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Board Archive  •  Poetry  •  August 2003
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This board is where members can post their own poetry, or provide helpful critiques to other poets. Most poets who post here are looking for constructive feedback, so please don't hold back your responses.

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~The Social Mask~ by Isa Aug 31, 2003 10:38 AM
Liked.. by Cotton Mouth Soldier Aug 31, 2003 4:38 PM
Old Desert Plains by mrkato Aug 31, 2003 8:11 AM
London cafe, Thames, not seeing. with Ulysses in hand, and the pull of the tide by Ambon Pereira Aug 31, 2003 6:46 AM
Ambon by zygotenmycoffee Aug 31, 2003 11:16 AM
Re: London Thames by Andeh Aug 31, 2003 2:14 PM
sheer delight by Hester Prynne Aug 31, 2003 9:36 PM
HOT by runshadow Sep 1, 2003 4:01 AM
Pereira... by Arcadia Sep 1, 2003 10:56 AM
thanks ya'll, by Ambon Pereira Sep 3, 2003 1:16 PM
Only Human by Jinx Aug 30, 2003 8:12 PM
Really.. by Cotton Mouth Soldier Aug 30, 2003 10:08 PM
thank you by Jinx Sep 5, 2003 8:32 PM
responce to by SuzieQ Sep 4, 2003 8:15 AM
True friendship by Jinx Sep 5, 2003 8:37 PM
Porpoise Man by Andeh Aug 30, 2003 1:48 PM
Fishing for Karma (2nd try) by Cotton Mouth Soldier Aug 30, 2003 8:13 AM
um yes by frontal-abstraction Aug 30, 2003 8:40 AM
Intellectuality by IfOnlyFrogsWereGods Aug 30, 2003 2:58 PM
hi by Sylph Aug 31, 2003 6:59 AM
alrighty Sylph! by IfOnlyFrogsWereGods Aug 31, 2003 12:20 PM
Goes down by Sylph Aug 31, 2003 7:01 AM
Wine by mrbojangles83 Aug 29, 2003 11:40 PM
and now... by IfOnlyFrogsWereGods Aug 30, 2003 2:55 PM
drunk by mrbojangles83 Aug 29, 2003 11:37 PM
lack of strength... by IfOnlyFrogsWereGods Aug 30, 2003 2:53 PM
Oh, Wind Why Dost Thou Blow So by Andeh Aug 29, 2003 9:20 PM
Oh but what a picture... by IfOnlyFrogsWereGods Aug 30, 2003 2:46 PM
did you ever see her? by Ambon Pereira Aug 29, 2003 11:23 AM
O! by rain70 Aug 29, 2003 2:30 PM
how did you know i like to drink sparkling soda, rain? by Ambon Pereira Aug 31, 2003 6:59 AM
sorry by stevadore Aug 29, 2003 8:01 AM
Into The Sea by MidnightEarth Aug 29, 2003 2:57 AM
Paint by Tim Cunningham Aug 29, 2003 1:04 AM
chinese by um Aug 30, 2003 9:27 PM
psycho babble a pc by slog Aug 28, 2003 2:36 PM
i lie by Mimesis Aug 28, 2003 12:40 PM
i keep your pictures in the back of my car by Mimesis Aug 28, 2003 12:39 PM
Cool by Misanthrope Dreamer Aug 28, 2003 1:55 PM
simply, by Rosie Aug 28, 2003 5:52 PM
wow by Uncle B Aug 28, 2003 6:20 PM
hum by slog Aug 28, 2003 6:21 PM
kid rock? by Mimesis Sep 5, 2003 7:15 AM
Some May Call Her a River by Uncle B Aug 28, 2003 11:47 AM
now i understand... by anewday Aug 29, 2003 9:33 PM
In Memorium 8/28 by mrbojangles83 Aug 28, 2003 11:24 AM
trees always shout by Prometheus Aug 28, 2003 10:15 AM
hello U by Rosie Aug 28, 2003 10:31 AM
wonderful, by Ambon Pereira Aug 31, 2003 7:03 AM
analogy by thelonius punk Aug 28, 2003 9:18 AM
oijoijoijoijojoi by RIGHTLEFT Aug 28, 2003 8:23 AM
niCE by mrbojangles83 Aug 28, 2003 11:26 AM
Thanks by RIGHTLEFT Aug 30, 2003 5:35 AM
Fishing for Karma by Cotton Mouth Soldier Aug 28, 2003 4:57 AM
BlAnK by mrbojangles83 Aug 28, 2003 11:27 AM
Fair call by Cotton Mouth Soldier Aug 28, 2003 1:50 PM
wreak thy wrath upon the wrack of ruin, Jeremiah. by Ambon Pereira Aug 28, 2003 3:49 AM
wow Ambon by Sylph Aug 28, 2003 4:11 AM
bravo by Prometheus Aug 28, 2003 10:29 AM
. by mrbojangles83 Aug 28, 2003 11:30 AM
Point = Counterpoint by MidnightEarth Aug 28, 2003 2:17 AM
Is this by Tim Cunningham Aug 28, 2003 3:23 AM
The College Weak end- repost by Kristopher Aug 27, 2003 5:31 PM
ring around me by peacekeeper224 Aug 27, 2003 4:27 PM
Shoving by Tim Cunningham Aug 27, 2003 3:06 PM
Whiskey Island Needs Submissions!!! by pottygok Aug 27, 2003 2:15 PM
AN AFTERNOON ON THE CORNER OF LIFE AND DEATH by Misanthrope Dreamer Aug 27, 2003 1:27 PM
step into today by peacekeeper224 Aug 27, 2003 10:46 AM
Both of 'em by Tim Cunningham Aug 27, 2003 7:33 AM
nice! by peacekeeper224 Aug 27, 2003 3:43 PM
Juste des mots by Sylph Aug 27, 2003 6:57 AM
et encore des mots by poildecarotte Aug 27, 2003 7:06 AM
libres vers by Sylph Aug 27, 2003 7:27 AM
wds by poildecarotte Aug 27, 2003 7:43 AM
Squandering Time by frontal-abstraction Aug 27, 2003 3:46 AM
Nice... by Misanthrope Dreamer Aug 27, 2003 1:31 PM
Angry, sad, and typical by big_al_duf Aug 27, 2003 2:44 AM
Slightly acidic...poem and incomplete thoughts by big_al_duf Aug 27, 2003 2:43 AM
First post in months...lovey dovey shit by big_al_duf Aug 27, 2003 2:40 AM
why by onemoreman Aug 26, 2003 10:45 PM
Needs by Jinx Aug 26, 2003 7:09 PM
aw by juliemichelle Sep 4, 2003 8:08 AM
thanks by Jinx Sep 5, 2003 8:41 PM
(proximity to mars) by rain70 Aug 26, 2003 8:57 AM
"For quiet in the blindness of peace." by frontal-abstraction Aug 27, 2003 5:58 AM
I love by Sylph Aug 27, 2003 6:47 AM
alright by frontal-abstraction Aug 27, 2003 8:36 AM
forgive me by Sylph Aug 27, 2003 9:57 AM
