta rhei Nov 13, 2002 2:10 AM
what a story.. by mtmynd Nov 13, 2002 5:55 AM
this by sasha Nov 13, 2002 6:12 PM
Again by bobby.f.m Nov 16, 2002 5:18 AM
oops wrong spot by varp Nov 18, 2002 2:14 AM
Colony of Love by firecracker Nov 12, 2002 6:44 PM
drinking from the bottle of love by panta rhei Nov 13, 2002 2:12 AM
hi panta by firecracker Nov 13, 2002 4:48 AM
ah, thanks fc by panta rhei Nov 15, 2002 1:40 AM
now this by justalil Nov 13, 2002 8:55 AM
firecracker! by jamelah Nov 14, 2002 5:12 AM
must be a new kinda record here by varp Nov 18, 2002 2:18 AM
The Colony of Love by conked Nov 13, 2002 3:17 AM
the tempest: ending part 2 by jamelah Nov 14, 2002 5:11 AM
clever story by panta rhei Nov 15, 2002 1:43 AM
A Classic by varp Nov 18, 2002 2:25 AM
The Colony of Love by varp Nov 15, 2002 4:25 AM
Now that by bobby.f.m Nov 16, 2002 5:33 AM
this is a caramel-coloured scene from an irish pub by panta rhei Nov 17, 2002 11:30 AM
ah, varp by jamelah Nov 17, 2002 12:30 PM
VARP by zygotenmycoffee Nov 20, 2002 7:30 AM
agreed by panta rhei Nov 20, 2002 7:34 AM
Ziggy by varp Nov 22, 2002 4:22 AM
The Colony of LOVE by bobby.f.m Nov 16, 2002 5:04 AM
this is beautiful by judih. Nov 16, 2002 7:23 PM
Les by varp Nov 16, 2002 8:38 PM
bobby by panta rhei Nov 17, 2002 11:38 AM
bobby... by jamelah Nov 17, 2002 1:22 PM
Colony of Love by sasha Nov 16, 2002 12:56 PM
delicious by panta rhei Nov 17, 2002 11:40 AM
sasha by jamelah Nov 17, 2002 1:23 PM
yep by varp Nov 18, 2002 2:31 AM
Colony Of Love by anniefay Nov 17, 2002 7:55 PM
loved it by varp Nov 18, 2002 2:48 AM
life is good indeed by zygotenmycoffee Nov 23, 2002 9:59 AM
This Time: The Silent Movement by newSkinjoy98 Nov 11, 2002 9:48 AM
i was waiting by justalil Nov 13, 2002 8:47 AM
Part 1 PC! by Harry Nov 11, 2002 8:22 AM
Christian Silver.... by Randall Nov 11, 2002 6:10 AM
I'm not dead, but... by Christian Silver Nov 12, 2002 5:47 AM
in the yard by Alienamigo Nov 11, 2002 2:16 AM
Ant The Challenge goes to..... by bobby.f.m Nov 10, 2002 11:29 PM
bowing gracefully... by panta rhei Nov 11, 2002 3:49 AM
5 more very short stories by the bastard child Nov 10, 2002 3:11 PM
YOU FRIGGIN BASTARD! by zygotenmycoffee Nov 13, 2002 6:48 PM
The break up by the bastard child Nov 10, 2002 3:00 PM
i think by jamelah Nov 10, 2002 2:35 PM
i want by smg Nov 11, 2002 7:19 AM
dammit by smg Nov 11, 2002 7:19 AM
yeah, yeah by jamelah Nov 11, 2002 7:59 AM
under by jota Nov 10, 2002 12:05 PM
So Jack... by mtmynd Nov 10, 2002 7:45 PM
has a lazy ass by jota Nov 10, 2002 8:04 PM
no fair by firecracker Nov 11, 2002 10:40 AM
well by jota Nov 11, 2002 11:49 AM
An announcement: by bobby.f.m Nov 10, 2002 4:02 AM
The Girl With The Most Beautiful Eyes by shyster Nov 9, 2002 7:28 AM