thanks for the clarity by frontal-abstraction Aug 30, 2003 8:39 AM
red rust brewing. by Ambon Pereira Aug 28, 2003 4:12 AM
In by rain70 Aug 28, 2003 9:18 AM
image by wyrdsky Aug 26, 2003 5:52 AM
The hopeful butterfly by Cotton Mouth Soldier Aug 26, 2003 4:54 AM
you really move me by magic love Aug 26, 2003 5:22 AM
Thanks.. by Cotton Mouth Soldier Aug 26, 2003 6:00 AM
What a beautiful photo by magic love Aug 28, 2003 2:46 AM
have been reading by frontal-abstraction Aug 26, 2003 5:50 AM
beauty rests in your words by runshadow Sep 1, 2003 4:05 AM
Forest Of The Left Hand Path by Rhinehart Aug 26, 2003 4:41 AM
The Loving Black Depth by Rhinehart Aug 26, 2003 4:39 AM
A Moment by MidnightEarth Aug 26, 2003 1:38 AM
From "New York to Paris to New York to Paris" - , PC!!! by poildecarotte Aug 26, 2003 12:56 AM
Wow...okay... by pottygok Aug 27, 2003 7:27 PM
pottygok, by poildecarotte Aug 28, 2003 4:16 AM
hello/goodbye by starve2act Aug 25, 2003 10:11 AM
that's where by poildecarotte Aug 25, 2003 10:18 AM
this is by firecracker Aug 25, 2003 6:38 PM
hey by Feign Aug 26, 2003 8:14 AM
The season of Flies (PC or mention "unworthy", if necessary) by poildecarotte Aug 25, 2003 10:08 AM
unworthy? by Arcadia Aug 25, 2003 10:33 AM
i meant by poildecarotte Aug 25, 2003 10:37 AM
i think by Sylph Aug 25, 2003 2:24 PM
hi by poildecarotte Aug 26, 2003 9:02 AM
arc by poildecarotte Aug 26, 2003 9:05 AM
if by Arcadia Aug 26, 2003 10:08 AM
not the only one by starve2act Aug 25, 2003 7:00 AM
i dig this by jim vinny Aug 26, 2003 6:20 AM
Emerald Green by Cotton Mouth Soldier Aug 25, 2003 6:57 AM
very by firecracker Aug 25, 2003 6:37 PM
jeremiah was a bullhorn, impaled a good friend of mine, by Ambon Pereira Aug 25, 2003 3:34 AM
I hear... by rain70 Aug 25, 2003 8:29 AM
WINTERLAND (annex to Fillmore auditorium) by brucejewett Aug 25, 2003 1:50 AM
suicide by saftey pin by pharroh Aug 24, 2003 9:33 PM
i like this by Sylph Aug 25, 2003 2:26 PM
turning away by all hail the stars Aug 24, 2003 6:48 PM
Uru-eu-wau-wau by headburner Aug 24, 2003 5:07 PM
i like, by Ambon Pereira Aug 25, 2003 3:39 AM
... by rain70 Aug 25, 2003 8:30 AM
Ha! by headburner Aug 24, 2003 4:48 PM
wow! by rain70 Aug 25, 2003 8:27 AM
Break On Through or Hey, Fuck You Jim by jota Aug 24, 2003 1:51 PM
pretty wild by firecracker Aug 25, 2003 6:36 PM
glorious by big_al_duf Aug 27, 2003 3:09 AM
jim the dionysus by Tulate Sep 5, 2003 11:15 AM
American Dong: Yearbook entry by jota Aug 24, 2003 1:47 PM
spur of the moment wordplay, in apology for double postage last time by strangeling Aug 24, 2003 10:39 AM
new to the board, sort of long winded, wishing for feedback by strangeling Aug 24, 2003 10:31 AM
new to the board, sort of long-winded wishing for feedback by strangeling Aug 24, 2003 10:29 AM
Fall of Season by Sylph Aug 24, 2003 7:15 AM
Stop the Deconstruction by Victor Abruzzi Aug 24, 2003 3:39 AM
Pause by Tim Cunningham Aug 24, 2003 1:06 AM
hi tim by firecracker Aug 25, 2003 6:35 PM
thx for the reply by Tim Cunningham Aug 26, 2003 3:59 AM
Reply to Robert Frost by brucejewett Aug 24, 2003 12:36 AM
cute by firecracker Aug 24, 2003 7:19 AM
love by pharroh Aug 23, 2003 11:27 PM
...title by big_al_duf Aug 27, 2003 2:52 AM
Academic reproduction by Cotton Mouth Soldier Aug 23, 2003 4:38 PM
Loved it by cholswade Aug 23, 2003 6:00 PM
pretty good, cms by firecracker Aug 24, 2003 7:23 AM
Charlie the monkey by silvicolous Aug 23, 2003 3:31 PM
Butterflies-Help-critiques please by cholswade Aug 23, 2003 2:18 PM
hmm... by searching Aug 23, 2003 7:27 PM
Whatever you want by cholswade Aug 23, 2003 8:00 PM
hmmm by firecracker Aug 24, 2003 7:22 AM
Thank-you by cholswade Aug 24, 2003 9:52 AM
eh... by pottygok Aug 26, 2003 4:06 PM
Thank-you-questions by cholswade Aug 27, 2003 5:26 AM
you're welcome, and answers... !-) by pottygok Aug 27, 2003 12:29 PM
i blame this on cosmopolitan (PC) by incendiaryquip Aug 23, 2003 1:44 PM
surprised me by searching Aug 23, 2003 7:30 PM
yes... by incendiaryquip Aug 24, 2003 1:10 PM
Interesting... by pottygok Aug 26, 2003 4:00 PM
fleur angelique (fuck you if you don't critique) by learned Aug 23, 2003 10:58 AM
Well, at least I'm not fucked? by pottygok Aug 26, 2003 3:56 PM
shit, no by learned Jul 11, 2004 11:46 AM
church (flatboat to fallen tower) by rain70 Aug 23, 2003 10:20 AM
brilliant by Ambon Pereira Aug 24, 2003 1:54 AM
thanks, A! by rain70 Aug 25, 2003 8:25 AM
rain by runshadow Aug 27, 2003 3:25 AM
thnak you, by rain70 Aug 30, 2003 11:00 AM
Sirius by cholswade Aug 23, 2003 8:06 AM
Spring holiday report / Baltic Atmosphere by ARAHH Aug 23, 2003 7:57 AM
Baltic by Arcadia Aug 23, 2003 1:35 PM
funeral, from the perspective of a gargoyle, at chartres. by Ambon Pereira Aug 23, 2003 2:11 AM
loved this by firecracker Aug 23, 2003 6:50 PM
very nice by all hail the stars Aug 24, 2003 6:42 PM
something I wrote . . . my first post by jahlive Aug 22, 2003 8:47 PM
another something I wrote earlier by jahlive Aug 22, 2003 8:53 PM
my first song . . . there is music too by jahlive Aug 22, 2003 8:56 PM
trying to share all my work by jahlive Aug 22, 2003 8:58 PM
free form by jahlive Aug 22, 2003 9:00 PM
welcome by firecracker Aug 25, 2003 6:40 PM
remember (to myself) by all hail the stars Aug 22, 2003 1:43 PM
... by poildecarotte Aug 22, 2003 8:53 AM
short, satisfying, and beautiful by big_al_duf Aug 29, 2003 12:07 AM
everyone's got a schmaltzy pome in them... by starve2act Aug 22, 2003 8:48 AM
..... by Arcadia Aug 22, 2003 11:36 AM
For Sons of Homer by Lightning Rod Aug 22, 2003 8:03 AM
Tempétueuse by Sylph Aug 22, 2003 5:37 AM
quencing by um Aug 23, 2003 12:34 AM
Avant la pluie by Sylph Aug 22, 2003 5:17 AM
never trust a snowstorm by poildecarotte Aug 22, 2003 6:29 AM
never trust a snowstorm in a hot July desert by Sylph Aug 22, 2003 6:46 AM
wind.... by Uncle B Aug 22, 2003 6:55 AM
just like you by anewday Aug 28, 2003 10:42 AM
à mon tour by Sylph Aug 31, 2003 11:54 AM
LHHOQ by ddmcmcc Aug 21, 2003 2:23 PM
Hey Duchamp... by rain70 Aug 21, 2003 2:28 PM
... by jules27 Aug 21, 2003 11:55 AM
Whored Out by Dystopick Aug 21, 2003 9:29 AM
Damn, I like it by Allez33 Aug 28, 2003 12:02 PM
another from 'Idyll' by rain70 Aug 21, 2003 9:28 AM
this appeals to me by firecracker Aug 21, 2003 5:15 PM
thanx FC! by rain70 Aug 22, 2003 8:11 AM
am I that bad by StatusPig Aug 20, 2003 9:52 PM
CRY by StatusPig Aug 20, 2003 9:48 PM
Good skeleton... by pottygok Aug 21, 2003 10:02 AM
a thought by Face Plants Jr. Aug 20, 2003 7:53 PM
For John Berryman by ddmcmcc Aug 20, 2003 7:47 PM
Who do you all recomend by mapping Aug 20, 2003 4:08 PM
deeze and doze by rain70 Aug 20, 2003 4:22 PM
i'd say by firecracker Aug 20, 2003 7:27 PM
eat me by starsailor Aug 20, 2003 3:34 PM
eaten by starsailor Aug 21, 2003 8:15 AM
all alone is all we are by darkblood Aug 20, 2003 1:54 PM
Catch up! by Zazel Aug 20, 2003 2:33 PM
yeah, i know by darkblood Aug 21, 2003 3:56 AM
hey by Tim Cunningham Aug 24, 2003 10:12 AM
wait by rain70 Aug 20, 2003 1:21 PM
Let’s dig up the dead and dance with the bones. by Kristopher Aug 20, 2003 1:19 PM
nice poem by darkblood Aug 20, 2003 2:20 PM
light days by hippigrrl Aug 20, 2003 1:12 PM
hi hippigrrl... some comments by firecracker Aug 21, 2003 5:13 PM
...leo translated by poildecarotte Aug 20, 2003 10:29 AM
one more cup of Leo Ferré for the road by poildecarotte Aug 20, 2003 10:16 AM
Plaisirs by Sylph Aug 20, 2003 5:52 PM
Richard, de Ferré aussi. by anonymous-one Aug 20, 2003 9:00 PM
Léo Ferré,translated to german. by anonymous-one Aug 20, 2003 9:07 PM
Drive - In Negroes by the mingo Aug 20, 2003 12:53 AM
"the memory of them by Hester Prynne Aug 20, 2003 12:57 AM
the mingo returns by firecracker Aug 20, 2003 7:28 PM
really good by jamelah Aug 21, 2003 6:04 PM
drive by caucasians by brucejewett Aug 25, 2003 2:14 AM
Prepare to vanish by Hester Prynne Aug 20, 2003 12:33 AM
zing ... by the mingo Aug 20, 2003 12:56 AM
you say good by Hester Prynne Aug 20, 2003 12:58 AM
very nice, hester by jamelah Aug 21, 2003 6:11 PM
i don't care what time it is. Just go to bed by Boom tin dog Aug 19, 2003 6:54 PM
i don't care what time it is just go to bed ... by lookingup525@cs.com Aug 19, 2003 9:58 PM
Dreams become real by elemental123 Aug 19, 2003 6:42 PM
Light from the Sun, Shadows from the Moon by Uncle B Aug 19, 2003 4:11 PM
wow by Hester Prynne Aug 20, 2003 12:54 AM
chris by jules27 Aug 19, 2003 3:01 PM
some good phrases in here by firecracker Aug 20, 2003 7:32 PM
spiral by hippigrrl Aug 19, 2003 2:45 PM
moonburn by rain70 Aug 19, 2003 2:53 PM
Le Chien - translated by poildecarotte Aug 19, 2003 9:13 AM
I by Arcadia Aug 19, 2003 10:13 AM
when by poildecarotte Aug 19, 2003 10:19 AM
ruin by rain70 Aug 19, 2003 8:07 AM
. . . by the mingo Aug 20, 2003 1:07 AM
summons (drowning bullhorn) by rain70 Aug 19, 2003 8:04 AM
i've read by jamelah Aug 21, 2003 6:16 PM
Ass by Feign Aug 19, 2003 7:29 AM
Le Chien - by poildecarotte Aug 19, 2003 5:19 AM
What I wish for. by Kristopher Aug 18, 2003 11:11 PM
nice by StatusPig Aug 18, 2003 11:22 PM
the fall (a poem for my daughter OLIVIA)please critique by StatusPig Aug 18, 2003 10:58 PM
Sorry we took so long... by pottygok Aug 21, 2003 9:58 AM
well by firecracker Aug 21, 2003 5:03 PM
Jury duty lunch break writting. by Kristopher Aug 18, 2003 7:02 PM
Advice on Writing Poetry Needed by Holden Aug 18, 2003 6:12 PM
No! by Kristopher Aug 18, 2003 6:46 PM
Find your own voice by Pieridae Sep 19, 2003 12:43 AM
Here's a few to start you off... by pottygok Aug 19, 2003 11:16 PM
first of all... by rain70 Aug 20, 2003 1:34 PM
Quick addition... by pottygok Aug 20, 2003 7:55 PM
well... by firecracker Aug 20, 2003 7:30 PM
An Old Woman in North Carolina by ddmcmcc Aug 18, 2003 5:32 PM
I have to say by rain70 Aug 19, 2003 3:13 PM
If it rains by Dystopick Aug 18, 2003 4:32 PM
dig that night by bonepalaceballet Aug 18, 2003 1:02 PM
after 3 hours by bonepalaceballet Aug 18, 2003 12:54 PM
alone by hippigrrl Aug 18, 2003 11:08 AM
empathy by LankyAl Aug 18, 2003 10:26 PM