YOWZERS! That one by zygotenmycoffee Nov 9, 2002 12:26 PM
shyster... by jamelah Nov 9, 2002 5:38 PM
shyster... by mtmynd Nov 9, 2002 9:19 PM
cheers by shyster Nov 10, 2002 4:38 AM
Stories My Daughter Told Me To Tell by anniefay Nov 9, 2002 4:22 AM
HAHAHA by varp Nov 9, 2002 6:08 AM
a 1950's mastercard commercial by jamelah Nov 9, 2002 7:03 AM
wow by mtmynd Nov 9, 2002 7:25 AM
i could sympathize... by jamelah Nov 9, 2002 7:06 AM
annie... by mtmynd Nov 9, 2002 7:26 AM
a short one by rastaruined Nov 8, 2002 4:46 PM
part 2 by rastaruined Nov 10, 2002 12:26 PM
part 3 by rastaruined Nov 10, 2002 7:41 PM
part 4 by rastaruined Nov 13, 2002 7:18 PM
part 5 by rastaruined Nov 20, 2002 9:36 AM
final---resolution by rastaruined Nov 21, 2002 7:09 PM
and I regret by scootertrash Dec 8, 2002 11:35 AM
fuck off by rastaruined Dec 14, 2002 2:39 PM
Gota del amor by PhilipHarris Nov 8, 2002 3:50 PM
Hola Philip...Que pasa? Donde es el bano? by zygotenmycoffee Nov 13, 2002 6:10 PM
lunch (not really an anything) by firecracker Nov 7, 2002 9:59 PM
maybe... by stevadore Nov 8, 2002 5:41 AM
maybe so... by firecracker Nov 8, 2002 11:09 AM
i like this by jamelah Nov 8, 2002 9:29 AM
i think you're right by firecracker Nov 8, 2002 11:11 AM
i think by jamelah Nov 9, 2002 5:39 PM
5 very short stories by the bastard child Nov 7, 2002 7:05 PM
i like these by stevadore Nov 8, 2002 5:44 AM
Hey you bastard by zygotenmycoffee Nov 8, 2002 7:11 AM
enjoyed by firecracker Nov 8, 2002 7:28 AM
these by justalil Nov 8, 2002 8:13 AM
short by varp Nov 9, 2002 5:42 AM
great by shyster Nov 9, 2002 7:27 AM
beer by jota Nov 7, 2002 9:39 AM
Yes by stellar Nov 9, 2002 5:55 PM
Captain Jack is Dead (Repost) by panta rhei Nov 7, 2002 9:18 AM
my toes are naked by jota Nov 7, 2002 9:38 AM
A tad obscure Panta, by varp Nov 9, 2002 4:56 AM
captain jack by panta rhei Nov 11, 2002 3:15 AM
ah ha! by varp Nov 11, 2002 4:19 AM
yes, it was nitrogen narcosis by panta rhei Nov 11, 2002 5:21 AM
Oh by bobby.f.m Nov 11, 2002 11:40 PM
there's magic in water by panta rhei Nov 12, 2002 7:45 AM
Yes I did by bobby.f.m Nov 13, 2002 3:47 AM
no regret by panta rhei Nov 13, 2002 3:53 AM
Whoa by bobby.f.m Nov 13, 2002 4:04 AM
The deep by varp Nov 12, 2002 2:08 AM
you are right - by panta rhei Nov 12, 2002 7:44 AM
Siren Songs by buddhabitch Nov 12, 2002 4:53 AM
yes, language is just by panta rhei Nov 12, 2002 7:54 AM
a seven year long story by justalil Nov 7, 2002 7:58 AM
part 2 by justalil Nov 7, 2002 7:59 AM
part 3 by justalil Nov 7, 2002 8:00 AM
part 4 by justalil Nov 7, 2002 8:00 AM
this by jota Nov 7, 2002 11:07 AM
sad as hell. by varp Nov 9, 2002 5:18 AM
wow justalil! by firecracker Nov 10, 2002 12:47 PM