intelligent by elvin Aug 24, 2003 7:14 PM
? & ! by Rhinehart Aug 18, 2003 7:50 AM
To Fuck Myself Over by Rhinehart Aug 18, 2003 7:41 AM
and with the passing of days by MoonPearl22 Aug 18, 2003 7:01 AM
Les Pas by poildecarotte Aug 18, 2003 6:53 AM
Au-delà by Sylph Aug 18, 2003 12:34 PM
ces pas-là by poildecarotte Aug 19, 2003 4:33 AM
Your Coming Smile by ~K Aug 18, 2003 2:02 AM
Boy Blues (2003) by mrkato Aug 18, 2003 12:20 AM
hi mrkato by firecracker Aug 20, 2003 7:34 PM
hi firecracker by mrkato Aug 20, 2003 9:10 PM
hey, i enjoyed reading this by Billectric Aug 22, 2003 12:07 PM
Thanks to Billectric by mrkato Aug 22, 2003 7:15 PM
I wish i had met Burroughs by Billectric Aug 23, 2003 5:55 AM
Numbers by StatusPig Aug 17, 2003 11:24 PM
honest and trustworthy by learned Aug 17, 2003 3:31 PM
another page from "Idyll" by rain70 Aug 17, 2003 12:41 PM
You are the best. by ~K Aug 18, 2003 2:40 AM
please do! by rain70 Aug 18, 2003 8:26 AM
mountains made up of hills by michaelsferrell Aug 16, 2003 9:24 PM
like the by um Aug 17, 2003 8:06 PM
I by StatusPig Aug 16, 2003 4:44 PM
you by um Aug 16, 2003 8:20 PM
true by StatusPig Aug 17, 2003 12:03 PM
random words by hippigrrl Aug 16, 2003 4:13 PM
skin prizm by um Aug 16, 2003 8:24 PM
I MUST HAVE A FEAR OF SPHERES AND WHEELS (Critique Welcome) by chrispoet Aug 16, 2003 3:04 PM
hi there by firecracker Aug 17, 2003 12:49 PM
not much by jamelah Aug 21, 2003 6:09 PM
nothing is real by hippigrrl Aug 16, 2003 2:49 PM
yet by ~K Aug 18, 2003 3:16 AM
lure* by rain70 Aug 16, 2003 1:52 PM
the shizznizzyizzy by StatusPig Aug 16, 2003 5:09 PM
nice by jamelah Aug 18, 2003 7:03 AM
Anaid* by rain70 Aug 16, 2003 8:32 AM
Saviours by Feign Aug 16, 2003 4:26 AM
reaktor by HiTech Aug 16, 2003 1:43 AM
$ bit by DeliAthletic Aug 16, 2003 1:16 AM
nice by HiTech Aug 16, 2003 1:37 AM
...trailing sleep thought by DeliAthletic Aug 16, 2003 12:53 AM
requiem of a wistful dream by sailingtobohemia Aug 16, 2003 12:53 AM
a little thing... by DeliAthletic Aug 16, 2003 12:48 AM
dude you're on by HiTech Aug 16, 2003 1:46 AM
Traced Backwards by Ripple Aug 16, 2003 12:24 AM
from the beginning by ~K Aug 18, 2003 4:17 AM
cry passion by sailingtobohemia Aug 16, 2003 12:20 AM
PITYPOT by StatusPig Aug 15, 2003 9:35 PM
cool by um Aug 15, 2003 11:31 PM
why by StatusPig Aug 16, 2003 7:59 AM
let the reader by um Aug 16, 2003 8:28 PM
yes by StatusPig Aug 17, 2003 12:04 PM
cool by um Aug 17, 2003 11:00 PM
Like every good conversation by a majority of one Aug 15, 2003 9:25 PM
hmm by StatusPig Aug 15, 2003 9:41 PM
Well by a majority of one Aug 15, 2003 9:52 PM
i couldn't help it by StatusPig Aug 15, 2003 9:57 PM
Eh by a majority of one Aug 15, 2003 10:01 PM
input by MoonPearl22 Aug 16, 2003 5:55 AM
the sky reached its delicate colors of pink and blue by MoonPearl22 Aug 15, 2003 9:21 PM
Lend me a little time by a majority of one Aug 15, 2003 9:32 PM
melody by MoonPearl22 Aug 15, 2003 9:38 PM
I ENJOY by StatusPig Aug 15, 2003 9:51 PM
please join by MoonPearl22 Aug 16, 2003 5:53 AM
And we were hammered by a majority of one Aug 15, 2003 10:01 PM
but it doesn't matter, our state of mind by MoonPearl22 Aug 16, 2003 5:45 AM
Don't bother reading this by a majority of one Aug 15, 2003 9:13 PM
dreaming for something real PC by weezer Aug 15, 2003 5:02 PM
yes by a majority of one Aug 15, 2003 9:05 PM
Been there by Althea Aug 15, 2003 9:12 PM
This reads... by pottygok Aug 16, 2003 11:05 AM
Decomposition by ddmcmcc Aug 15, 2003 12:25 PM
All Fall Down. by Ambon Pereira Aug 15, 2003 11:33 AM
wow by MoonPearl22 Aug 15, 2003 9:27 PM
ashes, ashes by Hester Prynne Aug 16, 2003 2:49 AM
All Fall Down. (Revision.) by Ambon Pereira Nov 6, 2003 3:02 AM
me the Activist by StatusPig Aug 14, 2003 3:45 PM
making a difference... by mnaz Aug 14, 2003 4:24 PM
Wow by Arcadia Aug 15, 2003 10:11 AM
From: 'Idyll' (a notebook sketch) by rain70 Aug 14, 2003 2:34 PM
as usual by bobloblaw Aug 14, 2003 6:00 PM
hey... by rain70 Aug 15, 2003 8:03 AM
Poems by a majority of one Aug 14, 2003 2:02 PM
so true by MoonPearl22 Aug 15, 2003 9:41 PM
Lonely days by a majority of one Aug 14, 2003 1:39 PM
DISCOUNT LIQOUR by StatusPig Aug 14, 2003 1:31 PM
I by a majority of one Aug 14, 2003 1:48 PM
offering my take by MoonPearl22 Aug 15, 2003 9:44 PM
OH YEAH by StatusPig Aug 15, 2003 9:49 PM
Scaffold on sand by Cotton Mouth Soldier Aug 14, 2003 11:12 AM
orpheus #1 by poildecarotte Aug 14, 2003 9:43 AM
Priapus and your mother ( a happy dirge) by rain70 Aug 14, 2003 7:51 AM
word by jamelah Aug 14, 2003 8:00 AM
yeh.. by rain70 Aug 14, 2003 8:29 AM
never get involved by jamelah Aug 14, 2003 8:49 AM
touche! *edit* by rain70 Aug 14, 2003 9:07 AM
The sun rises and theres nothing to take back by poildecarotte Aug 14, 2003 5:28 AM
like the poem by jamelah Aug 14, 2003 8:16 AM
funny by poildecarotte Aug 14, 2003 8:56 AM
I like by Sylph Aug 14, 2003 1:09 PM
our memories never sleep (PC) by feed_yr_head Aug 14, 2003 2:04 AM
Critique for you. by pottygok Aug 16, 2003 1:24 PM
In spring we were born but by winter we had all died again (PC) by feed_yr_head Aug 14, 2003 1:55 AM
Hey, look, I have time before work. by pottygok Aug 16, 2003 1:32 PM
Ghazal--ays alone (Please critique!!!) by pottygok Aug 13, 2003 11:27 PM
re: ghazal by jamelah Aug 14, 2003 8:38 AM
'gok wrote by rain70 Aug 14, 2003 9:19 AM
yeah by jamelah Aug 14, 2003 9:33 AM
Check these two links out. by pottygok Aug 15, 2003 9:31 AM
thanks by jamelah Aug 18, 2003 7:24 AM
Ohhhh man... by pottygok Aug 20, 2003 8:06 PM
REWRITE REWRITE REWRITE by pottygok Aug 15, 2003 9:43 PM
i think by jamelah Aug 18, 2003 10:42 AM
Hehehe... by pottygok Aug 20, 2003 8:02 PM
need title by Jinx Aug 13, 2003 11:14 PM
title by um Aug 14, 2003 12:00 AM
title by MoonPearl22 Aug 15, 2003 9:36 PM
title by StatusPig Aug 15, 2003 10:07 PM
existential dream by hippigrrl Aug 13, 2003 8:35 PM
jilly by jules27 Aug 13, 2003 8:28 PM
There is not much room for love by Kristopher Aug 13, 2003 4:44 PM
Short words by Kristopher Aug 13, 2003 4:35 PM
short by firecracker Aug 13, 2003 4:50 PM
words by hippigrrl Aug 13, 2003 4:30 PM
passing by jamelah Aug 13, 2003 2:21 PM
i really liked this one by firecracker Aug 13, 2003 4:50 PM
thank ya kindly by jamelah Aug 14, 2003 8:58 AM
wisdom (pt. 1) by rain70 Aug 13, 2003 1:48 PM
rain falls... by Mimesis Aug 13, 2003 1:32 PM
man in a box by hippigrrl Aug 13, 2003 11:54 AM
between me and pavement by anewday Aug 13, 2003 11:24 AM
Controlling the brain by Cotton Mouth Soldier Aug 13, 2003 9:59 AM
unfinished song (the Oregon Chickentrail) by poildecarotte Aug 13, 2003 9:06 AM
My negativity finds an outlet by LankyAl Aug 13, 2003 5:25 AM
Engraved in Sea Foam by elemental123 Aug 13, 2003 12:15 AM
20 degrees North by ~K Aug 17, 2003 10:53 PM
I Think Sometimes by Boone Aug 12, 2003 9:51 PM
Bar Fly by Boone Aug 12, 2003 9:04 PM
keep my panties! by doreen peri Aug 12, 2003 8:14 PM
Now I Know by Jinx Aug 12, 2003 7:02 PM
words by hippigrrl Aug 12, 2003 5:38 PM
Thoughts of a hippigrrl fan... by LankyAl Aug 13, 2003 5:13 AM
thanx by hippigrrl Aug 13, 2003 7:26 PM
Never clear as blood mixing water (my garden) by green winter Aug 12, 2003 2:49 PM
Grey Dawn Sonnet by B3jamboree Aug 12, 2003 12:40 PM
Nose Wipe by Cotton Mouth Soldier Aug 12, 2003 11:37 AM
"Shaftcutter" & "Father Crow" by foolish_Paeter Aug 12, 2003 9:41 AM
I love you (version # 762) by rain70 Aug 12, 2003 8:53 AM
Abomination (the Best-Bee) by rain70 Aug 12, 2003 8:48 AM
None by Althea Aug 12, 2003 5:23 AM
Broken by ~K Aug 18, 2003 3:26 AM
Deutsch Übung by jiffylube Aug 11, 2003 6:13 PM
well by Sylph Aug 11, 2003 6:43 PM
Spanish intuitive translation: Sagas en el siglo XXI?? by Arcadia Aug 11, 2003 7:03 PM
estoy de acuerdo by LankyAl Aug 12, 2003 4:13 AM
Well, by Arcadia Aug 12, 2003 9:34 AM
A half-baked, half-finished concoction of unquantifiable eventual length by LankyAl Aug 11, 2003 5:29 PM
song lyrics (a type of poetry I guess) by bobloblaw Aug 11, 2003 5:15 PM
Intruiging by LankyAl Aug 11, 2003 5:32 PM
Hmmm by Althea Aug 12, 2003 8:47 AM
we've run this game together by mapping Aug 11, 2003 4:45 PM
in the garden by hippigrrl Aug 11, 2003 4:20 PM
"age like fine wine"--most excellent! by jiffylube Aug 11, 2003 5:31 PM
The strive to sobriety by LankyAl Aug 11, 2003 5:37 PM
You're so special by Cotton Mouth Soldier Aug 11, 2003 4:16 PM
excellent by all hail the stars Aug 11, 2003 4:35 PM
this is like soooo way cool, dude by jiffylube Aug 11, 2003 5:17 PM
OMG by magic love Aug 22, 2003 4:37 AM
its never too late to say.... by runshadow Sep 1, 2003 3:59 PM
Never to late to say.. by Cotton Mouth Soldier Sep 2, 2003 7:39 AM
the sporting life by all hail the stars Aug 11, 2003 4:15 PM
I GET IN MY WAY by Boom tin dog Aug 11, 2003 3:32 PM
she was something more without you by celeste Aug 11, 2003 2:46 PM
golly by jiffylube Aug 11, 2003 5:53 PM
meal by rain70 Aug 11, 2003 2:41 PM
seriously by bobloblaw Aug 11, 2003 5:16 PM
really by HiTech Aug 12, 2003 1:49 AM
reply to a serious social issue by onemoreman Aug 11, 2003 2:27 PM
desperation... by Mimesis Aug 11, 2003 12:40 PM
i keep your pictures... by Mimesis Aug 11, 2003 12:39 PM
i lie... by Mimesis Aug 11, 2003 12:39 PM
we're cool. just not like before. by Mimesis Aug 11, 2003 12:38 PM
good job by ellipsis Aug 13, 2003 7:29 PM
yeah... by Mimesis Aug 14, 2003 1:07 PM
Le Deluge (pc) by feed_yr_head Aug 11, 2003 12:16 PM
remember... by Mimesis Aug 11, 2003 12:41 PM
hehe by feed_yr_head Aug 11, 2003 12:52 PM
all i could pay attention to was the rhythm by ellipsis Aug 13, 2003 7:37 PM
thanks a bunch by feed_yr_head Aug 14, 2003 1:42 AM
you're welcome by ellipsis Aug 14, 2003 8:28 AM
kill the matrix by hippigrrl Aug 11, 2003 11:16 AM
keening by rain70 Aug 11, 2003 7:38 AM
revelations in the quiet morning 4-5am (pc) by feed_yr_head Aug 11, 2003 5:37 AM
the metallic taste of blood by michaelsferrell Aug 10, 2003 11:59 PM
she's stolen their eyes by michaelsferrell Aug 10, 2003 11:56 PM
the paint of my innocence by michaelsferrell Aug 10, 2003 11:51 PM