thanks everyone by justalil Nov 11, 2002 3:47 PM
Buks by for the love of hank Nov 7, 2002 1:55 AM
Phantom Revenge by blank Nov 6, 2002 2:43 PM
Mr. Charlie by PhilipHarris Nov 6, 2002 2:15 PM
ouch by elasticbandit Nov 7, 2002 6:22 AM
This Time: Movement 1.. (pc) by newSkinjoy98 Nov 6, 2002 12:12 PM
hmmm by smg Nov 6, 2002 12:23 PM
This Time: Movement 2.. by newSkinjoy98 Nov 6, 2002 12:43 PM
i like by Billectric Nov 6, 2002 1:34 PM
yes by panta rhei Nov 6, 2002 2:17 PM
thanks billectric by newSkinjoy98 Nov 9, 2002 10:19 PM
This Time: Movement 3.. by newSkinjoy98 Nov 6, 2002 1:05 PM
no sugar by panta rhei Nov 6, 2002 2:22 PM
wow! panta by newSkinjoy98 Nov 9, 2002 10:18 PM
that is by Billectric Nov 6, 2002 1:32 PM
// by justalil Nov 7, 2002 6:38 AM
is it musical? by newSkinjoy98 Nov 9, 2002 10:16 PM
rolling by justalil Nov 10, 2002 1:51 AM
you have by varp Nov 9, 2002 5:34 AM
thanks varp by newSkinjoy98 Nov 9, 2002 10:15 PM
andrew... by jamelah Nov 9, 2002 5:42 PM
thanks for the input by newSkinjoy98 Nov 9, 2002 10:16 PM
andrew... by anniefay Nov 10, 2002 5:45 AM
this by justalil Nov 10, 2002 4:23 PM
v e r i t e by nocturne 17 Nov 5, 2002 10:03 PM
r a i n s t o r m s by nocturne 17 Nov 5, 2002 10:03 PM
the black wave by nocturne 17 Nov 5, 2002 9:52 PM
innocent by nocturne 17 Nov 5, 2002 9:15 PM
last night on earth part 4/5 please critique PLEASE?!?! by smg Nov 5, 2002 4:22 PM
no intelligent critique here by jamelah Nov 5, 2002 8:43 PM
criticism by nocturne 17 Nov 5, 2002 11:09 PM
what a great way to wake up by shyster Nov 7, 2002 1:46 AM
good topics by justalil Nov 7, 2002 8:17 AM
Voyeurist by blank Nov 5, 2002 2:51 PM
blankity blank! by for the love of hank Nov 6, 2002 5:33 PM
Trial by Fire (Please critique) by weezer Nov 5, 2002 1:54 PM
Nice by PhilipHarris Nov 6, 2002 6:03 PM
sketch of a first-person narrator by in_extremis Nov 5, 2002 10:06 AM
nice sketch... by newSkinjoy98 Nov 5, 2002 10:13 AM
hi... by jamelah Nov 5, 2002 11:44 AM
shark on a horse by mudshark Nov 5, 2002 9:10 AM
have you read by panta rhei Nov 5, 2002 9:47 AM
good by mudshark Nov 5, 2002 11:27 AM
have you seen by panta rhei Nov 6, 2002 12:42 AM
elling by mudshark Nov 6, 2002 7:41 AM
(copy, anyone?) by panta rhei Nov 6, 2002 2:14 PM
we sat there instead by jamelah Nov 4, 2002 6:46 PM
Sweet Jesus... by zygotenmycoffee Nov 4, 2002 7:41 PM
absolutely by panta rhei Nov 5, 2002 1:24 AM
panta, by jamelah Nov 5, 2002 5:15 AM
now it's up to me by panta rhei Nov 5, 2002 8:38 AM
señor coffee, i've got another question... by jamelah Nov 5, 2002 5:12 AM
writer's market by smg Nov 5, 2002 9:32 AM
thanks, dude by jamelah Nov 5, 2002 9:41 AM
Hey Jammy by zygotenmycoffee Nov 5, 2002 6:30 PM