eight hours later by thelonius punk Aug 10, 2003 10:32 PM
Boiling Blood by elemental123 Aug 10, 2003 5:24 PM
today by rain70 Aug 11, 2003 2:42 PM
Make up my mind, will ya! by Sylph Aug 10, 2003 5:03 PM
At the Co-op by soluspoeta Aug 10, 2003 3:53 PM
hey, very nice by bobloblaw Aug 11, 2003 11:32 AM
from: Penumbra (what is poetry?)* by rain70 Aug 10, 2003 12:12 PM
Come Rain or Come Shine by jiffylube Aug 10, 2003 2:16 PM
in defense by bobloblaw Aug 10, 2003 3:18 PM
"Shelley and Bryon were really just average people " by jiffylube Aug 10, 2003 4:20 PM
note the sarcasm by bobloblaw Aug 10, 2003 6:28 PM
"the context of your poetry " by jiffylube Aug 10, 2003 6:44 PM
well by ellipsis Aug 10, 2003 7:11 PM
thanks by bobloblaw Aug 10, 2003 8:33 PM
o fair ellipsis by jiffylube Aug 12, 2003 12:36 AM
i have to reply to this by foolish_Paeter Aug 12, 2003 8:32 AM
freedom by hippigrrl Aug 10, 2003 11:33 AM
and rain... by slim gizzad Aug 10, 2003 9:52 AM
depression by hippigrrl Aug 10, 2003 7:06 AM
"oddity shaping the dark passages" by jiffylube Aug 10, 2003 8:40 AM
Unlimited Potential by Cotton Mouth Soldier Aug 10, 2003 10:26 AM
Thorn Soul ( a re-post) by Sylph Aug 10, 2003 6:56 AM
loved it then by rain70 Aug 10, 2003 12:40 PM
Breaking Apart by green_soda Aug 9, 2003 8:52 PM
Failing You by beatvibe Aug 9, 2003 8:20 PM
Sierra Moonrise, Winter 1990 by jiffylube Aug 9, 2003 7:55 PM
Mono County, 10,000+ ft. by jiffylube Aug 9, 2003 9:07 PM
nice but by rain70 Aug 10, 2003 12:00 PM
"Bear-scat school" by jiffylube Aug 10, 2003 1:22 PM
.. by rain70 Aug 10, 2003 11:55 AM
dear rain by jiffylube Aug 10, 2003 1:09 PM
"bother" me? by rain70 Aug 11, 2003 8:28 AM
you are confusing formlessness with by foolish_Paeter Aug 12, 2003 9:35 AM
hey by um Aug 10, 2003 8:45 PM
wobbles the rat by jota Aug 9, 2003 6:35 PM
Years by the mingo Aug 9, 2003 6:14 PM
dead world by hippigrrl Aug 9, 2003 12:39 PM
god-less by hippigrrl Aug 9, 2003 11:31 AM
squirtski by jiffylube Aug 9, 2003 12:06 PM
damn by ellipsis Aug 11, 2003 11:48 AM
hey by Yabyum Aug 11, 2003 3:46 PM
rain (for Indra). ....edited version. by rain70 Aug 9, 2003 7:57 AM
Thank you by bobloblaw Aug 10, 2003 3:23 PM
- by rain70 Aug 11, 2003 2:34 PM
Cotton Mouthed Monkey by Cotton Mouth Soldier Aug 9, 2003 7:35 AM
Help Please by bonepalaceballet Aug 9, 2003 6:20 AM
hmmm by Mob Aug 9, 2003 7:28 AM
In my opinion... by atom tan Aug 9, 2003 7:29 PM
i read all three by ellipsis Aug 10, 2003 7:48 PM
p.s. by ellipsis Aug 10, 2003 7:50 PM
That winter by bonepalaceballet Aug 9, 2003 6:19 AM
I couldn't get it right by bonepalaceballet Aug 9, 2003 6:18 AM
Lace Imagination by bonepalaceballet Aug 9, 2003 6:17 AM
far from my memory by ~K Aug 9, 2003 3:10 AM
human zoo by pharroh Aug 8, 2003 10:21 PM
Still by green_soda Aug 8, 2003 10:18 PM
Prescences in the room by elemental123 Aug 8, 2003 9:28 PM
dream by hippigrrl Aug 8, 2003 9:02 PM
petabyte by um Aug 8, 2003 9:11 PM
Groovy by elemental123 Aug 8, 2003 9:25 PM
The Barrier Between Dream and Reality by elemental123 Aug 8, 2003 8:12 PM
on the deity’s PIKE by jiffylube Aug 8, 2003 6:04 PM
yeah by um Aug 8, 2003 7:51 PM
Buddhism by bobloblaw Aug 8, 2003 5:57 PM
Brilliant by elemental123 Aug 8, 2003 8:16 PM
yes! by rain70 Aug 11, 2003 2:36 PM
trailer-camp lady macbeths by jiffylube Aug 8, 2003 5:14 PM
the first stanza by bobloblaw Aug 8, 2003 5:18 PM
yep by um Aug 8, 2003 7:54 PM
So I Offered you a Rainbow by bobloblaw Aug 8, 2003 5:02 PM
Corner Store by bobloblaw Aug 8, 2003 5:01 PM
any critics out there by bobloblaw Aug 8, 2003 6:46 PM
blending again by Vaselina Aug 8, 2003 11:29 AM
mmmm by all hail the stars Aug 8, 2003 2:58 PM
lighthouse by culinart Aug 8, 2003 9:56 AM
someone is lucky by Tulate Aug 8, 2003 10:39 AM
love by hippigrrl Aug 8, 2003 9:26 AM
every pot ... by Tulate Aug 8, 2003 10:39 AM
dark times by hippigrrl Aug 8, 2003 9:07 AM
poem by hippigrrl Aug 8, 2003 8:31 AM
Perfect picture of longing and confusion by elemental123 Aug 8, 2003 8:25 PM
poem by hippigrrl Aug 8, 2003 8:20 AM
poem by hippigrrl Aug 8, 2003 8:16 AM
Nihility by frontal-abstraction Aug 7, 2003 10:30 PM
Untitled (first time in history for a poem to be titled this) by bobloblaw Aug 7, 2003 10:30 PM
If my title had breasts, would you read this poem by bobloblaw Aug 7, 2003 10:49 PM
absolutely! by rain70 Aug 8, 2003 8:03 AM
The Trick (Exploits) by beatvibe Aug 7, 2003 8:42 PM
don't tell anyone but ... by Tulate Aug 8, 2003 10:43 AM
Thanks! by beatvibe Aug 8, 2003 12:59 PM
been there by Tulate Aug 11, 2003 5:00 AM
Friend by Boom tin dog Aug 7, 2003 6:25 PM
I believe this by frontal-abstraction Aug 8, 2003 8:33 AM
Reconquista by headburner Aug 7, 2003 5:50 PM
this... by rain70 Aug 8, 2003 8:08 AM
Shamelessly (of Athena)* by rain70 Aug 7, 2003 3:28 PM
reply... by headburner Aug 7, 2003 5:55 PM
hey by frontal-abstraction Aug 8, 2003 7:49 AM
bottlefedperson by bobloblaw Aug 8, 2003 5:10 PM
hm. yeh. by rain70 Aug 9, 2003 8:01 AM
bradamante... by Ambon Pereira Aug 9, 2003 2:38 AM