Wow by DreamingEagle Nov 4, 2002 7:58 PM
thank you by jamelah Nov 5, 2002 5:17 AM
understated by judih. Nov 4, 2002 8:06 PM
ah, judih. by jamelah Nov 5, 2002 5:19 AM
purrfect by varp Nov 5, 2002 1:54 AM
well, gee by jamelah Nov 5, 2002 5:24 AM
Good one, J. by Billectric Nov 5, 2002 8:35 AM
thank you, bill by jamelah Nov 5, 2002 6:14 PM
Jamelah... by mtmynd Nov 5, 2002 5:13 PM
well, cecil, that works for me... by jamelah Nov 5, 2002 6:16 PM
oh my.. by sasha Nov 5, 2002 6:44 PM
sasha... by jamelah Nov 5, 2002 8:51 PM
at the risk of being controversial... by for the love of hank Nov 7, 2002 1:39 AM
thanks for being honest by jamelah Nov 7, 2002 6:24 AM
Wow... by Celtic Skye Dec 9, 2002 11:53 AM
chapter one of my nanowrimo novel (PC) by sasha Nov 4, 2002 3:00 PM
i liked this by jamelah Nov 5, 2002 8:48 PM
very good by varp Nov 9, 2002 5:04 AM
Phew Sasha! by bobby.f.m Nov 10, 2002 2:55 AM
Left Handed Tale by litnrod11 Nov 4, 2002 8:11 AM
left brain crook kedd by judih. Nov 4, 2002 7:50 PM
yeah by mudshark Nov 5, 2002 9:07 AM
not what we thought by firefly Nov 4, 2002 2:46 AM
on my back by bruised Nov 3, 2002 9:03 PM
nice to see you at the site again... by newSkinjoy98 Nov 4, 2002 8:53 AM
nice... by shishi Nov 4, 2002 8:52 PM
STORY CHALLENGE 4/11/2002 by bobby.f.m Nov 3, 2002 5:53 PM
'Blue Flamingo' (otherwise known as sleep talking) by piphed Nov 3, 2002 6:45 PM
this reminds me by jamelah Nov 3, 2002 7:29 PM
my sister by piphed Nov 3, 2002 7:38 PM
this is a perfect little gem by anniefay Nov 5, 2002 5:18 AM
I too sometimes talk in my sleep by BuddhistPunk Nov 5, 2002 8:56 AM
this by Alienamigo Nov 6, 2002 10:19 AM
2001 by varp Nov 9, 2002 12:53 AM
i can just see by bobby.f.m Nov 10, 2002 1:34 AM
blue flamingo (pointless, but obscenity free) by jamelah Nov 3, 2002 7:18 PM
i thought by piphed Nov 3, 2002 7:26 PM
the you'll love my midget reference!!! by for the love of hank Nov 4, 2002 4:05 AM
shit! by for the love of hank Nov 4, 2002 4:04 AM
i already told you this was good by anniefay Nov 5, 2002 5:19 AM
I find all your stories by BuddhistPunk Nov 5, 2002 8:58 AM
nice little story by Alienamigo Nov 6, 2002 10:26 AM
You've done it again. by varp Nov 9, 2002 1:20 AM
Easeful as usual Jam by bobby.f.m Nov 10, 2002 1:46 AM
Blue Flamingo by Alienamigo Nov 4, 2002 1:12 AM
the ex-con and the three milkmaids? by jamelah Nov 4, 2002 5:45 AM
this is just tooooooooooooo good! by anniefay Nov 5, 2002 5:27 AM
Cool by BuddhistPunk Nov 5, 2002 9:00 AM
Off with your head! by varp Nov 9, 2002 1:36 AM
O ye, alien by bobby.f.m Nov 10, 2002 1:55 AM
Blue Flamingo by for the love of hank Nov 4, 2002 3:25 AM
yeah by jamelah Nov 4, 2002 5:48 AM