hey, ambon... by rain70 Aug 9, 2003 8:05 AM
some tear-dwops for Athena, now off Highway 45 by jiffylube Aug 9, 2003 10:46 AM
i am the poet who does not know when to let go by all hail the stars Aug 7, 2003 11:20 AM
It's a trick of the trade... by rain70 Aug 8, 2003 8:05 AM
ah, this trade by all hail the stars Aug 8, 2003 5:57 PM
yes, yes,... by bo Aug 9, 2003 11:20 PM
ah, that trade by all hail the stars Aug 11, 2003 2:20 PM
Wow by elemental123 Aug 8, 2003 8:30 PM
thanks by all hail the stars Aug 10, 2003 7:40 PM
Monolog on a Windy Night (Please Critique) by chrispoet Aug 7, 2003 10:14 AM
Cozy by Arcadia Aug 7, 2003 11:09 AM
Dobedobedo... by pottygok Aug 7, 2003 1:32 PM
Thanks for the suggestions by chrispoet Aug 13, 2003 11:50 AM
Depression Is Beautiful by Rhinehart Aug 7, 2003 5:47 AM
A relic by blagkaput Aug 7, 2003 12:15 AM
blank by onemoreman Aug 7, 2003 2:09 PM
a little bit a shit goes a long way(ed) by sonofthesun Aug 6, 2003 11:37 PM
loving god without thought of my own worth by sonofthesun Aug 6, 2003 11:17 PM
nice by commondivine Aug 7, 2003 7:32 AM
owe to swine PC by weezer Aug 6, 2003 8:01 PM
nothing by Dan Perz Aug 6, 2003 4:30 PM
I've decided that I hate myself. by Dan Perz Aug 6, 2003 4:47 PM
for e.e. cummings* by rain70 Aug 6, 2003 2:12 PM
Some good, inventive stuff by chrispoet Aug 6, 2003 2:40 PM
Hey , thanx! by rain70 Aug 7, 2003 8:16 AM
I will keep posting... by chrispoet Aug 7, 2003 10:05 AM
When in Doubt...Write it Down Fast by duluoz Aug 6, 2003 1:22 PM
contempt by weezer Aug 6, 2003 12:10 PM
God how trite by bananafish Aug 6, 2003 11:59 AM
ground rules? by bananafish Aug 6, 2003 11:33 PM
good day for banna fish by onemoreman Aug 7, 2003 1:59 PM
strange coming by bananafish Aug 7, 2003 11:04 PM
For those that wait, people watch, and walk away by Kristopher Aug 6, 2003 11:41 AM
Dig it by bananafish Aug 6, 2003 12:03 PM
... by Kristopher Aug 6, 2003 12:08 PM
:-) by bananafish Aug 6, 2003 12:22 PM
... by mute Aug 6, 2003 2:41 AM
Poets, a clerihew by blagkaput Aug 6, 2003 1:52 AM
humming by in_extremis Aug 6, 2003 1:51 AM
I think by rain70 Aug 6, 2003 6:48 AM
nice by jamelah Aug 6, 2003 7:27 AM
in an elevated year by mute Aug 6, 2003 1:49 AM
this by in_extremis Aug 6, 2003 1:56 AM
thanks by mute Aug 6, 2003 2:16 AM
The Nexus of the Poets Birth, or: Beating the Ocean With A Stick Once Again by Anvil Legal Aug 6, 2003 12:57 AM
very nice by in_extremis Aug 6, 2003 2:06 AM
engaging language by bobloblaw Aug 7, 2003 10:45 PM
blue/grey beams----please critique by jstro13 Aug 5, 2003 9:16 PM
It made me think of by Anvil Legal Aug 6, 2003 12:29 AM
i thought by in_extremis Aug 6, 2003 2:01 AM
And away we go... by pottygok Aug 7, 2003 1:17 PM
you might see him by commondivine Aug 5, 2003 8:06 PM
poem for the beat ("on the street but not of the street"_) by onemoreman Aug 5, 2003 8:14 PM
i by in_extremis Aug 6, 2003 2:09 AM
reply by commondivine Aug 7, 2003 7:25 AM
Visions 2 by ModernAncient Aug 5, 2003 5:57 PM
ah, these things I will never understand by all hail the stars Aug 5, 2003 5:32 PM
Good lines by chrispoet Aug 5, 2003 5:37 PM
I liked by Anvil Legal Aug 6, 2003 12:37 AM
thanks by all hail the stars Aug 7, 2003 11:05 AM
The other side of Lebron James-ville (Please Critique) by chrispoet Aug 5, 2003 5:28 PM
This... by Anvil Legal Aug 6, 2003 12:47 AM
very imagistic by all hail the stars Aug 6, 2003 4:41 PM
For the Grand Signore Kane. by Ambon Pereira Aug 5, 2003 12:10 PM
An Old Fool's Address... by Ambon Pereira Aug 5, 2003 12:02 PM
"Chi si firma è perduto" by Ambon Pereira Aug 5, 2003 11:57 AM
ambon... by jamelah Aug 5, 2003 8:24 PM
Extraordinairement bien écrit. by anonymous-one Aug 5, 2003 10:34 PM
am.....bon....!!!!!!!! by rain70 Aug 6, 2003 6:47 AM
Greenest Envy by Deez Aug 5, 2003 9:10 AM
really by frontal-abstraction Aug 8, 2003 8:09 AM
Second poem of yours I've read so far by chrispoet Oct 13, 2003 10:47 PM
ghost by rain70 Aug 5, 2003 6:55 AM
hello by Bennie Aug 5, 2003 8:42 AM
... by rain70 Aug 5, 2003 8:59 AM
the drift by celeste Aug 5, 2003 4:29 AM
Captivating... by rain70 Aug 5, 2003 6:46 AM
deep!!!! by pharroh Sep 20, 2003 9:37 PM
The Surrendered Chimpanzee by the mingo Aug 5, 2003 3:59 AM
hey ming! by rain70 Aug 6, 2003 6:49 AM
r by the mingo Aug 6, 2003 5:59 PM
hard to remember by firecracker Aug 4, 2003 10:03 PM
tossed from the window of her 44th floor apt,onto the side walk below by pharroh Aug 4, 2003 9:49 PM
fill me sweet poet by celeste Aug 5, 2003 3:43 AM
"Kinley's Shed" by foolish_Paeter Aug 4, 2003 9:06 PM
very organic by rain70 Aug 6, 2003 7:43 AM
thanks by foolish_Paeter Aug 7, 2003 3:07 PM
o yeh! by rain70 Aug 8, 2003 9:59 AM
lesson one by all hail the stars Aug 4, 2003 6:28 PM
pharroh says by pharroh Aug 4, 2003 10:09 PM
i hear the winds sing by celeste Aug 5, 2003 3:58 AM
thanks by all hail the stars Aug 7, 2003 1:22 PM
Visions 1 (pc) by ModernAncient Aug 4, 2003 6:21 PM
Introduction to the six stages. by AgnosticExtremist Aug 4, 2003 6:13 PM