that's life by anniefay Nov 5, 2002 5:29 AM
I was hoping by BuddhistPunk Nov 5, 2002 9:16 AM
nice by Alienamigo Nov 8, 2002 12:18 PM
hmmm by varp Nov 9, 2002 1:46 AM
It's funny by bobby.f.m Nov 10, 2002 2:08 AM
Blue Flamingo by anniefay Nov 4, 2002 7:16 PM
midget necrophilia by jamelah Nov 4, 2002 7:22 PM
oh man.... by piphed Nov 4, 2002 8:59 PM
You just get better by BuddhistPunk Nov 5, 2002 9:18 AM
anne by Alienamigo Nov 6, 2002 10:21 AM
Definitely something creepy going on here. by varp Nov 9, 2002 2:08 AM
thanks varp... by anniefay Nov 9, 2002 3:51 AM
Nice story by bobby.f.m Nov 10, 2002 2:20 AM
Blue Flamingo by BuddhistPunk Nov 5, 2002 8:36 AM
BP by jamelah Nov 5, 2002 9:39 AM
far, far too clever.... by anniefay Nov 5, 2002 10:07 AM
boots by piphed Nov 5, 2002 1:22 PM
your by Alienamigo Nov 8, 2002 11:30 AM
Good laugh BP by varp Nov 9, 2002 2:37 AM
Funny, laugh, laugh by bobby.f.m Nov 10, 2002 2:32 AM
The Blue Flamingo by bobby.f.m Nov 10, 2002 1:22 AM
well done by anniefay Nov 10, 2002 5:33 AM
bobby .f.m by varp Nov 11, 2002 3:14 AM
Hey bobby by BuddhistPunk Nov 11, 2002 5:44 AM
Thanks BP by bobby.f.m Nov 11, 2002 1:02 PM
Blue Flamingo by midnight Nov 10, 2002 4:08 AM
God bless you midnight by bobby.f.m Nov 10, 2002 4:17 AM
ta bobby by midnight Nov 10, 2002 3:42 PM
i like the way you handled this story by anniefay Nov 10, 2002 5:34 AM
ohh you clever thing.... by varp Nov 11, 2002 2:41 AM
You big cheat by BuddhistPunk Nov 11, 2002 5:50 AM
A True Story about Jack Kerouac by mtmynd Nov 3, 2002 5:18 PM
WOW Cecil... by Jim Furnish Nov 3, 2002 7:42 PM
Good luck... by beatgirl6 Nov 3, 2002 11:34 PM
I Don't Belive You At All!!!! by Dave The Dov Nov 4, 2002 11:42 AM
Oh Yeah? by scootertrash Nov 4, 2002 6:18 PM
You've gotta find those interviews! by Billectric Nov 5, 2002 8:40 AM
the sock(a joke of the day) by french Nov 3, 2002 2:42 PM
Watertown, Chapter Fourteen by jota Nov 3, 2002 7:02 AM
such good fortune, a new installment by judih. Nov 3, 2002 7:08 AM
Watertown, Chapter Fifteen by jota Nov 3, 2002 7:13 AM
deleted by judih. Nov 3, 2002 7:16 AM
hah, interesting mistake wouldn't you say? by jota Nov 3, 2002 7:18 AM
a touch of pee by judih. Nov 3, 2002 7:19 AM
judih p by jota Nov 3, 2002 7:30 AM
can't wait by judih. Nov 3, 2002 7:53 AM
terrific read.. by mtmynd Nov 3, 2002 7:27 AM
dearest Cecil by jota Nov 3, 2002 7:29 AM
Chapter Thirteen (just to help fill in some gaps) by jota Nov 3, 2002 7:51 AM
oh jota by panta rhei Nov 4, 2002 3:22 AM
Story Challenge Baton Pass and a Special Award by midnight Nov 3, 2002 4:52 AM
Thankyou for your faith by bobby.f.m Nov 3, 2002 5:58 PM
cookies by spirits Nov 2, 2002 12:54 AM


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