the multitudes by rain70 Aug 4, 2003 2:28 PM
Hope by Rosie Aug 4, 2003 1:00 PM
(sigh) fairytale endings by all hail the stars Aug 4, 2003 4:43 PM
yes by Rosie Aug 7, 2003 9:42 PM
Hope by ~K Aug 4, 2003 5:32 PM
:) by Rosie Aug 7, 2003 9:39 PM
out of context by all hail the stars Aug 4, 2003 9:28 AM
Resinated Thoughts.... by DonnyDubsnack Aug 4, 2003 8:42 AM
resin haiku by B3jamboree Aug 4, 2003 9:25 AM
Alien-nation day by Arcadia Aug 4, 2003 9:37 AM
Mobius Strip by Will Burrows Aug 4, 2003 4:50 AM
tommorow by josh tonkin Aug 4, 2003 3:44 AM
sounds like by Anvil Legal Aug 6, 2003 12:21 AM
In our gardens by Hester Prynne Aug 4, 2003 3:37 AM
powerfull by josh tonkin Aug 4, 2003 3:55 AM
hey, hester by jamelah Aug 4, 2003 7:42 AM
comrade by celeste Aug 4, 2003 9:35 AM
i concur by all hail the stars Aug 4, 2003 9:49 AM
monsters withen and without pc by weezer Aug 3, 2003 11:01 PM
i by josh tonkin Aug 4, 2003 4:04 AM
NOW i FEEL by spaceboy381 Aug 3, 2003 10:54 PM
Just words by B3jamboree Aug 3, 2003 9:59 PM
Grandma... Feedback greatly appreciated by culinart Aug 3, 2003 7:09 PM
i think by jamelah Aug 4, 2003 7:52 AM
I'm no expert by Boom tin dog Aug 4, 2003 3:43 PM
Giant Steps by Boom tin dog Aug 4, 2003 3:46 PM
experts need not respond by culinart Aug 4, 2003 5:21 PM
jamelah by culinart Aug 4, 2003 4:59 PM
hey by jamelah Aug 4, 2003 6:29 PM
Aspire (pc) by ModernAncient Aug 3, 2003 6:57 PM
just by josh tonkin Aug 4, 2003 4:02 AM
Don't Misunderstand by Jinx Aug 3, 2003 6:35 PM
i by josh tonkin Aug 4, 2003 4:12 AM
I Grew My Limbs On a Ghost Train by Anvil Legal Aug 3, 2003 4:46 PM
i been ridin on a ghost train by um Aug 4, 2003 12:20 AM
What about by Anvil Legal Aug 6, 2003 12:24 AM
very strong by josh tonkin Aug 4, 2003 4:10 AM
staring contest by jamelah Aug 3, 2003 3:13 PM
or listen for the juking of a coming ice cream truck by jota Aug 3, 2003 3:44 PM
or listen for fireflies come sparkling by jamelah Aug 3, 2003 4:26 PM
new odem question by rain70 Aug 3, 2003 11:19 AM
yes by Deez Aug 5, 2003 8:54 AM
magdalene asking by rain70 Aug 3, 2003 11:07 AM
(the women by jamelah Aug 4, 2003 8:05 AM
Dreams by ~K Aug 4, 2003 5:23 PM
I Grew All My Smarts In The Gutter by Boom tin dog Aug 3, 2003 10:06 AM
Liked what by Anvil Legal Aug 3, 2003 4:41 PM
Thank you for the critique. by Boom tin dog Aug 4, 2003 2:31 PM
i liked this by josh tonkin Aug 4, 2003 4:09 AM
Thanx by Boom tin dog Aug 4, 2003 2:34 PM
gentle by celeste Aug 3, 2003 4:43 AM
nice by josh tonkin Aug 3, 2003 4:46 AM
I really like by blagkaput Aug 3, 2003 5:08 AM
swamp rats by celeste Aug 3, 2003 5:13 AM
ps by celeste Aug 3, 2003 5:17 AM
Well, by blagkaput Aug 3, 2003 5:22 AM
Seattle by blagkaput Aug 3, 2003 5:19 AM
no, minnesota by celeste Aug 3, 2003 5:20 AM
Don't know by blagkaput Aug 3, 2003 5:23 AM
and you by celeste Aug 3, 2003 5:26 AM
I'm in by blagkaput Aug 3, 2003 5:31 AM
shady by celeste Aug 3, 2003 6:04 AM
damn, girl! by rain70 Aug 3, 2003 11:10 AM
All The Good Pain I Create by Rhinehart Aug 3, 2003 4:29 AM
very powerfull by josh tonkin Aug 3, 2003 4:48 AM
we are locked.. by celeste Aug 3, 2003 5:11 AM
Writing by roberto Aug 2, 2003 9:42 PM
Oh... Nothing by Boom tin dog Aug 2, 2003 2:35 PM
no by um Aug 2, 2003 9:52 PM
What Happens by Dead burroughs Aug 2, 2003 2:25 PM
i liked by josh tonkin Aug 3, 2003 4:43 AM
The Lazy Poet's Work by Dead burroughs Aug 2, 2003 12:57 PM
wilder by Jo Jo Aug 2, 2003 11:50 AM
Broken by ~K Aug 2, 2003 9:39 AM
sheer by rain70 Aug 2, 2003 9:59 AM
well, by ~K Aug 4, 2003 3:53 PM
... by rain70 Aug 10, 2003 10:34 AM
the oracle at delphi... by celeste Aug 3, 2003 4:46 AM
... by ~K Aug 4, 2003 3:48 PM
life (in abecedarian) by rain70 Aug 2, 2003 7:58 AM
:) by untitledpoet Aug 2, 2003 10:21 AM
ha! cool! by rain70 Aug 2, 2003 10:34 AM
alpha bits by jamelah Aug 2, 2003 11:03 AM
neat! by rain70 Aug 2, 2003 11:08 AM
hey you by jamelah Aug 2, 2003 11:15 AM
sounds good! by rain70 Aug 2, 2003 11:31 AM
again by jamelah Aug 2, 2003 1:03 PM
didn't by um Aug 2, 2003 10:05 PM
heh by all hail the stars Aug 3, 2003 3:39 PM
Sensitivity by untitledpoet Aug 2, 2003 6:07 AM
oh, by rain70 Aug 2, 2003 8:58 AM
weather by untitledpoet Aug 2, 2003 10:04 AM
Unfolding Always by Rhinehart Aug 2, 2003 5:49 AM
CHASING...i dont know about this one.....its an odd analogy... by Jukebox Graduate Aug 1, 2003 7:20 PM
L-O-L!!! by seasevengreen Aug 1, 2003 8:58 PM
ahhh dear jukebox by bananafish Aug 6, 2003 11:30 AM
she told me to call her by all hail the stars Aug 1, 2003 6:53 PM
and by blagkaput Aug 3, 2003 3:42 AM
My last will and testament. by Kristopher Aug 1, 2003 6:44 PM
Yo Dood by duluoz Aug 1, 2003 7:17 PM
not balls by Kristopher Aug 1, 2003 9:09 PM
For you, the man I should be. by Kristopher Aug 1, 2003 5:50 PM
absolutely by Sylph Aug 2, 2003 5:27 AM
falling by celeste Aug 1, 2003 5:28 PM
Water Carries by duluoz Aug 1, 2003 2:00 PM
Instinct of a Man by duluoz Aug 1, 2003 1:53 PM


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